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is this any good? it's a poem i wrote.

I Must Dreaming

I must be pretending,
I must be dreaming,
I saw him bleed,
I heard him breathe,
We all live,
We all die,
But that doesn’t justify,
It’s not the same,
It’s not so different,
It must be a dream,
It’s only in my mind,
Leave it all behind,
But then he dies.

I fear him,
But I love him,
I hate to see that die,
I can’t say goodbye,
I must be dreaming,
I tell myself it’s not real,
But I don’t believe,
Because I know what you did,
You took his life.

cutiegirl01 posted over a year ago

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Theia said:

This poem is not original, you copied it from the Evanescence song 'I must be dreaming'. link

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posted over a year ago

lilred96 said:

Love it got any more?so sad but so much soul to it love it love it love it!!!!

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posted over a year ago

thanks

cutiegirl01 posted over a year ago

Channyfan1 said:

tz amazing, hun. Oober job!

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posted over a year ago

thanks

cutiegirl01 posted over a year ago

LabraLege said:

sorry, but that sounds cliche

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posted over a year ago

that's fine

cutiegirl01 posted over a year ago

AvaMarch said:

This is really pretty, i love it! :)

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posted over a year ago

thanks

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deathroman13 said:

really good :)

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posted over a year ago

thanks

cutiegirl01 posted over a year ago

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18seuferer said:

Your poem is the best poem in history. It IS really hard to make a poem. I can't do that, you're the best poem maker ever.

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posted over a year ago

lol thanks

cutiegirl01 posted over a year ago

cassie-1-2-3 said:

It's alright for a school assignment.

It doesn't look like much effort was put into it. It can be developed into something good. Just keep reading it over and over and if you think of something that can be better, do it.

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posted over a year ago

kk thaks 4 the advice

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goddessoflife said:

Whoa...that was...amazing!

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posted over a year ago

thanks

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