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posted by TDIlover226
Part 3
Eddie woke up on a sky scraper roof top. It was raining and he couldn't remember how he had gotten there. He was still tired, and dripping wet, but he didn't care, he curled up and went to sleep again.

"Good morning sleepy head!" Eddie woke up to see a mutant, that looked like an angel, standing over him. "Where am I?" he said. "On the top of a building, can't ya tell!" another voice said from behind him. He looked behind him to see the mutant that was dressed like a devil. "Annie, don't be mean to him, he probably doesn't have any ideal of whats going on!" said the angel. "So I guess your name's Annie" said Eddie. Annie crossed her arms and gave the angel girl a look. "I'm Ann" said the angel. "Annie and Ann?" said Eddie. "we're sisters" said Ann. "Annie rolled her eyes. "Wait 'till Master Szu`lee get's here" said Ann "He'll explain what's going on".

Another mutant flew to the roof top. "He's awake" he said, rollling his eyes. This mutant looked like a bat, it was one who carried him away along with Annie. "And what is your name Mr. Sunshine?" said Eddie. "You mean you don't reconize me? We've been friends for years, well not really friends, since I've been using you" said the bat. Eddie was about to say "what?" when he felt a rock hit him in the back of the head.

Eddie once again woke up in a place that he had never seen before. This time there was no "Good morning sleepy head!". He has in a weird room, with some huge tubes that looked like lava lamps all around him. He was laying behind one, when he heard them talking.
"You did well, young student, well not really a student anymore" said the same old man he saw in the park.
"You've been working hard for a long time now, and you actually got him to surge his powers. Your the best student I've ever had, Vincent".
Eddie couldn't believe it. But he thought about these mutants, each one 'sorta had their own theme. He thought about how Ann was being nice to him, and if these mutants were good, or just pure evil. "Hey, hes awake!" yelled an unfimiliare voice from behind him. He looked to see another mutant. This one didn't seem to have a theme. She just had blue and black hair, a shirt with a skull on it, and a spiked collar, she was just pretty much a delinquent. Eddie found out her power the hard way when he tryed to get up and run. The mutant reached her hand out, and clutched it into a fist. Eddie got electrocuted, and fell to the floor once more.
"Eddie, I'm sorry to say this, but if you don't cooperate with us, Annie will have to split you into a million peices!" said Ann.

They led Eddie to another room, where the old man who was apearently Master Szu`lee was reading. "We've got the boy" said Vincent. "I would like to explain why all of this is happening to you, Eddie" said Master Szu`Lee. "If you havn't already noticed, each of my spirits have a theme". "Spirits?" said Eddie. "The reason why they are called Spirits is that what they're themed after, they are actually spirits of those things". "Annie is the spirit of the devil, she is also the one with the most devilish mind, Ann is the sporit of an angel, and is the peepyist, Vincent is the spirit of a bat, he is the second best of my students, and JJ is the spirit of bad luck". JJ must have been the delinquent that shocked him. "JJ is my top student, bad luck is basicly free style in terms of powers". "So why are you people doing this to me!" yelled Eddie, "What do I have to do with any of this?!". Everyone walked out of the room exsept JJ. "'Cause your one of us" she said.

to be continued...
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Kaleb explains how to write a book
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Source: love
"Hello." "Hey long time no talk." "Yea, no, kidding." "Why, do you call today?' "Well, you know I just need help finding my best friend." "Don't worry sweetie you found him. He miss you tons." "Really, I wish he knew how much I miss him." "Sweetie, he does. Just remember to smile for him for he smiles for you." "I smile everyday because I know he care about me. Does he want to hear my new poem?" "He always wants to hear your sweet writing."

I have been very lonely since my best friend left me here, in this grove of trees. The grass has turned brown and the gravel road is now mud. We no longer...
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posted by cullens-rule
the crystal night
Chapter 3 the meeting

I woke the next morning feeling dreadful I had a headache and I was still exhausted even though I had slept in.
I got up and headed for the bathroom to find it locked so went back to my room and changed into my light blue fleas and jeans, I opened the curtains and the window, I gazed out to the forest feeling empty hoping he would be their and as I thought he was nowhere is sight, I herd the lock relies on the bathroom and grabbed a towel.
Once I had finished drying and brushing my heir I took the towel downstairs and put it in the wash pile mum came into...
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How To Create A 12 Sequence Screenplay Outline and Why It Works by Gary Goldstein via FilmCourage.com.
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posted by hgfan5602
I don't believe you.
I really don't
After all these years
This is what you give me?

Why did you break up with me?
I don't understand.
You were so close with me
And then that tech freak came by
And you left me.
You abandoned me.

Why did you dump me?
Such a close friend of mine.
Laughing with me all these years
Crying with me.
Now, you leave me.

Why?
I don't understand anything that happened.
Why can't happy things happen
In this world?
Why do things have to be so sad?

I can't accept that it happened.
Because I am still a close friend
Of yours
But I can't accept the facts.
I just can't.
The girl steps back and looks away for a moment.
    “I apologize, my name is Amelia. What are you called?”
    Re-boot. “My name is Zero.”
    “Zero, will you join me in the battle against Ragnarok?”
    I hesitate. Ragnarok? Could this really be the end of days? These creatures, I know they’re powerful, but are they really capable of destroying everything? Hehehe, well, at least I won’t be bored fighting them. I straighten my back and say: “Yes, I will join you in preventing the end.”
                        /////...
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I never thought it could possible happen to us here in Salem, a boring town in New England; but it did and the consequences from the action executed were fatal.

My senior year, I had high hopes. It was going to be the best year of high school. I wasn’t going to deal with crazy obsessive drama I usually dealt with every year; I was going to have fun, party, celebrate my last year of high school; then on to collage.
My best friend Nick and I were going to go to Chester Collage together. Sure we hadn’t been accepted in yet and we hadn’t sent in our applications, but it was our senior year,...
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posted by Lore_Master
Laying there stareing at the ceilling with the smell of bacon engulfing his nostrels he kept trying to figure out
where he had smelled it before, the hero scratched his nose as he looked over at the door seeing if the women was
still there... she wasn't, "Ah now is my chance." snickered the hero working his way to his feet, surpriseingly it
wasn't hard getting to his feet, he creeped to the kitchen door pearing in to see if anyone was around, he scanned
the kitchen searching for the mouth watering smell. He danced lightly across the kitchen floor with a big grin on
his face seeing the bacon...
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posted by StarGirl1721
When you hope,
You expect and wish,
You have a feeling for wanting,
Your desires to be filled,
You don’t want them killed,
Hope makes you stronger,

We live to hope,
Hope is what keeps us going,

Keep it sealed,
Let it be healed,
Like it’s your shield,
Sometimes it’s your battle field,

Keep hope close to you in life,
Sometimes you need to rethink twice,
For hope is unstable,
It comes and goes,

Hope is a special gift,
Not everyone knows,
If they do, they don’t bother to show,


Some of us want to lose hope,
Some of us want to regain hope,

Some think it’s a useless tool,
Yet they’re the ones blind,
Who won’t come to mind?

You and I, we all need hope,
No matter how far we seem from it,
It will find us one day,
For hope will come to us,

Wish and desire you heart out,
Keep in mind,
Don’t back away;
You know what you want,


Keep hoping till the END……
Chapter 4

The Beginning of Mission


Jason was in a strange little futuristic town. It was dark at night, there were odd blue lights glowing all around him, and there were barely any buildings. As he walked he heard a voice. It was slightly squeaky, the sound echoed. Although, when Jason made a sound, the same volume and pitch, there was no echo. (Just a plain voice.) Strange, Jason thought. Something strange is going on, and I know it, eagerly thought Jason. Jason heard the same squeaky sound again. Now from all directions, Jason could hear the voice. He attempted facing a different direction....
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posted by greenstergirl
if this girl was wearing modern clothing do u think she would suit Janie better than my drawing? (No duh!!)
if this girl was wearing modern clothing do u think she would suit Janie better than my drawing? (No duh!!)
Danny:

I grabbed my pink and green duffel bag off the wooden shelf beside my green bed.

I was inside the earth elemental tree house where all the earth elementals sleep if they are staying in the BOES over night. Marcus, Brenna, and I were supposed to be sleeping but we all weren't. We were running out to go find Janie. We weren't supposed to leave.

After pulling on skinny jeans and a green Nike shirt I was ready. I woke up Marcus after I had pulled on my brown converse and jacket.

"wha....what is it Danny?" He asked impatiently while rubbing his eyes. I ruffled his black hair.

"Get up meat head...
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posted by HarryPLover
Friends Are Forever,so I thought.
All those pictures that I bought,now torn apart along with my broken heart.

I miss those hugs and laughs we use to share,because now they act like they don't care.

Now all we do is fight.
I wish God would give us some light,give me a solution to solve all this tension.

Friends don't back stab you.
Friends don't talk behind your back or be pissed off at you when they feel like it.

Nobody seems to care anymore.
Now girls are turning into whores.
All I know is that now we are all friends for never.
When we need to go back to being friends FOREVER!
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posted by ZekiYuro
OK,now the painting we are looking at now is by the French painter Toulouse-Lautrec.
The painting is called At The Moulin Rouge.As you probably know The Moulin Rouge is a nightclub in Paris.Maybe some of you remember the film Moulin Rouge?In the 19th century,the nightclub was very famous for its beautiful dancers and singers.
Toulouse-Lautrec did a lot of paintings and posters of the Moulin Rouge.He especially loved painting the dancers.And in these paintings he sometimes included his friends too.
In the middle of the picture there are 5 people who are sitting at a table having a drink.The woman...
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Why Script Testing Is Essential For Screenwriters by Corey Mandell via FilmCourage.com.
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posted by GreenLight24
I'd wear that...
I'd wear that...
Author's Note: Hey everyone. I'm fascinated with villain psychology and bad guys in general...they always seem to be more interesting and have better back-stories than the good guys...anyways, this is my first attempt at writing a villain I created from scratch, so I'd appreciate any feedback, positive or negative. IF U READ THE ORIGINAL BLACKTIE, THIS IS NOT IT. This is a very very very similar version. The only difference is that I've edited the beginning to make the character more relatable...But fear not!, the awesomeness is unaffected by this endeavor! Now, where was I? Oh yes, the story....
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