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my mom says that no one will ever read this, but i wanna know what you guys think.

Kitsunes
In Hanagasa high school, there are a group of gorgeous students that don’t really fit in…or at least, choose not to. The reason they don’t fit in and keep to themselves is because they are Kitsunes. A Kitsune is a half human half cat creature that can go from a cute kitty cat to a vicious flesh eating monster in a matter of seconds. This group of students named Ikuto, Amu, Rin, Len, Finny, Kisa, and Nerine secret is in danger when a teenage girl named Toeto figures out their secret. They then depend on her to make sure their life stays normal and that no one finds out there secret.

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Half human and half cat? You mean their one parent is a cat? And it had sex with a human? XO (I'm sorry, i had to ask)
KissOfDoom posted over a year ago
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no, they are cursed with it.
narlyvamp1234 posted over a year ago
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kitsune is Japanese for fox, not cat
RikuSoraKairi3 posted over a year ago
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It's a great idea, but me reading it would depend on how u wrote it... good job so far!
SkyBendingVee posted over a year ago
 narlyvamp1234 posted over a year ago
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xElvenPiratex said:
That actually sounds very interesting to me! You'd have to be careful how you write it, though, as it might be hard to gain sympathy for a bunch of perfectly gorgeous people, even if they are outcasts. You wouldn't want them to be too flawless or they might get boring or be completely unrelatable, so you'd need to make sure you give them very interesting and intricate personalities to balance them out. But yeah, from the description you gave, I would definitely give the story a read! It's a very intriguing plot! :)
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thx :)
narlyvamp1234 posted over a year ago
Camilie39 said:
Maybe I would :) I have to say, it's really original!
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thx :)
narlyvamp1234 posted over a year ago
luna-lefright said:
I think its good!!!! R u writing more?????
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yeah, this was just the introduction, if you want when i am done with it i can post it on here and give the link so you can read it.
narlyvamp1234 posted over a year ago
sehdt said:
Your mum is wrong lots of us have read it and its really very good. Well Done
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thx :)
narlyvamp1234 posted over a year ago
chickencheese said:
Don't listen to your mom! So long as you write it well then people will read it! It's not really the kind of story I tend to be interested in, but I know lots of people do like that genre so I'm sure people will want to read it!
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writer67 said:
not bad, jeckle and hyde type of reasoning of a personality, adaptable and good, should have made bet with mum;-]
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EclecticFan78 said:
Definately sounds interesting, but I do have one question. If they can turn into flesh eating monsters why don't they just attack Toeto so no one finds out their secret? I am just curious as to the motives.
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well, you see, Ikuto won't let them do that...you will have to read it when i am done to find out why.
narlyvamp1234 posted over a year ago
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Ah, okay. Well you definately have my intrest peaked. I for one will look forward to reading it.
EclecticFan78 posted over a year ago
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awesome!
narlyvamp1234 posted over a year ago
samuraibond005 said:
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Kutsune is half human, half fox
Neko is half human, half cat.
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i know, but i kinda wanted to shake it up.
narlyvamp1234 posted over a year ago
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Well okay, the idea sounds great, but mixing up the proper terms like that would make it hard for anyone who knows what Nekos ore kitsunes are to read it.
samuraibond005 posted over a year ago
Me_Iz_Here said:
Sounds good, but it's really similar to this TV show that I know about.
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fruits basket?
narlyvamp1234 posted over a year ago
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Actually, the Nine Lives of Chloe King. It's about high schoolers who are basically half-cat with powers and stuff.
Me_Iz_Here posted over a year ago
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yeah, i wanted to watch that show but i don't have the channel for it.
narlyvamp1234 posted over a year ago
adamk said:
Sounds cool and actually original. Are you going to post it on here?
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i will soon, i am almost done with it.
narlyvamp1234 posted over a year ago
JaseKS said:
Hey, our moms would get alng great ^_^
And yea, I would read that
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crazywolf23 said:
Please write more! im begging!
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i'll post it and give you the link when it is done, okay?
narlyvamp1234 posted over a year ago
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ok thanks!
crazywolf23 posted over a year ago
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almost done! can't wait to see what people think.
narlyvamp1234 posted over a year ago
madening_mahem said:
definitely, I would totally read it!
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definitely, I would totally read it!
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Maachi said:
You definitely have talent...keep working it!
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torilee07 said:
Sounds very original & interesting. I would definitely read it!
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MiyaShuni said:
Its good, but I think you should really change the names because they're all from popular mangas I know(Except for Toeto, cool name):
Ikuto and Amu= Shugo Chara!, Rin and Len=Vocaloids,
Finny= Kuroshitsuji/Black Butler, Kisa= Fruits Basket.

tried to come up with more uncommon names. NIce job apart from that.
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oh, i didn't know that ;)
narlyvamp1234 posted over a year ago
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its cool. Good Luck. I hope i get to read it :)
MiyaShuni posted over a year ago
Albina21 said:
Sounds really good! I would read that! Did you get the idea from Fruit Basket? That's the one where they turn into cats right? Or is it another anime?
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a lot Animes inspired it
narlyvamp1234 posted over a year ago
nimratanveer said:
hey, ive been there, my whole family thinks i cant write and it is not a good 'career option'
.but you know its up to u.dont be discouraged, cuz youve got talent, you just need to express it and be what you really are. for me, i really like the idea, seriously, and im totally thinking 'man, you're good'.no offense, but i kinda disagree with your mom. tons of people will read it, just dont give up.
i think its great.keep working.the world needs people like you....:)
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snootygirl50701 said:
I WOULD SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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CosmoLuvsTails said:
awesome! are you gonna post on here? If so, how soon?!
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