Writing Article: Fire's Shadow -proluage

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posted by snootygirl50701

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Fire's Shadow -proluage
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" Evergrace,world of belligerence ,we are proud to announce that the queen's child has arrived! Princess Grace! " A tall skinny black suited man shouted over tears from the people screaming of joy.
The man stepped down as king Chase stepped up to the steps ready to speak with his deep voice. His blue eyes splashed across the crowd as his hair slanted to one side.
" with the baby here,I must say God bless to our newcomer. My first child is a beautiful child with weight of 3.31 pounds. She is healthy and you may see the baby!"king chase smiled.
"My baby Gracie is the greatest thing yet and were proud to pronounce the after party to you villagers!" Queen rose shrilled showing a pink blanket and the cutest baby with milky Carmel tan skin.
Queen Rose held the baby as the crowd cheered but she could see Irisac,the fire beast,holding out for the baby and Rose held Gracie tighter.

17 years later

~spoiler alert~

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icuSTALKER Nice, snooty!!!!:D I like it!!:D

snootygirl50701 Thanks,I'm working on chapter one. Its a lot longer!!!

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CosmoLuvsTails Sonic Fan-fic?

snootygirl50701 no,that's just my fan art of what someone can draw in the story....but I drew it!!!!

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Laughing heals the soul

posted by problematic124

Laughing heals the soul. What makes you laugh? Were all different. As a writer in training I'm experimenting on the"fun factor". Down the page are some funny stuff and I'd like to know which one makes you laugh the most. If you found a funny pic please post it and please comment on the pictures.
Now like I've said we all have different tastes and it all is on you. Laughing is a very fun excersise.And these pictures are funny (or at least to me). Hold on to your socks lady and gentlemen it's time to get your laugh on.
Please comment!!!
Now let's have some laughs!

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The Prom

posted by OfficialKate

Humphrey sad :(

Kate: I remember this day like it was yesterday when I was a young pup at wolf school there was a prom I made a huge mistake....

It was a warm spring evening the sunset was beautiful Humphrey looked at all the wolves dancing happily he frowned. He went over to his "date" Josephine. "Jossphine I need you to dance like you've never danced before I need to let Kate know I'm the one for her!" Josephine frowned and laughed. "Yeah well shes and alpha your an omega." "Well than why am I with you, your an alpha." Humphrey scolded. "We are a fake couple your impressing Kate I'm impressing Skeeter." Josephine...

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Bare Bone's chapter 1 part 3

posted by Lore_Master

Our hero fell to his knee's "Wha....what....no all my work and research.....gone!" he said as he clutched his chest gasping for air, as day turned to night he sat there with an empty feeling eating him from the inside, he looked up at the star's "Why me why do.... why the fuck does this happen to me!!!" the hero yelled as he started pounding the ground violently, his whole body filled with rage and sadness knowing all of his work was just wasted he began to shed tear's it seemed the more he hit the ground the further it plunged him into dark thought's soon thinking of resorting to evil necromancy...

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Jiko's past school life

posted by samuraibond005

Jiko went to a small school in a small town in Missouri where everybody was the same in likes, dislikes, and even very similar in personality, well, everyone but her and her parents. Jiko was just fine for a while, making all A grades in every subject with little effort, but then was the day someone pissed her off. Jiko had carried a knife in her sleeve, something most people there honestly didn't think much of, she wasn't the only one who did it, even some of the teachers, did it, but Jiko did something that most people don't dare to do, she kept a revolver in her backpack. Someone had called...

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Sometimes its easier

posted by AshleyA-Brizzle

Sometimes its Easier to inore the truth

to forget about everything

to sit in a closet and hide forever

Sometimes its Easier, to blame yourself

To think its your falt

To show no emotion

Sometimes It's easier to keep everything inside

to not let anyone know

to hide everything.

To me, Its easier to say something

To talk

to cry

Its easier to Feel Emotions

Anger, rage, Sadness,

but not fear

Fear is my enemey

He wants to take over my mind

Keep me locked up inside.

I'm tired of being scared

I'm tired of being locked in my own world

I'm tired of being a prisoner.

I will not be afraid,

I will not Let him Win

Getting By Ch. 20

posted by para-scence

"Do you have asthma?" the gym teacher asked me. My thoughts flickered to Emery. He had asthma, right? Breathlessly, I nodded. "Go get your inhaler. Emery, go with her." Emery helped get me up, and we went inside, as I was taking my last breaths.

"Give me.." I rasped. "Your inhaler."

"What?" Emery asked, unbelieving.

"Get me your inhaler," I said through my teeth. My head started to spin. Quickly, Emery ran into the boys' locker room. A couple moments later, he returned with his inhaler, and handed it to me. I pumped some of it into my mouth, and thankfully it helped a bit. I sat there on the floor...

Getting By Ch. 18

posted by para-scence

"Shelby? Are you ok? Kirsten said you've been acting weird lately..." Paige said, coming into my room. I laid back on my bed, closing my eyes so she couldn't see them.

"I'm fine," I sighed. "Just leave me alone." There was a long silence.

"...Has school gotten better?" I nodded, more than necessary. "Make any new friends?"

"Yep..." I said, opening my eyes. I stared at the ceiling, then closed them again and sighed. A fire started to burn in my chest. Why couldn't she just leave me alone? She was nosy and bossy.

"Have you done your chores yet?"

"No!" I whined. I pushed my palms against my eyes,...

Getting By Ch. 17

posted by para-scence

"I think it's working," Carissa smiled at me. I sat between her and Rigby on the bench. Already, I felt great. My heart was racing, and I almost couldn't sit still. After a few moments though, my eyes started to hurt. "They're just dilating," Carissa told me. "Here." She took off her sunglasses and handed them to me. I noticed her eyes seemed sunken in, and there were gray circles underneath her eyes. She blew her cigarette smoke in my direction.

"Thanks," I said energetically. My mind was racing, I could barely spit out the words.

"Just don't tell anyone," Jordan said on the other side of...

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Stare [short story]

posted by RiverIce

I sit there in my seat
when the teacher sees me
I stare at her
"do your work,"
she says.
I look at her with anger
I look at my math page
The problems stare at me
the bell rings
"Ahhh!" I yell in anger.
people stare at me
I stare at them back.
they run out of the class room
I sit there until the teacher finally sees me.
"you may be dismissed," she says.
I still sit there.
"go," she says.
I stare at her.
She stares at me.
We stare.
"go... don't make me send you to detention,"
I stare at her
she looks at me.
"Ok, you asked for it, Richard, Detention,"
I get up.
Still staring.
I leave and walk to the office.
I stare at the...

We Were Dared [slash]

posted by Insight357

“Hey, bitches!” Espen laughed throwing open the door. His blonde hair fell into his eyes. “Come on in,” he stepped aside and let us all pass. One by one, we all trailed into the crowded, alcohol smelling living room.
Music was softly playing behind everyone’s chatter. Boys and girls danced with and groped one another. In a corner, some students I recognized sat in a group smoking. A few boys stood in the kitchen, cups of liquor in their hands.
“Tatum, Nia, and I are going with Shayde and Lear to pick a game, you coming?” Celeste asked...

THE Exiled; prologue

posted by nick_cross

The Exiled
Story setting:
Era: future
Character setting: witch and wizards, vampires, werewolves, phoenix man, humans
Setting: earth, United States
World setting: future, world war??, nations combine to make 3 empires: wizard empire, empire of man, world empire.
PROLOGUE:
For centuries we lived harmoniously; we had two different worlds. Two very different worlds. Their world was lived freely and without secrecy. In our world, that’s what it was all about, secrecy. Don’t make too much noise, don’t seem so noticeable, and most important, under no circumstances, don’t ever get caught. For a while...

Abandoned chapter 2

posted by Seastar4374

I don't know what to think of waking up practicially every hour except for this: 'Why the hell does this happen?!' I was seariously exhausted and I hardly slept. Apperiently the twins are hourly alarm clocks or something because thats what it feels like. Once they fell asleep once again I got my chance. I layed down on the couch and yawned. I only had 12 hours of sleep,oh an hourly basis one hour per every two. I finally fell asleep yet again. They were quiet for two hours this time up until the boy started crying. I groaned and stood up exuhausted. I walk to him. "Whtas wrong baby? Huh?"...

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My Crazy Bounty Hunter Life

posted by tigerseye43

I got up to the sound of glass crashing to the floor. I ran to my little kitchen to see a man in a black ski mask and overalls standing in my kitchen. I ran at him to throw a punch or two but when I extended my arm to hit him, he grabbed my arm and stabbed my with a knife.As the knife cut through my skin I screamed in pain, with a few cuss words to go along with it. Then as I fell to the floor in pain, the thief ran out my door and fled from my house. What was going on, I thought. Why was that man in my house. Then I looked around to see what he had broken. When I saw what he had broken, I...

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Dear Alex...

posted by WildCherryWolf

Dear You Know Who You Are,

Love is a deep feeling, and what I felt for you was never love. It was...... I'm not sure, but not love. Love is deep. This only scratched the surface.

Your long blonde hair made you irresistible. Your ice blue eyes were enchanting, made me feel like I was walking on heaven. Your pale skin made me feel like I was in fake love with a monster, though. My friends teased me and you because of it.

Those arguments we had over the phone, I wish I could've spat the words at you. It would've been more satisfying. Seeing your reaction. Hearing you overreact to everything.

You...

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Short story

posted by liissaaxx

I can’t even remember why I chose to marry you!” She yelled. Her beautiful face filled with anger, those sparkling brown eyes that I have loved since day one, bore into me with no affection. She had said them, the words I never wanted to hear.
The fight had been going on for an hour now and I started to yell back, I could no longer control myself. Our first real fight in five years. I knew she would be over it soon and that big bright smile will light up her face, but I was overwhelmed too. I was hurt. But I stopped myself.
There were no lights on in our house; the outside light had faded...

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Faceless Angel

posted by WildCherryWolf

I was the only one in this world, this blank space. It was obviously a dream, no other place would only contain a 13 year old girl with an overactive imagination. I heard small cries, and I wondered if I truly was the only thing on this world. Then, I ran.

I ran the lengths and widths of the blank world, and kept running until I found a rock. A small, grey rock. Colorless. What was a little kore interesting was the figure on top of the rocks. She had black hair, as black as a rook's wing, and it made a curtain around her face. She wore grey, a simple grey dress. On her feet were rags. But her...

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BAD MEMORIES (POEM)

posted by r260897

Memories and grief of my heart
Are still buried somewhere
I can’t cry neither I can freely laugh
What if they don’t know my past
I have not forget it yet
I still remember the same Zean with the same Zeal
But not in flashes neither in cars
In backstage of life with trembling hunger
Hunger in eyes and lips dry
No money in pocket but Zeal on shoulder
With memories of ‘Love’ and burning heart
Now my clothes are branded
And my shoes are best, pocket heavy with dollars
But with this all my heart is all heavy
With secrets of past
Pleasures can bury them but cannot vanish
I still look forward to death
When all my secrets will disappear, my pain will end
Also with my life..end will come to my BAD MEMORIES. 

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A Short story

posted by coolie

“Pump! Pump!” went my pounding heart as I trembled across the deserted hallway of school. As I looked around in this hall of nothingness, I realized that I was the fist person here. However, I had the feeling that I was being watched, and followed. It was not a good feeling
I didn’t mind getting to school early because I always liked watching the other kids scatter out on the playground one by one, and watching them join different games. I was too afraid to play the games that the other boys played. Football and their aggressive chasing games just seemed dangerous, and I couldn’t stand...

Modern Day Princess Ch. 16

posted by para-scence

"No! I don't want to go!" I shrieked. My whole world was crumbling down. This couldn't be happening. I found a place where I was loved and accepted, and now I was being kicked out?

What would happen when I got home? Mother and Father would either neglect me more than ever, or beat me to death for "jeopardizing the family name" by running away. The thought was stupid, but I'm pretty sure that's what would happen.

"Cosette, you've been so depressed ever since Asteria left," Grandma said. "You need to go home. It's what's best for you."

"No, it's not!" I shouted. Tears were pouring down my cheeks....

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The Edge of Mental Health

posted by sawfan13

To travel the roads less traveled by, to travel in the paths of The Great Electric Poet, as the lizards kiss your feet, rainbows giving you rides on their magnificent layers of light and color, to love everything, and trip out on every mushroom on the ground. I would love that to be my life, Alice in Wonderland stoner version style. Alas, as an insane creature on God's most gorgeous green Earth, society and the laws limit my freedom. Yet, I do manage to find a way to release myself from these chains. For I am Kira Lucille Way, and I'm on the edge of mental health.

It's the year 1966. A year...