Did you read Kim Jones?If you did what did you think and how can it be improved?!?!?!

yeh, i did (hey its me! lol!) and i think its relly good, though as i have said before, every book needs fine tuning.
Are yu able to find an editor yet???
That's about it, but it's mostly for grammar and maybe... hang on, if i say what i was gonna say, that would be hypocritical XD!!!
I only ever know what to write because my muse (if yu want to call it an imaginary frend, yu can) tells me, and i get dreams where things can fit into my story, after those rare times, im on a roll for ages... idk why im saying this XD!
Im so random sometimes XD!

But yeah, yur story's really greet!
DONT LOSE HOPE IF ANYONE SAYS IT'S CR*P!!! IT'S NOT!!!

Signed: Me xx (random pic below)