Twilight Series Article: poem, please share your opinions

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posted by ohhannie

it's about bella's and edward's wedding night

My dream day was here
i was glad and excited
i felt like my life's meaning was clear
to walk down the isle with my sweet prince
i thank god for this gift

edward love of mine,
tonight i'm yours for the first time
just to think about it
sends shivers down my spine

put your cold hand in mine
so i can show you the way to a place you've never been
right there on my body
felling a way a woman should feel

when you touch me
when you kiss me
when you're deep inside me
the cold, the pain nothing matters
this night will not be in vain

samantha1111, amber24232 and 50 others like this

silvia09 i think it's beautiful

twilight825 thats awsome i love it...... awwwww its so sweet i might cry

bellamay I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOUR TALKING ABOUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! http://images.fanpop.com/images/emoticons/worried.jpg

Blossom71 You did a great job!sweet

lilyZ I like it!

Annabelle1239 ohhhhhh i loved it! it was so nice

rocker46 that was so sweet.i loved it

BellaCullenHale beautiful.

Me-Nyla Coolio!

vampiregrrl999 beautiful! 5 stars!

NewMoonG WOW. That was really touching, and I understood it. Come on I'm only 10 and I know what it means.

NewMoonG But after all, it was the most beautiful thing ever. (besides what Edward said to Bella in Ecipse: "Sleep, my Bella. Dream happy dreams.Your the only one who has ever touched my heart. Sleep my only love."

NewMoonG "Sleep, my Bella. Dream happy dreams. Your the only one who has ever touched my heart. It will always be yours. Sleep, my only love."

TWILIGHTFAN1557 that was soooo SWEET & romantic. LOVED IT!!!!!

Jalice21 cool

uniquezandy its so deep and emotional. it's really gd.

caribbeangirl omg this is so sweet totally edward

keily323 Wow.......... Amazing.....best posm ive heard since robert frost!!!

ros59 amazing!

JustLikeBella25 I don't think the weddin was her dream day. Remember in the book? She didn't really want to marry Edward. She just wanted to be his forever. But ur poem was really good. I'll give u that. Make sure u read mine. I've made one about Bella. Read and like!

kuku809 alright not bad

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Twilight lovers

posted by twilightcrazy12

okey so when i first started reading twilight my friend who is a guy was like all talking crap about it.... and i told him off because twilight is the best book ever. so he wanted to know why i was so hooked onto the the twilight books and so this year he started rreading them and it turns out that he LOVES the twilight series. and i was like see i told you that it wasn't just a chick flick. i know tons of guys who have read twilight and they all liked it and im glad that some guys read it no matter what other people thought about them..... so what i guess im trying to say is that we as girls should give those guys who have read the book some credit for having courage then them finding out that once again the girls were right....... because TWILIGHT IS THE BEST BOOK EVER.............
thanks for reading im really new at this as some of guys can tell