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posted by joe-edwardfan
(end of chapter 6)
Bella pov
The pain was was to much, I couldn’t understand what was happening , my neck was burning , the burning took over my body it changed minute by minuet it grew it rose I wanted to scream this pain out but that probable isn’t a good option ppl will think I'm weak! I clenched my teeth together wishing I never existed suddenly the burning changed! it left my neck! I was relived that the pain had lessen but a new pain started in my chest my heart was was ripping its way out of my chest the sound of my heart filled my ears it was getting on my nerves the sound continued for hours or days ,maybe years? Then finally my heart stopped! I felt stronger better then I heard light footsteps coming towards me
I opened my eyes every thing was bright I could hear the high way………….
-Bella?
I stood up and looked at him he was so hot! And beautiful!
-wow!
-are you ok? Do you need anything?
I shook my head and walked closer to him I saw every line of his face he had a scar on his neck when I saw it I gasped!
-got that when I wanted to protect Suzy
-does it hurt?
-it did! but know I I don’t even feel it
He said and looked at me
-do you feel thirsty?
-no
-so why are you acting weird?
-it just…to much to take in…………………..you know???
-yes at first your confused. I was to
he said comforting patting my arm wow! now he didn’t felt cold ,he felt kind of warm
-do you think I have a power?
I asked him wishing I had one
-I dont know I discovered my power years after I was created
-what's your power?
-um I can teleport
Wow teleport that's so cool
-like you could teleport every where?
-yes like I teleported us here from forks
-where are we?
I asked curios
-in London
-wow I’ve never been to London before!
We talked for an hour about every thing! It was weird that I could think so fast!
Then he asked
-Bella you should be thirsty you know? Its not normal! Every new born I knew even me when they ere changed they were crazy………….thirsty …I even forgot you are a new born!
-is that wrong?
I asked offended
-yes! its not normal! Aren’t you thirsty?
Now that he mentioned it I could feel a burning in my thro…
-now that you mentioned it,it does but I could ignore it
-you can ignore it!! Wow ! you know I'm nearly 1500 years old and when I smell blood its hard to control my thirst but I could control it because I have practiced! Your just 2 hours old!
-maybe that's my power
I said
He looked at me fore 6/4 seconds and said
-may be it is if you put it that way but you should hunt its important it gives you strength to live
-ok what are we hunting?
-humans
-humans!!!! Why?
-because there yummy and mouth watering and don’t worry these humans are kind of dead…
-you drink dead humans blood! ugh!
-no! no! they are not dead I just said that to comfort you
-so you lied to me!
Oooh I hate liars so much how can he do………………….
-I didn’t lie look I hunt old people and the ones that are going to die or some hikers…..
-well that's better! so you don’t hunt animals?
-no! they taste awful!
-really they are that bad?
-you could taste it fore your self!
-ooookay
-so lets go and hunt!
-kay! but were are we going?
-To the forest there should be some hikers there and animals if you like!
-lets go
I could run so fast we raced when we got to the jungle there was no sent of humans so I wanted to taste animal blood I followed a dears sent and caught it poor thing couldn’t run faster then I sank my teeth in its neck it was warm and good but it stinked! I just liked the warmth but it wasn’t pleasant matt was right!
-how was your dear?
-ugh!you were right it tasted awful I just liked the warmth.
-Told you!
Then he paused
-what do you smell?
I took in the air around Mmmmmmmmmm
-hikers
I liked my lips suddenly I was so thirsty when he saw me like and that he said
-so go for it!
I followed my instincts and saw two hikers one of them looked 60 and the other looked younger maybe45 or 50 I lunched for the older one and saw matt lunching for the younger one
When I sank my teeth in neck a frenzy beginned the blood was warm and DELICIOS! It just suited me well! When I was done I let go of him and faced matt he was already done and starring at me
-what?
-you were so fascinating!

-glad that I amused you
I hissed
-so do you want more or your done?
-I'm perched!
-so lets go!
-could you teleport us there?
I wanted to know how it was
-sure take my hand and close your eyes
I took he's hand and closed my eyes when I opened them we were at the cottage!
-WOW!
-yeah its pretty good!
-yeah its pretty cool not good!
(chapter 7)
2 weeks later
I was sitting on the couch thinking about Charlie and now that I could control my thirst I could go and visit him.
I was still wearing the clothes of the night that matt changed me I needed to go and shop I was thinking of a black sleeve less dress once I saw rosalie wearing I wanted it so bad then I saw matt coming in the room
-hey!
-hey.
-when did you go shoping?i wanted to come too!
I was cunfused I didn’t go shopping
-I didn’t go shoping
-really!? So how did you get that dress?
-wich dress?
I asked confused again
-the black dress its behind you!
I turned around and saw the black dress I was thinking about how it got here?!
-that's funny I was just thinking about this dress I wanted to to go and get it!
-really?
-yeah
-you were thinking about it and it just apeared?
-yeah I think so
-that's cool you have 3 gifts!!! Wow!
-3 gifts?
-yeah you could control your self ,um, no one can harm you,do you remmember the girl we saw in the jungel? She could taiser everyone! But somw how she couldn’t taiser you! That's your second gift and your third gift when you want something it apears out of no where!
-well if you put it that way,I have 3 gifts! Yay! But is that normal?
-none of this is normal Bella!
-I know! You know what I mean!
-yes I know, I have a friend he has 2 gifts he can shift into difrent animals and move objects with his mind
-cool!
-yeah I know but I havent seen him in 98 years after he found his mate they both disapeard! And I was alone again
He sighed and I hugged him
-you have me!
I said trying to cheer him up
-yes I have you
He said my cheering worked and he smiled at me then I remmemberd something
-I was woundering I want to visit my father do you want to come with me?
I asked pleading
-sure I will, but are you sure? I mean…………..
I cut him of
-I'm posetive I want to see him and say good bye
-why good bye?
-we don’t age my eyes are red my skin is white and cold, isnt that enough?
-your right, sorry
-its OK!
I said I loved his face when he said sorry he looked like an angel and his eyes glowed and he looked like one too so anyone would………………………..
-day dreaming again?
-yeah, I was thinking you look like an angel when your sorry!
-well isnt that sweet!
-so I'm going to dress up! And be ready to live,so get ready,k?
-oooky
I grabbed my dress and went to the room I put it on and consentrated on a black converse then I opend my eyes and it was on the bed!omfg this is so cool I can have anything I want! I was so happy I was dancing around and clapping yay this is so so cool! I put on my shoes and remmembered I needed contacts so I wount freak charlie out! I closed my eyes and it was ther on the bed I put them on and came out of the room matt was sitting on the couch waiting for me
-wow you look amazing! Speacialy your eyes.
-thanks
If I was human I would have blushed
I took his hand and closed my eyes when I opened them we were at the forest I ran to my house and found Charlie's cruser parked out side he was talking on the phone with Billy I waited out side but he didn’t hang up so I got tiered and held matts hand for support and rang the bell charlie still didn’t hang up the phone and came to answer the door………………………………..
Hehehe!wait 2 see what happens nxt! :)
posted by para-scence
"Good mornin'," Micah said as he arrived at the park; our usual meeting place. I stopped the swing just in time before I nearly kicked him in the face. We laughed.

"Sorry," I giggled. "Hey." He smiled and took a seat in the swing next to me. My cheeks flushed as I thought over yesterday. I just had to know. "Um, Micah? What'd you want to tell me yesterday? I mean, before I had to leave." He furrowed his eyebrows, then frowned.

"Huh? Oh... It was nothing."

"Ok," I nodded.

We soon lost track of time, and were almost late for school. Since we couldn't take the long way, we had to take the faster way,...
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posted by r260897
now standing on last day of year
i look back and see smiles and tears
somedays it was new too
somedays our mailboxes were filled with greetings
greetings of arrival of 01/01/2011
day by day we got used to
night by night we got close
so many starts so many ends
so many left so many got friends
learnt so much taught so much
learnt to smile learnt to give
learnt to die learnt to live
with loads of hugs and kisses
bye bye 2011
next time we'll say
"damn our heart still misses
THE 2011"
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And honey coloured skin.

He glanced in my direction
That made me blush,
He winked from over the road
And I laughed in spite of myself.
He grinned more widely
Quickly glanced around,
Shoved his phone in his pocket
And made his way towards.

Before I even knew it
He was saying 'hey',
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Not knowing what to say.
He didn't seem to mind
In fact his dimples raised,
He started talking smoothly
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That's a good question I've been asking since God knows when,
I'm a teenager,proudly
Being a teenager isn't that bad, believe me
It isn't like Christmas in for many years again...7 years,
7 good years,
Imagine...,
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Thinking,
Asking yourself the same question,#"How could I've been so stupid?"
Stupid? that doesn't qualify it,
Its more like a gigantic fool,
Sorry the bible told me not to use that word on humans,
I guess stupid would do then,
But I'm happy not to be stupid then'
Like I said it takes the grace of God,
What do I want in life?,
To be able to "dwell in the house of the Lord all the days of my life, to behold the beauty of the Lord and to en-quire in His temple"- Psalm 27:4
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