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posted by tbone_21
okay sooo this chapter is very long... I don't think the others will be quite this long but I wanted to get the descriptions of the characters out of the way, enjoy and comment!
The first thing I was aware of was the smell of a fire, I closed my eyes and inhaled deeply, inhaling my new favorite smell. I was dancing, I could feel the cool grains of sand between my toes and could tell that the sun had long since sunk below the horizon. My friends and I were singing loudly to a fast paced song our feet pounding madly against the sand.
I didn’t pay attention to any of these things though I just waited for what I knew was coming next and became almost giddy with excitement. Then I felt it, the feeling of eyes bearing into the back of my head, the most beautiful eyes I had ever seen. I turned on my heel and found what I was looking for, the two bright green orbs staring back at me. My heart flipped and my breath caught in my chest. I caught a hint of a smile on his lips and I’m pretty sure my stomach did a backflip. My heart was flying, pounding like the hooves of a racehorse. Then he was gone.

    Great. Yup, that was my first thought of the school year. I rolled over and rubbed the sleep out of my eyes which proved more challenging than it should have, it sticking to the corners of my eyes. I decided it was a good idea to give up when I poked myself in the eye twice efficiently blinding myself for a couple seconds. I was suddenly aware of the noise that had brought me out of my peaceful sleep, probably the last of those for months. Beep...Beep...Beep I stretched my hand out and unplugged the alarm clock not bothering to find the off button. I rolled onto my back and savored the quiet of the house. But unfortunately it didn’t last longer than a few short seconds,
“Zoe! Get up! It’s almost time for school!” my grandmother shrieked from the other side of my door.
“Zoe! Don’t make me come in there!” she threatened.
Finally, she threw open the door and a cold breeze drifted into the room and I pulled the covers up to my chin in a poor attempt at staying warm. She marched across the room and threw open the long white curtains letting in the sunlight her little brown dog Bella scurrying along behind her in a feeble attempt at keeping up with my grandmothers dutiful stride, she was on a mission and was determined to win one way or another. The bright sunlight streaming in through my window burned my eyes and I threw my pillow over my head, I wasn’t going down without a fight. But I knew what was coming next; I felt Bella land on the bed with a soft thud and my grandmother said,
“Wake her up!” Bella jumped on me digging through the blankets until she found a hole then; she burrowed into the covers and started scratching my legs and licking my hands. I pushed her away but it was no use eventually she pushed my pillow off my head and bit my nose. I jumped out of bed my feet landing on the cold floor.
Grandma grinned triumphantly and marched off to the next room where Jasmines alarm had just gone off Bella following at her heels. I threw on a sweatshirt lying at the foot of my bed and trudged out of my room and down the hall to the stairs. Then I heard a very tired Jasmine yell,
“Bella! Get. Off. Me!” and I smiled knowing I wasn’t the only one to lose my chances of sleeping in to an elderly woman and her fluffy brown poodle.
“Ow! That’s my nose! Fine! I’ll get up! Ugh!” and Jasmine walked out of her room with very tangled hair and red nose, my grandma followed and her and Bella started knocking on Seraphine’s door ready to repeat the process.
Jasmine and I slowly made our way down the stairs and to the kitchen. Just outside the door we were greeted by the heavenly aroma of blueberry pancakes and cinnamon rolls. My stomach growled begging me to rush through the door and pile my plate high with the delicious pancakes drenched with maple syrup. Jasmine and I raced to the plates and practically started wrestling over the maple syrup. Finally, we sat down at the table and broke into a fit of giggles until we were interrupted by Seraphine and Marissa fighting over the plate of cinnamon rolls. A couple seconds later I heard Anila flying down the stairs bringing in a cool breeze with her. She grabbed a plate of pancakes and sat down with us at the table.
    These where my best friends in the world Jasmine, Seraphine, Marissa, and Anila. We all usually stay at my house which, by the way is pretty big. 8 bedrooms, 6 ½ bathrooms a huge kitchen, 2 living rooms, and a basement with a bar and a room to work out in (kind of like a mini gym). The size of the house made it stick out in the small beach front community. I looked around the table at each of my friends.
Jasmine is the creative and fun one, and is amazing with plants and animals. She has deep green eyes and light brown hair with natural honey highlights. Seraphine is the fiery one, she gets in a lot of fights with others but it’s usually because she’s way overprotective of her friends but she doesn’t take crap from others about herself either, her personality definatly shows through her appearance, she has fiery red hair and gold eyes she’s the biggest of the group but not by much she’s still a little below average size but she’s built like a brick, small but strong. Marissa is the swimmer she loves water, (which is why we always make her shower last) and sometimes I’m pretty sure she can talk to fish, she has blonde hair and light blue eyes she’s the second smallest just a little taller than Anila. Anila is about the size of a pixie and is so fast sometimes it looks like she’s flying she has short jet black hair and blue eyes that look like they have tiny flecks of silver in them. I had long dark brown hair that’s almost black and electric blue eyes I’m taller than Marissa but shorter than Jasmine so just short enough that I still have to climb onto the counter to reach the top shelves of the cupboards like a little kid.
When we were all finished eating we finally started talking, we all opened our mouth at the same time but before anyone could form a word I blurted out,
” Happy Birthday Jasmine!” which was followed by a chorus of Happy Birthday’s from the other girls.
“Finally” Jasmine sighed “I though you all forgot! Or maybe I had the date wrong!”
We all started laughing when she said that. After breakfast we all headed to our rooms and started getting ready for school about an hour later we all met at the door.
Jasmine had crimped her hair and wore a new flowy green top (which was the perfect color for her eyes) a pair of dark jeans and a pair of brown flats. Marissa curled her hair and wore a teal blue V-neck with bright pink flowers on it and a bright pink tank top under it she had paired it with a light pair of shinny jeans with a few thin holes running down the leg and a new pair of boots to pull it all together . Seraphine wore dark boot cut jeans a pair of bright multi-colored Osiris shoes, and a purple shirt with a picture of Hello-Kitty on it that said- I can’t hear you! Anila was wearing a plaid blue, yellow, and pink button down shirt which she had tied off to the side with a bright blue tank under it she also wore dark jeans and a pair of “potato shoes”. I wore a flowy off the shoulder yellow striped shirt that said “yes way “on the front and “no way” on the back paired with dark wash flare jeans and black heels.
Every outfit was so different but one look at each of our right wrists would explain how close we are. We all had a thick black bracelet that had five stars blue stars on it and some weird black and white gem we could never figure out what it was, the only difference is that each girl had a different colored circle with a symbol on it, Jasmine had a green circle with a vine in it, Serphine had a red circle with a flame in it, Marissa a blue circle with waves and Anila had a grey circle with a picture of swirling winds inside of it. Mine was the only one that was different the circle on mine had two colors black and white but it contained no picture which we all thought was weird. These bracelets are how we ended up being best friends. When we met each other we didn’t like each other much actually, we didn’t like each other at all. I looked at the other girls and knew they were thinking the same thing;    
    “Alright class! Get into your reading groups!” Mrs. Trombley said, in that sugary sweet voice you would expect from a kindergarten teacher, “I want all of you to talk about the short story for this week and go over spelling words!” she said to the class. I grabbed my three best friends, Mandy Kaitlin and Paige and we scrambled to the corner and plopped down on the bean bag chairs our books in our hands. We all giggled and talked about silly little things not even close to the topic we were supposed to be discussing.
Just as we finally pulled out our books to start reviewing Mrs. Trombley walked up to our group and pulled me off to the side,
“I want you to go work with the group I have set up in the hall” she said as she handed me a thicker book and pointed me to the door. I took a few hesitant steps towards the door before looking back, and Mrs. Trombley smiled and nodded her head encouraging me to move forward. I looked at the bracelet on my wrist and pushed my chin up and walked towards the door with renewed confidence.
When I walked through the door I saw two girls from my class sitting on opposite sides of a circle made up of five chairs arguing about something. I walked closer and saw it was Jasmine and Seraphine. Two of the girls I disliked the most out of the class, the only thing that could make things worse was if the remaining two chairs where for Marissa and Anila the other two I disliked in the class. As I approached I figured out what they were arguing about,
“Um no. You copied Me!” Jasmine shrieked nearing hysterics. Seraphine leaned forward in her chair,
“No! You copied Me!!” she yelled her eyes seeming to glow, Jasmine clenched her jaw and leaned forward so that their noses where almost touching.
“NO! YOU. COPIED. ME!!!” she said once more. That’s when they finally noticed I was there. I noticed what they were arguing about bot girls had a thick black bracelet with 5 blue stars and a colored dot on it around her wrist, exactly like mine.
They both leaned back in their chairs and groaned,
” Not you too!” in almost perfect harmony. I sat down on the chair between them and covered my wrist with my hand we all sat like that for minutes just glaring at each other waiting for one to crack in tension thick enough to cut with a knife. Then the door opened and we all turned to see who it was hoping it was one of our friends. But of course not. Out walked Marissa and Anila and all of our eyes darted to the black bracelets on their wrists, and we all started talking at once,
“You too!”
No you are the copy-cat!”
“I got my bracelet first!”
“No I had mine the longest!” eventually I had enough,
“QUIET!” I yelled and five pairs of eyes fell on me
“Let’s just do our assignment and we can talk about this later.” We all sat back on our chairs and started to read.
    Later that day as our class was lining up to go to lunch Jasmine lined up behind me,
“We’re all gonna sit together at lunch to talk about the bracelets.” Nd then she turned on her heel and stomped away not waiting for an answer.    
    When I got my food I stopped and looked around the lunch room, eventually I spotted the group of girls sitting in the back of the room not saying a word to each other. I walked back and found a seat between Marissa and Jasmine. As soon as I sat down Jasmine spoke,
”Okay, who’s gonna admit that they copied me?” immediately after our table broke into a chorus of yelling,
“Are you kidding me?!”
“Really?”
“We didn’t copy you”
“Why would I copy you?”
“Wow.” Eventually a Ms. Flinn walked up to our table,
“Girls is there a problem here?” we all fell silent until Marissa spoke up,
“Nope, no problem here!” she squeaked. Ms. Flinn raised her eyebrows and said,
“I would hope not” and walked away.
As soon as she turned around Jasmine opened her mouth but Anila cut her off,
“ How about we all tell where we got our bracelets and how long we’ve had them?” and we all nodded. Jasmine spoke first,
” I’ve had mine longer than I can remember, I think my dad gave it to me before he went missing.” She suddenly had an intense interest with her fingernails and began to pick at them. Then to break the silence Seraphine spoke,
“I’ve had mine since I was born, I think my parents gave me mine to before they left.” Immediately after Anila spoke,
” I’ve had mine since I was born too, I’m pretty sure my mom gave it to me before she left me with my ‘stepmonster’.”
“Oh my gosh, I’ve had mine since I was born too! My parents gave it to me, but they’re never around they’re usually out of the country, but I have no idea why.” Marissa said.Everyone turned and looked at me, I took a deep breath in,
“I’ve had mine since I was born to, but both of my parents are dead, I’ve lived with my grandma since I was 3.” We all looked at each other and put our right hand on the table.

    Jasmine opened up the door and a cool wind swept through my hair, “Let’s go guys we don’t wanna be late!” she said and stepped outside.
posted by HarryPLover
Forever
Forever you are mine
Forever I’ll be here
Forever is what you promised
Your heart is worth nothing
But the your soul is priceless
Forever can be a long time
Forever can be a long time cut short
It’s worth the suffering
It’s worth the sacrifice
To forever be yours
Forever protected by your eagle like wings
Forever loved by your ocean wide heart
Forever safe in your warm embrace
Forever is worth the wait
To be sliced thin
To stuffed thick
Forever is Forever
Forever is Eternity
Forever is a risk
Forever is a chance
Forever is worth the wait
posted by rebaj2010
preface

if the one person you told the truth to all the time was now the one person you have to keep it away from, would you?
would you be able to lie through your teeth and pray that he believes you? what if he was the one person you told everything to, he was the one who keeps you from falling apart, but if you told him anything he might be the one to bring you tummbling down.
if you had to chose between lieing to him, hurting him, and keeping him away from you, what would you chose? because if you dont chose right, he may very well die.
posted by Funnygirl77
love bites
love bites
previously: He sighed, Zack thought his chances with Kisa was slim. He knew by doing what he was doing, he was going to put Kisa in danger, but he couldn't stay away, he loves Kisa and he would do anything to keep her near him even if that meant putting her in danger. "Man", he thought, "I am so selfish".



Zack walked in to the lunch room and sat down, the people who were at the table got up and walked away. Kisa walked in after him, there eyes met, and kisa looked away. She wished that Zack would ask her out,Zack looked down. He was going to ask her to the dance which is in two weeks, "Kisa?"...
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posted by June4
A year ago in my calculation,
A year ago, there were situations.
The same song played now and then,
In my memory, it had begun.


Tears from my eyes were shed this morning,
It was the most tears I was shedding.
My world isn’t complete without you,
My world and I don’t know what to do.


Love isn’t a toy and never was.
Love is what you cherish and keep as treasure.
My mind is at many topics at random,
It goes normal when you’re in my kingdom.
What ends my bad situations with people
Is my focus on you, my angel.
You’ll always be a part of me,
You’ll always be in my memory.
mysterious love

- chapter 13-





"Ok you can open them now."
When I opened my eyes my mouth droped.
"Go carts! How did...when did...THATS AWESOME!"
He laughed "I thought you would like them."
"Well you were right! " Then I realized I was acting like a 6 year old in front of the hottest guy I had ever seen.
"I mean umm... there...great?"
"Dont worry your not acting like a six year old." Mathew smiled at me.

How did he no that?


Then of course me being me.i
I said the stupied possible thing any body could EVER say.

"You look so cute when you smile like that." I could just imagin the big hearts in my eyes....
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posted by lollipopszx3
PG-13

Chapter 2

"Hey babe. Where are you going?" asked Megan. She was already obsessed with me... Like practically all the other girls who have come to the school. Why couldn't one time, just one time, a single girl didn't crush on me. Even the girls who are in a relationship. Is it that hard? I mean there were plenty of other guys at this school and it wasn't only just me. I wasn't ever interested in girls! Man I sound like a six year old rather than a eighteen year old. That's pretty sad.

"Away from you." I mumbled under my breath. I looked at her beautiful lustful eyes and said a little loud....
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posted by joe-edwardfan
A CURSED STORY!
Once apon a time there was a powerful king ruling London.
The legend says a witch cursed the kings only daughter because he killed all the witches in London except for his own.
As its told the curse forbids the princess to ever feels or falls in love(but she can just feel love for the witche’s son Damien who is in love with the princess) unless the witch that's has casted the spell on her shall die drowning in her own blood at an eclipse.
    Witch: a witch is a person that has special abilities and is immortal they look like a human and blood runs in their...
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“Opal... Who is this man” Marley Asked. Opal just noticed the two boys standing there herself, but soon understood, for their vampiric powers were far beyond hers. “I’m guessing this is that pure-blood bastard releasing all that power before” Said Alec. Marley grabbed Opal by the top and pulled her to her feet. “Damn you! You bit her didn’t you?” Shouted Marley. The man put his hand back to his side. “Sigh”. “This is so much trouble” Said the Man. Before Alec could say a word, the man elbowed him straight in the face. Alec slid for about three metres and then rolled...
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A/N: Yeah, I know, I come up with some weird stuff. Fractions of a whole story. Well, attatch whatever story you want. This is about a mourning teen. And suicide.

Please rate. (And please comment)
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Getting cold in the sun’s shadow

Drowning in this black pin’s ink

Gone is the lovely light, night’s here despite

Twilight’s eternal fights and weep

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She breathed in and out slowly, each breath appearing in front of her, a wisp of cold smoke disappearing. Around her was a silent vibration she had never...
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posted by RATHBONE07
Tap!Tap! There was that sound again. It was so annoyingly loud, but it did drown out the screams in the next room. Tap!! Who the hell would bother to disturb me on a Monday morning? Bang!!
"What the hell!" I yell rolling of my bed and dragging myself towards the door. When i finally open it theres Michael starring at me with his blood red eyes.
"Damn Lilly!! Ive been banging at your door since freakin' six in the morning! Are you freakin' deaf or something?God!"
"Let's just say that i did hear you but ignored it. Dude, do you know how early six in the morning is? You interrupted my beauty sleep....
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posted by A_Sirens_Call
A sirens call

CHAPTER ONE::: Shyness

It is the first day back, I really did not think of anything interesting happening, it was all new and strange after the holidays nothing would surprise me. Our little group of six did not have any specific relations towards outsiders we tried to keep contact with the human race to a minimum considering we are no longer human. After that experiment from the mad scientist - Doctor John Hallwain – trying to clone us making marginal errors then tried a different experiment but that is all I know and that was gathered by Annabelle who could read minds and was...
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posted by Codby
This is what comes out me in class. When I should pay attention. ;)
Also some funny pictures.

He was crying. The tears weren’t coming fast, they were slow. So slow as a turtle.
They had only this time because when he steps out of this room he will be different, letting no more tears fall. He looked her straight in the eyes. He was still crying but now there was fire and ice in his eyes.

Fire so warm it could freeze every living thing.
Ice so cold that it could burn the whole world.

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Watch me. You will be surprised. I’m stronger and faster in many ways. And you haven’t...
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posted by liviabutterfly
Chapter [#2]

Narrators POV

An old man in a cloak walked into the neighborhood in which Olivia lived. Everyone stared at him as he walked around.

Olivia's POV

I smiled brightly as I dived into the ocean, "wait up!!!" Oliver laughed as my five brothers ran after me with surfboards, buggy boards, buckets for picking up sea shells, and dad brought out our special maid sandcastle buckets. They were big and made the best structures ever!!! Plus our family is known for our sand castles/structures. I smiled and dived down, feeling the salty cold water against my skin, it's the best feeling ever. When...
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    I walked for so long, looking for something, not knowing what that someone thing actually was. The sky bleeding with an orange sunset as the sun moved ever so slowly below the horizon. I stopped in my tracks ans stared for a moment, than went back to searching for my mystery object. This was a great time to take in the woods which have always scared me. It wasn't bad walking through them. everything was orange from the ending of summer. It was like walking in those stories you always hear about. Just then, a soft rustle in the bushes interrupted my thoughts. Not knowing...
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posted by BennieBear27
Chapter One

My alarm went off at 7:00 on the morning February 8th, 2017. I reluctantly sat up on the edge of my bed and yawned.

"Morning." I heard a voice say. My eyes were still closed.

"Luna?" I mumble. "That you?"

"Yep." I open my eyes to see Luna Middleton standing three feet diagonal from me.

I shared a room with her, her twin sister Kyla, and my brother Jacob. That's how everyone does here. You live with your twin and your SIDA partner.

"So, sleepy head." she smirked. "You gonna get up or what? If not, I'll eat your breakfast for you."

I don't reply and shake my head.

"Oh, come on!" Luna...
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Prologue
The wind was howling like wolves in the night, and Will sat shivering in his post. The turret on which he sat overlooked a tall rock ledge that sloped into the ocean.
“Why do I get this bloody post.” he said to himself. The air was so cold up there that it sank right into your bones. Even though Will had dressed as warmly as he could with a thick woolen cloak, he could still feel the icy fingers creeping up his back. The fire in the brazier barely helped either.
“Nothing as always.” he said as he looked out to the edge of the sea. He had taken to talking to himself when he...
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