Writing Article: an angel in hell

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posted by delta117

the summer night was making me sweet thru my trench coat. I was with the other coullge studnets they had made fun of my fear of demons if only they new what my life was then they to would fear the beast but i dot fear them i hate them its commoin like dogs and cats demons and angels evn half angels will allways be enemies. we got to the hole were the suicidel children where suposed to have jumped down to kill themselves. "So jack" nathan began "is this what u were so terrified of " and his lackies all laughed under my coat i felt the hilt of my cross daggers not reading to defend my name but to kill the beasts that lived down the hole nathan and his posse were the only ones who know were the hole was at. "suicide slide" it was callled.i spoke in my angelc smooth voice only know it was gravely from the demonioc activity down the slide. " u might want to go" "ha." one of of nathans "friends" said "like we r going to let u chien out" and pulled sum spulunking gear from apack and passed it a round. once every one had the hooks and holsters on i spoke again " then this cave will be ur tomb" and with that with none of the gear on i pulled the coat i was wearing of to show my knifes and two swords and jumped down suicide slide. i was in all black suit with six daggers in the shap of crosses 3 were pure gold and 3 were pure silverand i had two siver and gold swords on my back i pulled the swords out when i fell and hit bottom un harmed for a normal human would be screaming in agoany but since i wasnt i was chanting the owrds of angels my voice angelic this time but after that it returned to its gravely town i heard gasps when they saw i had survied and my suit was white athen looked astonished then i smiled a smile that made him grunt with a false non surprised look at the others and fliped the light on his helmet on i was not were ing a buisness suit i was wereing a black ops suit which i got in the ninties i was really 350 years old give or take a few. after a while i heard the growling the 12 young boys and girls stopped dead in there tracks when they saw it i raised my sword ready to strike when it lunged. it was hideous it had the head of a baby with no eyes a scorpion tail for its tongue a snakes body with centipead legs an averge demon it lunged i swung my twin blades and it shriek with pain causeing screams and cries of fright behind me they started to run bad mistake out of the the demon poured blood black as night i could see in the dark just so u know then more beasts jst like it came i could not kill alll of them at once so i yelled to the terrified 20 year olds behind me to stop moviing but they didnt listen. soon the demons were on them three were dead beforew i could stop the little monsters and they were much faster then the humans but i few more words of the old angel s made them stoped them from the spill of the humans blood and made them see i was half angel i reseathed my swords and pulled out my knifes 2 of them one gold one silver i chanted sum more and then thru them into the hellish writhering bodies and the y burst into white flames then it was quit i could here crying not many humans were left if more then one. i saw her she had blood all over herbody and a large cut on her stomach i lifted he r out of the tunnel and used my heavenly magic to heal her and made her think that this was all a bad dream and erased her merory of nathan and his friends and sent her to a schoo laway from this one how i did this so fast i had wings in no time my mentor and friend in heaven came down "rizoel!" isaid my voice back to my angelic tone "long time no see i have found a demon tunnel it was opened a few years agoby the demons luring in sum young humans and it seems that they have been multplying and not just recing havic. "hmm." rizoel grunted in his equaly angelic voice " that is strange and we will be shutting it down imedietly but i have a question jack do u ever stop by just to chat?" "been busy sorry." i chuckled

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Transition, Ch.1 (be niceee!)

posted by MerlinLemon

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~ Beginning ~

Me and my best friend, Leo, both work at the same dumb pizza shop mostly every night of the week, we both get paid the same amount and work the same number of hours. The only difference – I do the deliveries.
I ride this crappy little flat-tyred around the neighbourhood – which, by the way, is so small I memorised it by the age of seven – delivering pizza after pizza. Sometimes I wonder how such a small town can order so many pizzas. I deliver about twenty each Thursday night… to the same houses. Still, they know me so well the tips are considerably higher.
But moving...

Faith: The Girl Near The Pond at Midnight *story version* Ch1

posted by sawfan13

Summertime, June, 16th, 1934
Detectives surrounding the area of the lake. A dead body was found. A young girl's body. The young girl was Anna Hawkes, nine years old, blond hair, green eyes. My best friend.......ex best friend. Let's just say, this little girl did not play nice with me and left me forgotten. She's lucky. Lucky, lucky, lucky, lucky. The detectives found her and not me. Well, I'm sorta used to it since I've always known to be forgotten and alone. Now, I'm dead, forgotten, alone, wet, and sunk deep into the water. How did Little Miss Anna Hawkes die? Hehe, me of course. She drowned...

My True Love Final Chapter. Nessies POV

posted by Twilightsauce

HEY! SORRY I HAVEN’T POSTED ANYTHING IN SO LONG, IT’S BEEN LIKE A YEAR SINCE MY LAST POST. I DON’T REALLY HAVE ANY EXCUSES BUT DON’T WORRY I’M BACK NOW! ANYWAY THIS WILL BE THE LAST CHAPTER IN THE MY TRUE LOVE SERIES- I’M SO SAD! ALTHOUGH I LOVE IT VERY MUCH AND HAVE REALLY ENJOYED WRITING IT, I FEEL THAT I HAVE EXHAUSTED NESSIE’S STORY NOW. BUT I WILL BE WRITING ANOTHER, TWILIGHT RELATED SERIES WHETHER IT WILL BE ABOUT NESSIE OR NOT, I DON’T KNOW. ANYWAY THANKS FOR STICKING WITH ME FOR SO LONG AND I KNOW THIS HAS BEEN A VERY LONG MESSAGE BUT IF ANY OF YOU ARE GOOD AT ART OR...

Evil, Inc-a Guide to Making the Villain (please comment)

posted by woofbark

Hey you!
Yes, you!
Are you an aspiring writer on fanpop?
Most likely you are, or you wouldn't be reading this! (ahem) Anyway, this is a guide to all things evil- feel free to skip around for ideas!

PART 1: THE VILLAIN
Every story has a villain. Which one is right for you? We writers have an extensive collection of all villains imaginable! Look down for a few of them.

HARMLESS VILLAIN: Usually used in comedy, a harmless villain creates overly complex plans to commit petty crimes, like stealing a watch or ding-dong ditching. For extra laughs, have the hero/heroine treat the villain as a serious threat....

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Are we right for eachother? Chapter 2

posted by jacob_lover5253

Nick looked around. "Hmmm. How 'bout we play the Wii. I bet I can bet you." I smiled. "You're on!" We played bowling and he beat me. We played golf and I beat him. My mom came in. "Karleigh, come here for a minute." "Coming." I yelled. "Nick, just keep playing. You can take my turns if you need to." "Mmhmm." I walked into the kitchen. "I'm taking you and your sisters to the movies. We are going to see Toys Story 3!" "Yay." I said lamely. I walked away. "What was that all about?" Nick asked. "My mom wants to take me and the girls to go see Toys Story 3. I-" Nick interrupted. "I wanna go see...

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The Hunt for the Thirteenth, Chapter One

posted by booklover13

Chapter One
Ashelyn (Ash):

The first thought I had waking up in the morning was, today’s finally the day I’ve been waiting for all my life.
Pushing away my thoughts, I rolled over on my bed, and wiped the sweat off my brow. Pushing aside the velvet curtain that covered the hole in the wall that was my window, I squinted in the early morning light.
It was mid-September, and the heat was something awful. Even now, not even eight hours into the day, I could see the sun beating down on the ground. Dirt from the paths swirled in the air, making it...

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Poem: Lonely Girl

posted by emmett

Lonely Girl

So peaceful in sleep she lies
Brown hair spilled across her pillow
I can picture her beautiful eyes
Looking into her dreams…

She looks like she’s not listening
But really she’s deep in thought
Remembering forgotten memories
When she lived life as she ought

Stolen kisses in the night
Laughing with her friends
Little did she know back then
This is where it all would end

Her heart is filled with regret
Always looking back
She wishes she would just forget
And find happiness once more

I don’t think she’ll ever forget you
But for now there’s joy on her face
She keeps reminding herself
It’s not a race, to be the first to find your place

Now as the sun goes down
She’ll say a prayer
Wishing perhaps for you
But really, life’s not that fair
There’s nothing this Lonely Girl can do

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The Sisters: Chapter 1: Secrets Hold A Family Together.

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Have you been pining for a show in which beautiful, young sisters bitch about each other and look for ways to knife each other in the back? If you answered yes to either question, then the sisters is for you.

Whoever wishes to keep a secret must hide the fact that he possesses one.

I sat there quietly listening to the sobs of an unfamiliar voice. “You can’t do that!” The woman’s voice screeched, and then there was a slight chuckle, almost as if the sobbing was amusing to the person. “Oh yes I can, and I just have” The voice who I now knew was young man’s voice. I looked back down...

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Broken Dreams Epilogue

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

There isn't a lot left to say. I guess happy endings can happen, but the struggle to get there isn't always that straightforward.

It wasn't that easy. And I wouldn't wish it was. Because that made it worth it.

I glance down at my hand for the umpteenth time that day. The small circular stone set on a silver band.

I'm twenty six...so that's seven years. Seven years since...

I never have and never will regret any of that.

"Serena, are you even listening to me?!" Kayla shrieks from the other side of the dressing room door. "Come on! You've been in there, what, fifteen minutes now?"

She graduated...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 34

posted by BellaSwan636

Ashleigh

We got to go the hospital. A nice lady wearing white stuff gave us lollipops, and we got to play teaparties. There was another girl there, and she was five. I wanna be five. But I'm turning four in, um, I think mommy said a month? I dunno. But you have to be four before you can be five, I think. Why can't I just skip it?

Anyways, now there is a big girl living in the guest room. She says her name is Kayla. She has shiny goldish hair. Like Jamie's mom, but with brownish stripes in it. It's long. Like if she sits down, she almost sits on it. My hair is only halfway as long.

My mommy gets...

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My unfinsished story (no title yet) chapter 2

posted by coolcatsRus123

Chapter two: Secret Lab
The doors of the elevator swung open. The three walked in slowly curious on what was in that room.”This place is really dusty” Kylie said. She got her special clean handkerchief and dusted off an area in the dirty room. Under the clump of dirt she dusted off, was a big bright blue button. The button said “Lab generator”. “What’s that?” asked Alia. “Well, only one way to find out” Daniel said. He pushed the button and the room began shaking. “Whats-up-with-you-and-pushing-buttons” asked kylie as she began shaking with the room.
The room stopped shaking....

Ugh! Stupid Rockstar!

posted by karah1999

Willow May Rains. 15 Yrs Old!:)

Tik Tok on the clock,but the party don't stop!!Tik Tok!"

I covered my ears so I wouldn't hear the rest of that horrible song.People must be tone deaf to actually like it.

I watch as my sister went to turn off her alarm clock.That's when I remembered. Today we were going to see that horrible band in concert because my bestfriend got tickets.My sister likes them too.The band name is Snakebite.I think they are a horrible band that are wanna be screamo/rock popstars.They suck ass.

Let me introduce myself.

I'm Willow May Rains,your regular fifteen year old girl.I love screamo and rock bands.Real screamo/rock...

Diferent and Alone (a poem)

posted by Rae-Ash

Do you know what it's like
To be in this world alone?
To be so different
That no one understands?

As we wish upon the stars
For the very first time
We stand there
Like time is ours
In a world
That's speeding by

Do you know what it's like
To be in this world alone?
To be so different
That no one understands?

So here we stand
In the wake of our dreams
Hoping and wishing
For a day
That they can come true
Hoping for a world
Where I can fit

Do you know what it's like
To be in this world alone?
To be so different
That no one understands?

Now I sit here all alone
In a world where I just don't fit
I sit here alone
Never knowing...

War for the freedom chapter 1

posted by juliet98

In the year 4125 the Earth was still turning on itself. Apparently everything was the same as it was two thausand years ago. But it wasn't so. The democracy we got fighting was distroied by a man. After 15 years of wars, in 4025 Cyrus defeated free people and he established the tyranny. The whole world was controlled and the freedom dind't exist anymore. Everyone lost trust in everything, in love, in courage, in God. Most of people didn't know that there was a prophecy. It said that the humanity had to pass through a century of pain and fear to realize how important freedom was. But then in...

Chapter 1 of My New Story (I Dont Have a Name Yet...)

posted by PonygirlCurtis7

My breath came out in a white, frozen cloud before me and smelled heavily of my mint gum. My footsteps’ sounds were wet on the sidewalk. It had rained just before I left the bookstore and, just by my luck, someone stole my car (boy, was my dad going to have a cow when he hears that…), so I had to walk all the way home in the wet night, all by myself. I prayed silently that I would be able to find my way because I was new in town and barely knew where everything was. I had to use a crappy GPS to find the bookstore. I was just lucky I found it.
The town was Cassidy....

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True Of The Unforgotten Past: Chapter 4 kidnap For The Deal

posted by MadagascarGirl

After Skipper and Katherine told the story to Kowalski and Rico, they went to theirs beds. But when penguins went inside to their HQ, they noticed Private wasn't in his bunk. The TV was turned on.
"Hello peng-you-ins" said a familiar voice. Penguins lookes at the TV.
"Blowhole!" said Skipper in angry.
"I kidnaped someone, do you who?" asked Blowhole and he laughed evilly.
"Private..."said Skipper "If you hurt him I'll kill you Blowhole!"
"Oh, I'm scared" said Blowhole and laughed again "If you want save him, you must come here, alone, without your team"
"I'll came"
"But Skipper..." said Kowalski.
"You...

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Sneak Peak of My Book/Novel "Remembering You"--Chapter 2

posted by PonygirlCurtis7

Chapter 2
Three Months Earlier

There was not much bright where I was. Just dull, cheap lamp-light. Ya know? The cheap light that bulbs give off. Not until I stepped out into the golden hue of this evening’s sunset could I get a good picture with my eyes. I had been in a bar with my friends or, as it’s usually called, my gang. It wasn’t a real rough bar, the one I had been in. there were a couple fights every so often, but not much. Gavin, the owner, was good about that. He didn’t want the fuzz showing up all the time, so when he wanted a fight to stop, it stopped. He could persuade almost...

short murder story wroten by me SECOND CHAPTER

posted by juliet98

the first part: www.fanpop.com/spots/true-writers/articles/171410/titl...ter

SECOND CHAPTER
Paul Dock was bent with the nose that pratically touch the floor. He studying the crime scene, as usual. He isn't convinced that the assassin is Elvira Gorrige. It would be too obvius. He doesn't find nothing intresting on the stage, so he goes behind of that.
-Can i help you sir, are you sick?- asks a female voice, seeing the detective with the nose on the floor.
-Oh, no thank you i'm good, i'm detective Dock, i was looking for something here.- replies Dock with a smile on his face
-may i ask you some question...

American and British English

posted by ZekiYuro

If you've learnt British English and you're travelling in the States,or if you've learnt American English and you're travelling in Britain,you'll notice some differences.An obvious difference is the accent,but most travellers find that they don't have too many problems with this.There are some grammatical differences,but they shoudn't make it difficult to understand people,or to communicate.That leaves differences in vocabulary,which can cause misunderstandings.Sometimes the difference is only the spelling,for example,in British English 'center','colour',and 'travelled',and in American English 'centre','color',and 'traveled'.But sometimes the word is completely different in British and American English,and it's good idea to be prepared.

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The Holy Robbery (oneshot)

posted by thetscfan121

Please comment, I need the comments, writers feed themselves from comments, so if you don't want to kill me of starvation, please comment.

Lots of bad things happen these days. War, violence, corruption, people confusing SFX for SEX, drugs, death, car accidents, etc,etc,etc. Peter knew of them and said that popular line in puertorrican youth language, "ME IMPORTA UN BICHO!!!" Literally translated, "I care a dick." That's the way things are and that's the way I tell you. Well, Peter had one point against him: he was a catholic. Confirmed, conbined and sealed in paper, he was supposed to be the...