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SERIOUS HELP!!!! Need storyline help. Any ideas welcomed! Its a crime mystery novel btw.
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Storyline: first person view told from main character Agent Jason Logans point of view. Other main character Garrison Malone. The two work for the BAU, have a killer who murders well off couples so far twenty dead. Love letters fron the killer have been found in victims houses. Killer is escalating, Garrison has disappeared after a fight with team leader Jason. They fought about Garrisons secret past. He amd his family were kidnapped and tortured for years, he escaped they didnt (major guilt issues!) he believes theyre still alive works himself to death trying to find them this bothers Jason who worked the original case, Jason believes they might be alive but he doesnt search for then anymore this angers Garrison b/c he accuses Jason of giving up on them, Jason says that Garrison needs to focus on case at hand. Garrison doesnt understand why he cant work both anr storms out bu not before shattering a window. Now new victims have been discovered and Jason is starting to lose it for he is plagued by nightmares that haunt him even when hes awake of a dead young girl and some others trapped elwith him in a burning building and even though shes dead keeps begging Jason to save her. Oddly enough this girl resembles the daughter of one of the victims. So now in the story im in the middle of a pep talk between Jason and secind in command Les. Now i have to go hrough witness statements and finding Garrison and informing next of kin. Which were going to find out the killer is the daughters boyfriend and will catch him. But i can sum that up in like 3 chapters so i need to extend the story, i know i should probably include something more about Garrisons past but i dont know to go bout it. Plus i could use a section to be inserted before Garrison storms off. I need anything ANYTHING! Ideas from a copycat killer to aliens, would be welcomed, even if you have an idea to end the current crime case and insert a new one that way the story id longer and has more cases to
Storyline: first person view told from main character Agent Jason Logans point of view. Other main character Garrison Malone. The two work for the BAU, have a killer who murders well off couples so far twenty dead. Love letters fron the killer have been found in victims houses. Killer is escalating, Garrison has disappeared after a fight with team leader Jason. They fought about Garrisons secret past. He amd his family were kidnapped and tortured for years, he escaped they didnt (major guilt issues!) he believes theyre still alive works himself to death trying to find them this bothers Jason who worked the original case, Jason believes they might be alive but he doesnt search for then anymore this angers Garrison b/c he accuses Jason of giving up on them, Jason says that Garrison needs to focus on case at hand. Garrison doesnt understand why he cant work both anr storms out bu not before shattering a window. Now new victims have been discovered and Jason is starting to lose it for he is plagued by nightmares that haunt him even when hes awake of a dead young girl and some others trapped elwith him in a burning building and even though shes dead keeps begging Jason to save her. Oddly enough this girl resembles the daughter of one of the victims. So now in the story im in the middle of a pep talk between Jason and secind in command Les. Now i have to go hrough witness statements and finding Garrison and informing next of kin. Which were going to find out the killer is the daughters boyfriend and will catch him. But i can sum that up in like 3 chapters so i need to extend the story, i know i should probably include something more about Garrisons past but i dont know to go bout it. Plus i could use a section to be inserted before Garrison storms off. I need anything ANYTHING! Ideas from a copycat killer to aliens, would be welcomed, even if you have an idea to end the current crime case and insert a new one that way the story id longer and has more cases to
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