Are these good? Please help! Thanks! <3

These are some songs I wrote. Are they any good?

Your one last wish,
Remains unsaid,
You’ll cry into the night,
On your death bed,
Dying,
How will they remember you,
When you’re gone?
Six feet,
Underground,
You lay,
In a coffin filled with silk,
Wilted flowers strewn about,
How will they remember you,
When you’re not around?
They throw dirt,
Over your grave,
Your unseeing eyes,
Wide open,
All of your,
Hearts desires are gone,
Your mind no longer corrupted,
How will they remember you,
When you’re gone?
Six feet,
Underground,
You lay,
In a coffin filled with silk,
Wilted flowers strewn about,
How will they remember you,
When you’re not around?
Five bullets,
Implanted in your pale skin,
Your face is all red and white,
It’s your turn,
Is there life after death?
Tell me now.
How will they remember you,
When you’re gone?
Six feet,
Underground,
You lay,
In a coffin filled with silk,
Wilted flowers strewn about,
How will they remember you,
When you’re not around?
When you’re gone,
Your loved ones crying,
But they’ll forget you,
Live on with life soon,
So soon.

I lay my head on your chest,
Hear your steady heartbeat,
As we lay on the grass,
Nothing could go wrong,
The happiness to strong,
But I didn’t know this cruel world,
Would do something so horrid,
I kneel by your bloody body,
Weep,
Then realize what I’ve done wrong,
Your eyeless face,
Stares into my soul,
Your gaping mouth,
Opens and closes,
I kneel by your bloody body,
Weep,
Then realize what I’ve done wrong,
Outstretch your arms,
Call to me,
Yelling come back,
My sweet darling,
I still scream,
Sit up in my bed,
The nightmares,
They still race through my head,
Of your outstretched arms,
Your distorted cries,
I kneel by your bloody body,
Weep,
Then realize what I’ve done wrong,
Memories will haunt me,
Haunt me for my life,
‘Till I join you,
‘Till I die.