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I'm writing a story called Immortal Magic and it's about a boy named Darren who is all "popular" and "cool" and "hard" and he finds a girl named Willow in the pond/Lagoon in his school. Turns out Willow is a witch from the medievil ages. (idk how to spell) and she's looking for an evil "daemon" named Tryant, who takes the form of an owl and can influence people to be angry/happy/confused etc... and can influence some Dark Magic. Darren finds this out later because Willow is still afraid of anyone trying to excecute her for being a witch. Earlier on, another witch named Forsythia tells him he's something called The Wanderer, who is meant to be a help when a time of darkness is upon them.

But I'm thinking, should they go exploring to try and kill Tryant or should it come to them??? And should there be a sequel or should they die at the end? And should they fall in love?

Help please and I'll give you three answer props.
 1-2vampire posted over a year ago
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Elizabeth_Darcy said:
Maybe you can make them explore to try and find Tryant, but unexpectedly, Tryant finds them. Willow and Darren could be in love, but they don't reveal it to each other. Then, maybe at the end of the story, one of them dies because of Tryant and there could be a sequel. The sequel could maybe be about how whoever is alive trys to ressurect their lover and how they defeat Tryant.

It's just an idea. You don't have to take it! Hope my idea helps!:)
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K5-HOWL posted over a year ago
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Thank you!
Elizabeth_Darcy posted over a year ago
booklover13 said:
I agree. I think they should go on a journey to find tyrant, and yeah, he unexpectedly finds them. Then one of them should realize they love the other, and tells them right before they die, thats when the other one realizes they love them to. And the sequal could be about the alive one trying to avenge their death, or bring them back from the dead. Just an idea!
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TeamZoey said:
Ok this is what i think: Darren and Willow should go looking for Tyrant. I don't think that they should fall in love, they should just become really good friends, so great is there friendship that they would sacrifice themselves for one another. One of them should die in the end and there should not be a sequel.
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Yes they SHOULD fall in love!
omgbrb posted over a year ago
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NO! UGH! HOW MANY LOVE STORIES ARE THERE? THINK ABOUT IT!
TeamZoey posted over a year ago
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Yeh I agree with TeamZoey and it's hard to make the falling in love bit un-cheesy.
Storystuff posted over a year ago
omgbrb said:
1.try to find that dude.
2.fall in love
3.DIE!!!!!!!!! muhahahaha
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OMG!!! Just 1 shud die and the other to live on without them!!!! Mwahahaha!!!!! Sorry...my evil streak coming out.
Storystuff posted over a year ago
summer448 said:
they should go looking, fall in love and then find him
and he should kill willow
and then he should get pissed of and kill the evil guy
and then she should be brought back to life by the witch ..

or sumthin like that :/
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iluvtheshow said:
Live at the lake while they are getting to know each other... One morning Darren wakes to the sound of Willow's scream. They find Forsythia, killed by Tryany. They know because he leaves a single feather placed straight across her face, a mark that her life has been taken by a daemon. You could have Willow break down and explain something along the lines of "this is what happened to my parents, my sister, etc." They leave, knowing he is watching and set a trap... That's all I got :) Hope it helps.
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this is cool, but she is from the medievil times and the villagers found out her family are witches, burned them, and she escaped, but that is a good idea, yeah.
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writer67 said:
enogh killing! love stories always sell well. and people are always finding cures,and many that are bad become good,after they are beaten with a game of marbles of crystal!lands of peace love magic and equal power, or a pond of jello. to be happy and in love, groovy unheard music! angry and irate killing everything cause no one wants to give away a kiss to something ugly and not happy, good luck, later ;-}
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