Writing Article: Elipse

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Elipse

posted by ihavOTD

I breathed in and out slowly. This was horrid. Running. I spat at the word. I despised running.

Joseph jogged up to me. "You okay Kristen?"
"Yeah, just give me a minute."
"Hah! You always end up like this. Maybe you should quit track?"
"You know I can't! If I do, then I have to do Trigonometry. Ugh. That's worse."
"Right..."
I stood up and we walked in silence. His lithe step did not match mine. I had a clumsy, trip over step. I needed somebody to teach me how to walk right.
"Oof." I had tripped, and landed on my side. How? I have no idea. Normal people land on their face or back. Not me!

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Hidden Secret: Chapter 13

posted by DxCFan123

I came back to reality when she mentioned coming home. "N-N-No it's fine, I can go home by myself" I said to her
"Come on! It's OK with me!" she said and pulled me out of the hospital and forced me to tell her the way home. I told her to stop when we arrived in the cemetary. "My house it just down there" I said, pointing down the street to some houses.
"No one has lived in that house for years, Sam. They're still all for sale, too." she said, glaring at me through her slit eyes. She turned around and pushed me through the large gates causing me to almost fall over a headstone. Suprisingly, I...

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I can't think of anything...

posted by AbbieCoast

The truth is, writer's block comes in many different shapes and forms, not just the famous "I can't think of anything." Sometimes we feel like we cannot write anything good, or sometimes we have so many ideas we can't decide what to write.

So for those who have the lesser known syndromes, I bid you welcome.

Now, if you have the “I can’t think of anything worth writing about,” syndrome, you’re wrong.

I know how that sounds. Just stick with me.

You may be thinking about the most worthless la-de-da in the world. Boy meets girl. They marry and have a child. Everyone’s a Mary Sue. I’m not...

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Bare Bone's chapter 1 part 1

posted by Lore_Master

Our story start's out the Ilse of Siege a tranquil world with eastern sea's inhabited by small village's filled with tiny rabbit like creature's with the sea being so calm and so clear you could see straight to the bottom of it's depth's and skies being so blue, so bright that it would bring tear's to you're eye's, to the western desert's so dry it would shrivel anything that would dare enter it's trecherous sand's leaveing only one race that could inhabit it's deadly region being as slinder as a snake they tend to make their house's under large rock's some time's so many gather together they...

Running, Vomiting, Crying, Thinking, Screaming

posted by WildCherryWolf

The bus shudders on the rough dirt road. Us living in the middle of nowhere, it's kinda hard to get to our house via bus. I wipe away a tear, I wasn't crying, just a random tear. I lean forward and tell the bus monitor to let me off here. She gives me a look, but yells and the bus driver to stop. I collect my heavy bags, and walk out. I start running. I hear the bus turn around, but I just keep running. My bags clang against me, knocking me over several times. I just get up and keep on running. I kneel down, getting dirt all over my trousers. I vomit into the dirt, my lunch of salad and an...

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In The Eyes Of Death: Chapter 5

posted by wolfclan121

"Now who's gonna take care of Mike!" Jane screamed at the top of her voice. "Now how am I suppose to marry Dave! Now how am I suppose to become an archaeologist!" "Mike, marriage, archaeology?!" I said, confused. "Oh, I can't explain now! I just wish I listened to David." She sighed. "Don't beat yourself up. David has the gift, you can still talk to him." She forced a smile. "Gift?" Dave whispered as he entered the room. "More like a curse." "David, i'm so sorry I didn't listen! But I just never thought-" "Save it." He butted in. "Everyone I've ever loved ends up dead. I should have seen it coming." "But you did! You tried to save my life and I was to stupid and selfish to care." "Janet." He sighed. "I don't think I can talk to you anymore. Never again." She stared at him, her face appalled. "What are you saying?!" "I'm saying seeing you, like this, it just, it just breaks my heart."

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A Little Too Curious (part 1)

posted by noahnstar1616

I was running towards the beach because it was a full moon tonight. Great. On the day of all days, tonight had to a full moon. Today was my boyfriend's birthday and I promised him last week that I would spend the his entire birthday with him. That was before I got scratched by that, that...I don't even know what it was. But now I know I should listen to my Grandma more often. Here's how it began.
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I was just a normal, average 16 year old teenager with an awesome boyfriend and two amazing best friends. I lived with my grandma...

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The Edge of Mental Health-Chapter 4: Dina Speaks Out

posted by sawfan13

This place is totally different from how Bea told me how is was. Freedom? I feel like a lab rat and everything is limited. They watch you do everything, and all the pills that they give you, you have to take them and they watch you take them.Yet, Janice doesn't take them. I've seen her little tricks, and I must say for myself that it's pretty brilliant how she does it. They watch her take them, but then after they leave, she takes them out of her mouth, puts them in her pockets, and then around nighttime or so, she'll trade with another girl for pills that Janice wants. This goes against...

Modern Day Princess Ch. 1

posted by para-scence

I laid on my comfy bed, with my eyes closed, listening to music. This was my escape. This is what kept me in this world. Music. Without it, life just wouldn't be fair. The awesome guitar solo, sick bass, kick-ass drums, and meaningful lyrics soothe me. I took a deep breath, ready to lose myself, when there was a knock on the door.

"What?" I called over the music. It opened; it was my twin sister, Asteria. The only thing identical about us is our eyes, which are ice blue. Her pale blond hair reflected the light pouring in from the hallway, while my room was dimly lit. She was all dressed up,...

SOUL Experiment #0012 Chapter 2

posted by Skitty_Love

"Mmm this tea is delicious. Many thanks Soul." Professor Rhinestone said charmingly. I quickly nodded. "Yes! Will we be starting training soon?" He looked up at me, is fuchsia colored bangs covering his shinning eyes. "Very well. We need to you to be top Taoloid, after all." He said, I showed him a little smile. "Yes!"

"Hyaaaaaaa!" I balanced the long bamboo pole on the tip of my index finger. "Aye, this is not gymnastics Soul, this is real. This is battle. Come at me." He held his pole in front of him in a dynamic position. "Uh...I.." His leery glare caught me. "Yes.. Hyaaaaaaaaaa!" I sprinted...

The Gregindorf Prophecies - Prolog

posted by PenelopeWolf1

Prolog;
The Gregindorf Prophecies

"Marinsa," Whispered Yanzo Jamleaf. "Where are you hiding?" Yanzo was looking for his friend and leader Marinsa Jackson. She had been in hiding for so long that Yanzo didnt know where she might be.
Marisa had hair so white it looked like a cloud, and eyes so green it looked like a forest. She was small but was fierce.
Yanzo was the opposite; He had black shaggy hair, blue eyes that looked like electric and was tall.
Yanzo heard a crack of leaves and a twig. He turned and saw Marinsa walking towards him.
"Hello my old friend," She said with a small smile.
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Psychoanalysis: Chapter 7

posted by Insight357

I saw black sneakers with purple shoestrings. Then tight black pants. Next a draping black shirt, with small hands covered by fingerless, leather gloves. A cross choker sat at the base of her neck. My eyes then fell upon hers. Those eyes, those piercing blue eyes, somewhat similar to my own. The black hair teased slightly, with choppy, side bangs, covering the outer corner of her right eye. It was the girl, from the hallway. The one who thanked me. I gasped softly.
“Hello, Lucy,” I said to her.
“Hello,” she said in the same small voice....

Fairy Tale Chapter 2

posted by bunnibunnibaby

"It's nice here. I don't know many people though..." Victor brushed his hair back, smiling again. "Well, by tomorrow, all of the kids at school will wanna be your friend." "Oh..." Jade turned slightly to see the raven haired boy deep in thought. "What is it?" "Hn? Oh, it's nothing. Oh, we're here." The blonde looked up ahead and saw her house. "Really? Cause my house is right there." She pointed, and Victor burst out laughing. "Haha-I live right next to you then..." The blonde looked at the house next to hers. It seemed normal. A little old fashioned, but definitely normal. "Cool! Well, I'll see you tomorrow then?" "Yeah..." The onyx eyed boy took Jade's hand, kissed it lightly, then walked off. "What was that?"

Hidden Power-Part One, The Two Odd Visitors

posted by woofbark

Somewhere in the universe, a planet was dying.

The planet was Esphera, Earth's twin. Here lived people like on earth, who wore pants, shirts and dresses; they went to school and had emotions;they had their own currency. There were no cars here, but they had instead hovercrafts- spade-shaped vehicles that floated in the air. Most people on the planet were too poor to buy a hovercraft, one of the most expenisve items in Esphera.

But the thing that sets Earth and Esphera apart is the children.

Children on Esphera are all born with a special power-like invisibility-that vanishes at age 16. After...

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Dangerous Love Chapter Two

posted by M169

I stole fifty dollers out of my dads wallet. Okay...I'll pay it back I swear! Maybe he won't notice it's gone....

I used the money to go to a movie with my friend. I mean, if my parents won't willing let me, of course this is going to happen. They should be expecting it.

I walk into the movie theater, and wait for my friend. I wait for ten minutes before I get a text message saying that they won't show up...I turn around to head to the exit and I crash into a man. I take no notice of his apperence. I look him stright in the eyes. "Oh! Sorry Miss!" He stuttered. "It's okay....what movie are...

The girl who cried wolf chapter 6

posted by greenstergirl

My attempt to draw Danny....It is horrible

Her scream was high pitched. The kind where you get a shiver down your back. The kind when someone scrapes their nails on a chalk board. The kind where the person screaming is in utter pain. But gladly it wasn't all the way like that.

You would think the water elementals would be more careful around the giant sea snake. It's one of the many creatures that live in our vally's lake. Some of the water elementals are even fish or sea snake shape shifters. Thats why I laughed when one of them screamed at the giant serpent.

Trixi yelled at me for my rude behavior and we ran towards the snake. From...

Through Their Eyes Chapter 1

posted by iluvPrinceMJ213

Keaira: I was an early bird for one reason and one reason only sunrises and they early flow of the river in the morning. The river was a place where you could dunk your feet into its cool waters and it’d sound as if it were whispering your name or maybe it was just my brother playing a trick on me. You had plenty to do by the river. Swim in its waters, draw things in the wet dirt, or stare at the lilies floating on the surface. I remember scaring my parents to death each morning when they woke up and me, Kaden, Marshall, and my little 3 year old brother Johnny were...

Kiely's new secret chapter 1

posted by melcu

"what should we do today Teki?" Kiely asked her tiny dog. Knowing that the dog couldn't posibly respond in any other way than wagging her tail or bark and that is exactly what the dog did.
Kiely sat next to her chihuahua and ran her hand down her back feeling her soft black and brown fur."your a good baby girl" she crooned at the little puppy.
"Lets go to the park and then we could go to fred's,"Kiely finally desided Teki was still wagging her tail. Kiely made her way to the bathroom to freshen up and take a shower. She got out of the shower and headed toward the mirror to see if she had any...

A troulbed soul (the dark)

posted by neonstars

When I woke up July 15,2010 I had no idea what i was a bout to do heres my story:
I woke up to the sound of my alarm clock and it said 5am. Oh crap,Im gonna be late fr work! I said as i stretched my jeans on.I got dresed and ran down stairs.I opend my liitle sisters door to see if she was aslepp and as usaul she was.She was only 12 and i was 17.
I grabbed my keys and I ran out the door,I started my Red jeep and drove down the rocky drive way.10 minutes later ...I parked my car in the parking lot of SUzi Surf Shop.I saw my 39 year old boss suzie turining on the lights.I enterd and a cowoker name...

Holding on Chapter 1 : Family and Friends

posted by TomboyWriter

If there’s one thing I cared about more than my freedom it was my family. I loved my dad more than anyone though it’s just hard not to love my dad with his kind gentle nature. His eyes were big like a puppies somewhat and were a deep dark chocolate brown framed by long dark eyelashes and dark eye brows that matched his charcoal black hair that had a thick consistency but a silky feel. His skin was a medium olive color and though many didn’t find him handsome I did. He was everything in a father and in myself. He was real shy and my Uncle Drew as I called him though he wasn’t my real...

Date Night*sequel to prom night* (Chapter Two:Party)

posted by moolah

Date Night
By: moolah
Chapter Two: Party
Haley sat at Anne’s feet and had Joey in her lap. Suddenly Haley’s iphone vibrated in her pocket. She picked it up and opened the text from Sean.
Sean- Ware r u? I’m @ home. Come home quick!
Haley sighed and texted him back.
Haley- I’m @ Anne’s house. Why what’s rong?
Haley sighed and got up off the ground. “Sorry. I have to go, Anne.” She said and hugged the kids and left. When she got home the house was full of chaos. “Oh my god, Sean! It’s a mess!!!” Haley screamed over the kids. “I know, honey.” He...