Nikki Reed

I woke up to the smell of breakfast down stairs, but I wasn’t sure if it was really made or if Jacob had tried to kill my kitchen down stairs. I grabbed my bathrobe and ran down the stairs faster then a normal human could. “Jacob Black what have you done to my…” He turned around wearing my new apron and had flower all over his face. But my kitchen was spotless and my Jacob was covered in food. “I tried to keep it clean so you wouldn’t die when you came down stairs.” Jacob told me while whipping the flower off with the apron and walking towards me. “So what do you think?” I...

(I am sorry, I think I think I have writers block, I dont know how or what to write about. Like a honey moon or anything like that.)

Sawyer and I we to the reception, it was beautiful. Everyone came around and hugged Sawyer and I, told us congradulations. Before we knew it, it was time for everyone to leave. We decide not go on a honeymoon but to just stay at home and relax. We started helping everyone take down the decorations from the wedding and reception. I hated taking everything down because it all looked normal. It didn't take long, than me and Sawyer enjoyed some alone time together....

Chapter 2

Bella’s POV

It was the first day of classes. Edward left early. I called Jacob and asked him to pick up Nessie. Alice went to school with me. She’s talking so many things.
“Bella, There’s a new shop on Seattle. You want to come with me? Rosalie said that the clothes there were amazing.”
I’m not actually listening to her because I’m thinking about Nessie’s nightmare.
Who was that girl?
Is she in love with Edward?
Is Edward in love with her too?
Will she really break our family?
Is Edward really going to leave us?
Why?
Nessie’s face were still on my mind.
She was really hurt.
Then,...

The Character


Name: Alec

Type: Vampire

Special Ability: Blocks the senses

About Them: A member of the Volturi's guards, Alec is able to block people's senses. His extremely powerful gift can make people blind, deaf, and numb to any feeling if he wishes to. Unlike many of the vampires his gift is visible and it appears in the form of a clear hazy mist. We learn of Alec's power in Breaking Dawn when he attempts to use it on the Cullen family's gathered witnesses. However, the mist hit Bella's 'shield' and went around it as Bella's shield was a bubble protecting the people gathered. Alec did not retract...

It happens. There’s no avoiding it. When you can see the darkness coming, there’s nothing you can do rather than lie there helplessly, waiting. Waiting for the torment to end. Then finally, when you know it’s all over, there’s that one ray of hope willing to take your life back. So you reach out for it, not wanting to loose it. Lock it in a box and throw away the key.
“Charlie how long ago was it when you found her?”
That calm voice echoed around the large space in my empty head. The light was fading, seeping out the sides of the box that I locked it in. It was escaping fast and...

The Character


Name: Marcus

Type: Vampire

Special Ability: Can sense relationships

About Them: Marcus was once one of the prominent leaders of the Volturi in Volterra, Italy. He has the ability to sense relationships and his former wife who is now deceased, Didyme, had the ability to make others happy. After the sudden and shocking death of Didyme Marcus became extremely apathetic and disinterested in life. As a result he voted against destroying little Renesmee in an 'almost bored fashion' without so much as a glance to the Cullens and their allies. Marcus has jett black hair with the fiery red...

1) We never get to hear about Edward's bachelor party, and did Alice even plan a bachelorette party for Bella?

2) There was not enough character development for the Denali clan. I felt like they were just empty, filler-characters to give the Cullens allies later on in the book.

3) The story of the 'immortal children' was just randomly thrown into the story at the wrong time and felt out of place. I would have rather learnt more about the Denali clan than their deceased mother.

4) I absolutely loved the wedding ceremony that Alice planned (Go Team Alice!) and in my head, the dresses, decorations,...