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Please read the other chapters and tell me whether this is any good or not. And if you don't like it, please give constructive critisicm.



The last of the dinner guests poured out of Joseph Warren's house. He didn't have dinner parties often because they usually resulted in fight's between two different people or parties with extremely different political views. Fortunately, their was only one, small conflict on whether America should be fighting communism in other coutries or not. Joeseph of course took the side of fighting communism, and so did a couple of others. But most of the other people...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 16
200 years later
Me and matt traveled the world and had a great time we even met some other covens like the irish coven,the romanian coven and the amazon coven we lived with them for 49 years and then took off cause it was getting kind of boring we went to paris and lived there for a cuppel off years then we went to new york,spain,egypt,germany,china,italy we even met the voltury they werent that nice! But kind of kreepy, specialy there hoods!but then we went back to london.
I got off the bed and got dressed matt was sitting on the couch reading a news paper and watching t.v
-what are...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter15
Tanya looked at me coldy,full of hate……like she wanted to rip my head off if she could.i couldn’t stand her looks so I just turned around and pulled matts hand to follow me I took off running I heard tanyas voice I think she said bitch under her breath I heard her saying other stuff but I tuned her out and ran faster I ran faster and faster thinking about edward I hated him so much but some part of me still loved him and deep down I knew the amount of love my heart held for him will never be the same with matt but I love matt so much and I want to spend my entire life with him...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 14
Bella pov
Me and matt went home and changed I took out the left ravioly out of the fridge and warmed it up for charlie I went upstaires and fiond matt lying on my bed reading romeo and juliet
-that's one of my faves!
I sat down beside him and read a few pages with him when I heard Charlie's cruiser coming near the house I got up and went down stairs matt followed me he kissed my forehead and went and sat on the couch turnning on the TV watching baseball ugh! I I don’t get that game and it reminds me of old times.
I ran up stairs and took romeo and juliet and went back down stairs in...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
I WANT TO THANK leisha4 FOR HELPING ME!
Chapter 13
6 months later
Edwards pov (from what happens in the last chapter)
I was so dipresed its been 6 months scince bellas missing I am sitting on the coutch watching nothing. my family was dipresed too so jaspered went out a lot not wanting to be in the same room as us he tried to cheer us up but it didn’t work rose was less concerned and acted like nothing had happen Emmett and Alice were mostly like me they loved Bella as their sister Emmett alwas made fun of her and made her blus, Alice was so dipressed more like me ,now she hated me less and tried...
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posted by OCFan123
Author's Note: Okay, so the plot of the story is probraly the most cliche plot ever. Bad boy likes good girl, fall in love, bad boy has secret, blah blah. However, I wrote this a REALLY long time ago, as when I wrote the most cliche stories ever. But, I decided to put the first chapter here. I'll only continue if people want me to. Hope you enjoy :) And any constructive critsicm is welcome!

1. Encounter

If people would ask about me, Elle Summons, they probably say "who?" Or if they did know me, or at least who I was, they probably would say "Biggest outsider ever" or "Loser of the Century"
Because...
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Skiro
“So your on the Track team?” Murphy said as he sat next to me.
“Yeah,I have been since I was a freshman. I liked it a lot but I'm worried about this new team.” I said thinking about the way they looked at me when I walked in. It was my hair,I shouldn't have braided it-too much just like always. “I don't think they take well to-” I started to say but Savannah sat down across from Murphy.
“What are yall talkin' about?” Savannah asked
“Skiro's on the Track team.” Murphy said excitedly
“oh really?” Savannah looked at me “And did Murphy tell you that he's going on...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
"My world is devoid of hope. It's a world where all I hear is the sound of outside voices and the screams of those I kill. Where all I see is the black surface of an ocean reflecting a moon that is always a crescent, and the scarlet river that tears me in two, the river filled with the blood I have spilled. The river may not be real, but at some point, reality and imagination merge together, so you can no longer discern them from one another. At some point, it just won't matter anymore," Taylor whispered, resting her forehead against the spotted mirror that hung in her room.

How strange that...
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posted by dancing_banana
I see everything very clear and I can sense things others cant. My family sees at a great gift sent to me from the senses spirit while I see it as a curse.

For centuries we lived next to earth closer to it then the moon living in peace with the humans until they saw us as a threat and started a war against us, at first we fought back but the humans refused to give up their battle. Our kind used to be very peaceful and most of us retreated to Jupiter. But not everyone, a little less then half of our ancestors stayed including my great great grandfather he stayed because he saw it as a right....
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Chapter 1: First day of school
Skiro
I woke up to my mom's voice saying “get up, Its your first day of school!”,as she woke me up from a nice dream. I opened my eyes and then waited for for my mom to leave the room. Then I got up in the room that was still new to me. I had only been in Spanish Fort a week so everything still looked strange. Reaching into my suitcase,I got out a pink T-shirt and jean shorts. After putting them on I went into the bathroom,peed,and then looked at myself in the full-length mirror. I smiled at the nice tan I got from going to the beach earlier that week. Seeing...
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Chapter Nineteen

Seeing Sean Connors there with a bottle of wine inside the bag he’s carrying, Jamie was about to closed the door and headed up the stairs to sleep but she didn’t. Instead of doing that, Jamie stared at Sean’s eyes and with a questionable tone in her voice and a thin line on her face that resembled her smile, she asked him, “Sean, what are you doing here?”

Holding the heavy canvas bag in his hand and holding it up to the brunette woman while saying to her, “Hi, Jamie and well, I went over to the liquor store on the way home to get myself a six-pack of beer because...
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posted by ashesandwine
Thanks to MISSLOVATOSTAR1 for the "snow white skin", to Emmett4ever for convincing me to keep it going and for believing in my writing:D But still you're better than me, hon!!! I love your story:D Be sure to check out Emmett4ever spot and her story... It's AWESOME!!! Thanks to everyone for the support and for the comments:D


"Daniel's POV"

My all life as been turned apart, but I have to believe that we will find a way to stay together... Our love is strong and I will not give up until I'm dead or she back in my arms!
I'll remember her full lips, her beautiful green eyes, her light brown hair...
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Chapter Seventeen

After she applied about two coats of Julie’s tube of black-brown mascara courtesy of Cover Girl, Jamie closed the tube and was about to give it back to Julie but when she saw her little sister, Julie was busy flirting with a man with short gray hair that somewhat looks like their father or of what Julie might saw the man in front of her, Anderson Cooper. Jamie was about to puke when she saw those two and making sure that she doesn’t do that, Jamie Thomas just slipped the small tube into her purse and after she threw the half-filled plastic cup of coffee into the wastebasket,...
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posted by nEvEr-tHe-sAme
A flock of raging crows quickly swifted down the eerie tree. Filling every possible spot on it's long dead branches. With the wind gushing, and the fall season coming to an end, the changing leaves have slowly made its way down the cold, wet grass. It had been a depressing day, the sun hiding behind the fluffy grey clouds, and the weather so cold and so warm at the same time... with rain slowly falling at ease, its the perfect time to mourn.


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Awakening slowly to the cold air I felt all around me, I slowly open my eyes. With my body feeling like it'll explode any second,...
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After Patrick left, I had a restless night. I couldn’t sleep feeling that I’m a prisoner in those four walls in my room. I couldn’t sit quietly all night, nor slept for a brief moment. After all, Patrick’s visit was quite unexpected, and I wasn’t ready to see him that day. Also what was weird about his visit, that during all these two weeks he didn’t pay, not even a brief visit, to Robert’s house.
Wandering around my room with my pajama on, didn’t help me to sleep, nor comforted my restless mind. As I didn’t see him during these two weeks, I thought that those feelings I...
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chapter 4:Robert helps me
The night was so lonely and scary. I was hoping that the sun rises fast, as I was very frightened. It finally happened after that dark and lonely night. I was very tired as I walked all night, but I was surprised when I found myself not very far from Ema’s house. I sat on my bag thinking of everything happened, but mostly thinking about the way I feel about Patrick. I was wondering what made me think that he loved me. Is it because he said I’m beautiful? Well lots of men told me that I’m beautiful but that doesn’t necessarily means that he is attracted to me....
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The early morning sun casts light into my dark room, i hate the light, just reminds me of what i wake up to every morning. The yelling from across the hallway, the creaking sound of my siblings bedroom doors opening and closing as they continue to refuse to exit their rooms.

Its not such a good life really, My family has so many issues that its hard to even sort out one without starting another,we never stop arguing, its like the essence of our life as a family. I don't particularly mind the main family issues, i guess its just that brother of mine.

He has a major issue with who i am, and what...
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posted by BellaSwan636
Shaun

Three months later, we were apparently "an item".

She had me twisted around her little finger. She could have made me jump in front of a bus, all that was needed was one look from her "love me, you know you want to" chocolate brown eyes.

I paid attention to her every move, her every word.

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When I first told her I loved her, I was expecting rejection, but she surprised me. She kissed me, and said she loved me too. The sun revolved around where she stood.

Nothing else mattered.
A little something that I wrote for English class but actually, it was my final and I got 100% on it!! Enjoy!!

The Disappearance of Claire Daniels

I don’t know where my daughter went. One moment, I was holding Claire’s little hand while doing some window shopping but a few seconds later, I spotted something at a clothing store window and was into it and wondering if the store have any chance that they have it in my size that I didn’t noticed that I didn’t felt little Claire Daniels’s hand slipping away from mine.

When I wanted to go into the store and see if they got that little black...
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posted by BuffyFaithFan1
HAZED
BuffyFaithfan1

INTRODUCTION...
You have just entered a world. A world like no other! This world is not like TWILIGHT or House Of Night or HARRY POTTER or any other world you are thinking of right about now. This world is way different. Where only a good bunch of people in the population live. The world has been divided into six parts: the WaterLands, the EarthLands, the AirLands, the FireLands, the ExtraLands, and the NoOneZone. Only one hundred people make up our world. And only 16.666666 people live inside each part. It sounds pretty depressing, I know, but this is how this world is! The...
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