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posted by sweetpea92
    CHAPTER ONE
    Ugh. I groaned internally as I woke up. My head was pounding, and broken images were swirling around behind my eyelids. I had no idea where I was, or how I had gotten here. I refused to open my eyes and find out, or give any other sign that consciousness had found its way back to me again. Not knowing exactly where and when I was was a dangerous business for me. Very dangerous.
    You see, the last thing I remember before the blackness hit, is that I was running…
    My legs were on fire. They burned like nothing I had ever felt before as they pumped against the forest floor. They plunged me deeper and deeper into the thick trees. It kind of reminded me of a scene form Snow White I felt like the trees were reaching out to grab me and hold me there till I was caught. Ha. With my luck they probably were. I pulled in another shallow gasping breath as I turned and ran to the left. I had to get out of here!
    The sirens were steadily growing louder. I felt as if they were blasting away in my ears. The world was no longer a safe place for people like me; it hadn’t been for a long time now. So I lived a life on the run, rather than be killed.     
    As I ran, out of nowhere, a sharp pain struck me in the back of the head blinding me. Then the blackness hit pulling me down….
    So here I was now, lying pathetically, who knows where? The only things I could do to find out that wouldn’t show signs of life were feel and listen. The low melodic hum and cackle of flames was close by. The heat seemed closest to my right side. It felt like I was lying on cold dirt. My arms were bound to my sides with a sticky, plasticy material, most likely duct tape. My legs were strung together in the same manner.
    This all seemed very odd. If the no-longer-human, heartless, drones had captured me, I wouldn’t be outside. I knew exactly where I would be if it was them who had me.
     I would be strapped to an operating table. Receiving my first “upgrades”. Being turned from someone to something.     
The realization that I was outside, brought on a wave of premature hope. Hope that the reason I was outside was that I had been captured by people like me. Real people. I tried to smother that hope as quickly as I could. The fact that I was outside didn’t necessarily mean the best. It could just mean humans that the drones kept around as slaves- rather than change them into one of them and have to treat them as an equal- had captured me. After all humans had to sleep, ergo they had to make camp in the process of bringing me in to the life snatchers.
    So now, I was faced with a 50/50 chance. My life possibly could have come to and end, where my heart and feelings ceased to exist, and are replaced by something more efficient, machinery. On the other hand I could have been captured by humans who thought I was the latest and greatest, most human looking addition, to the evil robot family. In which case, I was also dead. On one hand, there was death, on the other, more death.
Great!
    I chose option C, this involved living. That was the important part. The least likely, but still, being a sunshiny ray of life and goodness, it was still my favorite! Whose wouldn’t it be? How exactly I was supposed to achieve this though was beyond me.     
    Suddenly a sound that had escaped me before rudely interrupted my ponderings. The sound of soft breathing landed gently against my ears. I was instantly on edge. The breathing was extremely close. Close enough that I could feel it like feathers on my face. It was a sensation that had me torn between blinding hope and the blackest of despair and fear.
    A rough hand was placed on my forehead. I guessed checking for body heat, a feature usually absent in clunking metal machines. The hand of my inspector (lets call him Steve shall we?) pulled away quickly with a soft gasp that was quickly muffled with a slight cough. Obviously the warmth, “Steve’s” hand had felt was not expected. All together, a good sign knowing that any metallic-spawn-of-the-devil’s- servant would have known I was human.
    I didn’t realize “Steve” was leaving my side until I heard his breath slowly distancing, his feet didn’t make any kind of sound against the dirt as he left. I decided it was time to look upon my captor(s) and surroundings. I cracked open one of my eyelids with a deliberate slowness that would put snails to shame. My searching eye first revealed to me that it was still dark or at least maybe dark again. It also noted that I was still in the woods. That could be a good thing; a girl like me was not beyond hiding behind or up a tree.
    My seeking green orb finally rested upon “Steve” who was in fact a guy. He looked to be about my age, which was either 16 or 17. I had lost count. I quickly closed my eye as his head of shaggy black hair turned in my direction.
     I heard a shuffle of clothes, and again the breathing got closer. A sharp pain jolted into my side as it was kicked by an unforgiving boot. “Get up! You worthless piece of machinery. I know you aren’t broken. I saw you looking around” a rough furious voice commanded. “I want some answers.”
    Oh, Crap! This would not go well. I pinched my face together then slowly, cautiously, opened my right eye to stare up at my captor. A fierce scowl distorted his features into an awful mask of pure loathing. His black eyes held the strangest tint of blue as they bored into mine. I let a sort of grimace/grin cross my face as I opened my other eye.
    “Hi, Um…about------ OWWW!” I screeched. He had kicked me again. “Would ya stop that? I’m trying to answer you but you’re making it kinda hard with all the kicking and glaring. Geeze!” I huffed.
    I watched as he took a step back form me and crossed his arms. His face gave nothing away but I could tell he was surprised by how human my words sounded. If he hadn’t at least subconsciously realized I must not be a robo-brain, he wouldn’t have stepped back. He would still take a lot of convincing though.
    “Thanks! Like I was about to say though Steve--” he cut me off.
“Who’s Steve?” He snarled.
“Uhh…” oops “Well uh what’s your name?” I asked.
“None of your business.” came his retort.
I let out a long sigh. This was going to take a while. “Well, then for the time being I bestow upon you the name Steve. Use it well my young friend,” I said holding back a chuckle. He just continued to glare unamused. Tough crowd. “Anyways… Steve, my name,” telling him this was a great leap of faith “is Del.” I snuck another peek at him and still his strange eyes told me nothing.
    I shifted my gaze to the nearby fire. “I really hope you know the risk I’m taking telling you that.” I said. “I’m pretty convinced though that you are still human,” I sucked in a deep breath ‘and I really, really need you to believe the truth about me, I still am too!” The words rushed from my mouth, and I braced myself for a kick form the boot that I was surprised to find, did not come.
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posted by Weasel1999
I. The Nursery

Ember lived in her nursery for the next few months, only being let out occasionally to go to the toilet. All she saw were the four walls around her but it wasn’t all bad.
The room was painted a pretty sky-blue and the carpet was thick, fluffy and a deep midnight blue. There was a bed and a huge white wardrobe with the most beautiful, old-fashioned clothes inside.
Rich velvets cloaks, soft fur stoles, bright silk dresses, every item of clothing needed to make a young lady of society look beautiful.
But Ember was not a young lady of society living in Victorian times. She was a...
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posted by Insight357
    “Damien, I’m sorry,” his smooth voice said in my ear. I couldn’t face him. He had kicked me out, why would he be here? To apologize? It was a nice gesture, but it crippled me just to see him.
    “I don’t believe you,” my voice was shaking. Tears kept streaming down my face.
    “Listen,” he crept down the side of my face.
    “No, you listen to me,” I said turning over to face him. Our faces were all of three inches apart. “You killed me! Now you expect to come in here, apologize, and I’ll...
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posted by Insight357
I was outside. It was hot and sunny. About summer time, I was guessing. Beside of me set an old room. It was in ruins. I studied it for a moment, and then it hit me.
    The room was the one I had been in when I put the knife through my heart. I walked over to it, and ran my hand over the charred remains.
    It started to rain, sprinkling at first, and then it became harder. I took shelter in the room, half of the roof still stood.
    The sun was in the eastern part of the sky, and it was raining in the west. I saw a rainbow emerging...
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posted by ZekiYuro
Most of us don't know what life will be like in the future,or even when we will be a year from now,but it's fun to speculate.So,what might the world be like in the year 3000(or Y3K as it's now called)?Here's what one expert suggests:

Q:What forms will our bodies have in Y3K?
A:We will be bigger and we'll need more food.The average adult male might weigh about 100 kilos.People will live for hundreds of years,and will have computers in their brains.

Q:Computers in their brains!What do you mean?
A:We will soon be able to repair the human brain,and finally replace it completely.In the future you might...
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posted by BellaSwan636
Shaun

I'm not sure why it had to be me. If I'm really honest with you, I hated myself.

I was fourteen when my parents died. I had no family left, so I became the unwanted foster kid.

I didn't want to have to think, or care about anything. I wanted to die.

I wanted to be an inconvenience to the world. I wanted them to know how much I hated them for having their own happy lives. I shunned everyone.

I became the loner.

I look out of place, somehow. I'm the kid who's taller than the other sophomores by a head. The kid with coal black eyes.

The foster parents I was living with now tried. They tried,...
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posted by ToastedRabbits
Someone once told me,

"Being a writer is like being a prostitute, really. At first you're only doing it for yourself, then you decide to tell a few friends, let them in on the action, then you decide to let a couple strangers in, pretty soon you're welcoming the entire world."

Such a very accurate quote. When I heard this, I was at a very formal luncheon with a few kids from my journalism class in which we produced the school's newspaper: The Jagged Edge. It was an awards ceremony for individual work as well as our newspaper as a whole to be recognized. Granted, it was a local newspaper that...
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posted by ballaholic
“Dream as if you’ll live forever. Live as if you’ll die today.”


I’m so sorry, Jimmy. I know I’m letting you down. You wanted me to dream big, live big, and be great. I’ve done none of that. I’ve settled for ordinary. I’ve given up on my dreams. I’ve all but stopped living. I don’t know how it happened. Time’s just been flying by, and I don’t know how the days have managed to slip past me so many times without my notice. Before I know it, I’ll be twenty-four, the age you were at your death. Who knows if I’ll get much more than that, or if I’ll even get that far?...
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posted by jeweleryfan11
It has been 10 years since she learned how to be a real warrior. She had straight, long, golden hair instead of curly goldilocks like when she was 8. She had blue eyes that could be the ocean. And her skin was so fair she could be snow white. Except Snow White wasn’t like Allyson. She was more rough than she was. She finally needed to know. “ Master light. I must speak to my parents,” she said. “You cannot,” master light said. “ Why not?,” Allyson, now asked. “Red star. The prophecy has come. You must know. All of the youngins must know once they turn 18. But first you must...
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posted by Cries_Bloodlova
Part one
The hurt
The phone line was cut. Her last words where her own name. Iza Reffile. I sat there and put my head in my hands. A hand patted my back there was an explosion some where off in the distance. I believe she had a little time left and I hope we found her soon.
“It’s going to be fine. She is going to be fine.” Someone said to me.” I nodded and get up.
I cannot believe I’m losing the one thing I have left besides my baby which Katniss was protecting. We all dismiss from the phone and I walk up to Katniss.
“Alright Katniss I think she would want me to have the baby now you...
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Chapter 1:
let's give this a go:) I would love to know what you guys think:) comment please!<3

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My name is Nicole Mason, I'm a Sophomore at Bethal Heights High School. Me and my boyfriend, or should i say ex boyfriend dated since freshman year, and lately i just didn't know what to do with myself. I never had that many friends, but after i started dating Zayn Malik almost every single girl hated my guts. I gave up everything for him and after a year of dating i go over to his house only to find his tounge down Melanie Karras throat.
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I was sitting in my hotel room minding my own business reading a book when all of a sudden the glass window doors flew open. The bed room was dimly lit and the sun had completely gone down leaving no sunlight to light the room.

I fell off my bed leaving my bed in between me and the window. I would have gotten up to shut the window doors but that was before a figure entered the opening.

There was enough of a shadow cast over the body that you couldn't make out any features. But I could tell that it was a man. He stood with a sturdy pose his legs locked in place, his arms on his hips, his head...
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posted by ttmrktmnrfn0830
It's so hard to forget
So late at night,
The darkest memory
That leaves me in fright

The color of crimson,
Is scary yet releasing.
Adrenaline builds since then,
And paranoia's increasing

Evening falls,
Ravens call,
And I see
Darkness over me

Don't walk alone
Don't be lost
I'm chilled to the bone
And that's to a cost.

Blood so warm
Words so cold
Get it over with!
This is getting old.

Midnight falls,
Ravens call,
And I see
Darkness overwhelming me

It's so hazy after that,
That's all I can see,
The short, very vague
Dark memory.
I’m sorry I cant tell you really what going on.
    It wasn’t meant to hurt.
    For either of us.
    I guess it did.

    I panicked. Shit, I did.
    I was happy but I was scared. How can happiness and fear exist at the same time, every time?
    I wanted it bad. Wanted you badly.
    For a long time.
    When I got to know about what you felt, what you told, I was happy. Maybe after a long time.
    After a really,...
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