Names and Story title and Ideas(:

This is NOT stupid. This is actually a pretty amazing idea :)

I'd say she should die, and the teenage boy finds the journal. That would be extremely interesting, and it could make for some really deep, emotional and brilliant elements within your story.

I think it would be really cool if the story started with maybe a prologue talking about Rae in the fire. Then chapter one could be the boy finding the journal. The journal could maybe start from when she was young, or include a brief background of her. It could describe a whole story, and the boy could maybe have a story of his own as well. Like, he reads a section (or maybe a few section) and then he goes on with his story or something.

I just want to say that you should take your time with this. This could turn out to be an absolutely brilliant story. Don't rush it. Savor it, build it into all the beauty of its potential. I've read way too many stories on here that had decent-to-amazing ideas but were rushed and therefore ruined. So my main piece of advice would be to take your time writing this and really develop it.

Good luck with this! It's brilliant :)

um, i dont have any ideas, but for a name (if it's her diary) "If You're human, don't read this"? Never mind that's stupid, but you can still use it.

Witchy trouble in Tenscer (Ten - sir) town

I think she should live and the boy that finds her diary saves her and while she's unconscious (From the fire) reads it.The boy should also be a bounty hunter (Good plot twists are needed) ;)


I think the boy's name should be Onkei (Japanese for bounty)

BTW How old is she?


Pic of boy (Probably 17)

I think your story sounds very interesting. I'm not big on paranormal stuffs, but this sounds good. I think maybe Rae should get killed in the fire and the boy should find her journal but Rae's spirit is still making entries in the journal. Good luck on your story. :)

I honestly think that you should have her die. That way, the ending is unexpected.

i think she would die and he finds her journal and kind of falls in love with just her writing and stuff maybe years later the witches get set fre and the boy sets out to find one and he brings her back to life maybe it might not work but i hope i helped the boy maybe his name could be Travis

how about:
God gave us Life
One door closed
Ever for the taking
One life
gone from forever
life without love
Fire of life
The darkness of life
never say never
P.s I would SO read that story!!!

i think you should call it "the young witch" or "A young girl with special powers"