notes I don't have a name for the story yet...
my quote marks on my keyboard don't work so I use { }<--instead
the time period is the rennessonce time(?)
the point of view changes alot
narrator POV
Zane Caldwell entered the ball room waring a simple black suit. he had no interest in being there at all and he was only there out of cutesy not knowing it would change his life.
Zane POV
I was at possibly the biggest and most extravagant party I had ever been to. There was beautiful women dressed in brightly colored dresses and tight corsets. All the men were wearing formal suits and tuxedos. Also another important feature to this grand party was the huge banquet at the far end of the ball room. I was headed strait for it. There was no other reason for me to be here. This was an aristocrat party and I was a humble reporter only invited here because I made a powerful person look good. Once I had my plate covered with food I sat in a chair and watched the rich dance.
I was just about bored when the door opened. There was a girl standing there and she leaned against the frame. I was surprised that no one else noticed her;she stuck out like a sore thumb. She wasn't wearing a dress in fact she barely wore anything at all- her cloths were so dirty and torn. I walked closer toward the door and was ashamed that I hadn't noticed sooner-her arm was bleeding. Running the rest of the way to her I noticed other things as well:her body was covered with bruises and cuts.
{What hap-} I started to ask but then she fainted. I caught her before she hit the ground. I looked around for assistance but everyone else was having too much fun to stop and help. I picked her up, noting she was heavy with muscles. With her I I went as fast as I could to a carriage and told the driver to take us to the doctors. {wake up! Please wake up!} I I yelled and shuck her but she had lost too much blood. When we arrived the doctors imminently took care of her. I was extremely worried about her. What if she died?! I wouldn't be able to live whit myself! even though I had never known her I had taken it upon myself to try and save her and if she died! Well what good am I if I cant save one stranger?!
A doctor came out, saw my worried face and smiled. {She'll be okay. She's tired and sleeping now. Can you tell us more about her?}
{No,not really. I don't know her at all. She showed up at a party I was at,probably looking for help.}
{And you helped her! You must be a very kind citizen.}
me a kind citizen? I liked the idea of that! I was always the person who interviewed the good citizen not being me. I'm the story teller not in the story.
{well since shes fine you can go home or back to your party} the doctor said
{No I want to talk to her} I was back to my reporting mood. I wanted to know everything :what happened? Did she fall or did someone or something attack her?
{Let er sleep tonight you can speak wit er tomorrow}
{promise? Don't let er leave until I come tomorrow} I said desperately {Ill try to come early.}
{okay I promise she will not leave}
{thank you so much!} I said and went home.
The next day I was at the doctors at ten o'clock in the morning.
{you can speak with her but remember she is still very weak.} the doctor said.
I went into the room and saw she was already sitting up in her bed. She was wearing a gown and her arm was bandaged up. her face was very pail.
{good morning} I said
{hello} she smiled {are you the one who saved me?}
{yes, I am, My name is Zane Caldwell. I'm so glad your okay. What is your name?}
{Ava Zelene}
{that's nice. What happened to you?} I was too curious and couldn't wast time on small talk.
{I-I cant remember. The last thing I knew I was running and trying to find help and nothing before t hat. Its all very blurry.}
Ava POV
That was a complete lie. I can remember everything but I wasn't about to tell him or anyone what really happened. Because I was a werewolf my whole life, my existence, was to be kept secret from all humanity.
{oh well that's too bad...If your amnesia gos away you have to tell me.} Zane said looking so disappointed I wished I could tell him or at least come up with a better lie. I had no imagination though and besides that I didn't want many people knowing my name.
Zane POV
{so you don't have anywhere to o do you?} I asked
{No I have nowhere anymore} she said sadly looking down. Nowhere? Anymore? This arose even more questions in my mind.
my quote marks on my keyboard don't work so I use { }<--instead
the time period is the rennessonce time(?)
the point of view changes alot
narrator POV
Zane Caldwell entered the ball room waring a simple black suit. he had no interest in being there at all and he was only there out of cutesy not knowing it would change his life.
Zane POV
I was at possibly the biggest and most extravagant party I had ever been to. There was beautiful women dressed in brightly colored dresses and tight corsets. All the men were wearing formal suits and tuxedos. Also another important feature to this grand party was the huge banquet at the far end of the ball room. I was headed strait for it. There was no other reason for me to be here. This was an aristocrat party and I was a humble reporter only invited here because I made a powerful person look good. Once I had my plate covered with food I sat in a chair and watched the rich dance.
I was just about bored when the door opened. There was a girl standing there and she leaned against the frame. I was surprised that no one else noticed her;she stuck out like a sore thumb. She wasn't wearing a dress in fact she barely wore anything at all- her cloths were so dirty and torn. I walked closer toward the door and was ashamed that I hadn't noticed sooner-her arm was bleeding. Running the rest of the way to her I noticed other things as well:her body was covered with bruises and cuts.
{What hap-} I started to ask but then she fainted. I caught her before she hit the ground. I looked around for assistance but everyone else was having too much fun to stop and help. I picked her up, noting she was heavy with muscles. With her I I went as fast as I could to a carriage and told the driver to take us to the doctors. {wake up! Please wake up!} I I yelled and shuck her but she had lost too much blood. When we arrived the doctors imminently took care of her. I was extremely worried about her. What if she died?! I wouldn't be able to live whit myself! even though I had never known her I had taken it upon myself to try and save her and if she died! Well what good am I if I cant save one stranger?!
A doctor came out, saw my worried face and smiled. {She'll be okay. She's tired and sleeping now. Can you tell us more about her?}
{No,not really. I don't know her at all. She showed up at a party I was at,probably looking for help.}
{And you helped her! You must be a very kind citizen.}
me a kind citizen? I liked the idea of that! I was always the person who interviewed the good citizen not being me. I'm the story teller not in the story.
{well since shes fine you can go home or back to your party} the doctor said
{No I want to talk to her} I was back to my reporting mood. I wanted to know everything :what happened? Did she fall or did someone or something attack her?
{Let er sleep tonight you can speak wit er tomorrow}
{promise? Don't let er leave until I come tomorrow} I said desperately {Ill try to come early.}
{okay I promise she will not leave}
{thank you so much!} I said and went home.
The next day I was at the doctors at ten o'clock in the morning.
{you can speak with her but remember she is still very weak.} the doctor said.
I went into the room and saw she was already sitting up in her bed. She was wearing a gown and her arm was bandaged up. her face was very pail.
{good morning} I said
{hello} she smiled {are you the one who saved me?}
{yes, I am, My name is Zane Caldwell. I'm so glad your okay. What is your name?}
{Ava Zelene}
{that's nice. What happened to you?} I was too curious and couldn't wast time on small talk.
{I-I cant remember. The last thing I knew I was running and trying to find help and nothing before t hat. Its all very blurry.}
Ava POV
That was a complete lie. I can remember everything but I wasn't about to tell him or anyone what really happened. Because I was a werewolf my whole life, my existence, was to be kept secret from all humanity.
{oh well that's too bad...If your amnesia gos away you have to tell me.} Zane said looking so disappointed I wished I could tell him or at least come up with a better lie. I had no imagination though and besides that I didn't want many people knowing my name.
Zane POV
{so you don't have anywhere to o do you?} I asked
{No I have nowhere anymore} she said sadly looking down. Nowhere? Anymore? This arose even more questions in my mind.
