"I felt a small sting from the wound on my arm and looked down on the wrapping that Belle had put on the night before, I still couldn't belive that she had been so kind to me after I had scared her like that.
I went out on the balcony looked down on the courtyard and saw Belle, she was taking a walk with her horse Phillipe I think he is called.
I felt a warm feeling in my heart after looking at Belle for a while, I turned to my two servants that had joined me on the balcony and said:
I have never felt this way about anyone.
I want to do something for her, but what?
The clock Cogsworth answered like this
Well, there's the usual things: flowers... chocolates... promises you don't intend to keep...
but the candelabra Lumieré interupted him Ahh, no no. It has to be something very special.
Something that sparks her inter--wait a minute
He then went on to tell me that Belle had a big love for books which gave me an idea.
Later I had someone tell Belle to meet me in the hall outside a big room I never used, she came up to me with a smile on her lips but with a curious look in her eyes, I turned to her smiled and said
Belle, there's something I want to show you.
But first, you have to close your eyes. She looks at me questioningly. It's a surprise.
She close her eyes and I begin to lead her in the room, she asks if she can look but I say that it is to early.
I removed the curtains and when it was light enough I told her to open her eyes, She was amazed by what she saw, a library filled from floor to ceiling with different books.
I have never seen her happier than she was when I told her that the library was a gift and I realized that I had made something right.
Belle was so exited about all the books that I felt that it would be better to leave her alone for now, I went back to my room and looked at her in the magic mirror, then I put it down beside the belljar with the rose and I noticed another pedal falling from it down on the table."
To Be Contined
There what do you think? Does this style work or should I rewrite the whole thing?
