I wrote this in fiev minutes, is it good?

We were asked t email our teacher and best few get snickers, so I sent this, it had the actual names but I changed them fr privacy reasons:
Mrs Hoffer and Jacob Black
One boring afternoon, Mrs Hoffer was marking some assessments handed in by those rebels of a class, 10H. She was getting fairly tired, grumpy and just wanted more coffee, she was just wondering if the only other teacher in this block (Mr Smith) would get her some more when the smell of it drifted in. Looking up at the door, she had to hide a squeal of excitement, for standing in the doorway was Jacob Black, and even better, he was topless. He walked over to her desk and placed on it, the coffee; she stopped marking the assessments, and just chatted with Jacob. She was having some fun when the assessments glared up at her; she started multi-tasking talking and working. When they were marked she yawned, Jacob told her to rest her head and kissed her on the forehead.
She woke with a start to the sound of knocking. It was Mr Smith bringing her a coffee, when he placed it on her desk he asked, “Are you alright?” Mrs Hoffer replied saying she was just talking to Jacob Black. He raised an eyebrow, confused she looked around; disappointed she sighed it was just a dream. Leaving he gave her a look that clearly said he thought she was cra-zay; sighing again she took a sip of the coffee and marked the assessments.
The next day before she handed out the assessments she told about what had happened the previous night. Quinn piped up at the end and said, “That look Mr Smith gave you, he gives me that all the time.”