All credit belongs to Stephenie Meyer. This story is based on her book series the Twilight Saga.
This is my 1st time writing ANYTHING so sorry if its bad. What im writing is basically a Twilight kinda thing but writen the way I want it so ya it will sound alot like Twilight but it's all I could think to write about. Please read it and tell me what you think. __________________________________________________
Bella's POV
I had moved to Forks to give my mom her time with her new husband. I knew it didn't bother her when I was there but I felt like she wanted more time with him. But I honestly didn't want to move tho I would never tell Renee or Charlie that. I was a fan of dark and rain,wich was basically all Forks, Washington was so it could be worse. Forks was a small town hardly anyone knew about unless you lived there and everyone knew everything about anyone who lived there. That's what I liked I didn't like living in a city where no one could be trusted, it didn't feel safe to me.
I had just gotten to Charlie's after an queit car ride with him. Nethier one of us was talkative wich was fine with me. I was busy anyway doing what I do best, worry. What if no one liked me and I didn't fit in, or what if everyone thought I was mean or ugly. I know they were stupid but I couldn't help it. I wasn't actually worried that people would think I was ugly but it crossed my mind anyway. I was 5ft.5in., with "dirty" blonde hair and green eyes.I was extremly shy and had a bit of low self confidence. I was also a bit of a nerd. I loved to read. But I guess thats pretty average. Once i was at Charlie's he went straight to the tv, this didn't suprise me he wasn't really good at keeping someone company unless they were just like him. I knew where my room was so I headed straight there wanting to get settled as soon as possible cause Charlie started me in school the next day.
This is my 1st time writing ANYTHING so sorry if its bad. What im writing is basically a Twilight kinda thing but writen the way I want it so ya it will sound alot like Twilight but it's all I could think to write about. Please read it and tell me what you think. __________________________________________________
Bella's POV
I had moved to Forks to give my mom her time with her new husband. I knew it didn't bother her when I was there but I felt like she wanted more time with him. But I honestly didn't want to move tho I would never tell Renee or Charlie that. I was a fan of dark and rain,wich was basically all Forks, Washington was so it could be worse. Forks was a small town hardly anyone knew about unless you lived there and everyone knew everything about anyone who lived there. That's what I liked I didn't like living in a city where no one could be trusted, it didn't feel safe to me.
I had just gotten to Charlie's after an queit car ride with him. Nethier one of us was talkative wich was fine with me. I was busy anyway doing what I do best, worry. What if no one liked me and I didn't fit in, or what if everyone thought I was mean or ugly. I know they were stupid but I couldn't help it. I wasn't actually worried that people would think I was ugly but it crossed my mind anyway. I was 5ft.5in., with "dirty" blonde hair and green eyes.I was extremly shy and had a bit of low self confidence. I was also a bit of a nerd. I loved to read. But I guess thats pretty average. Once i was at Charlie's he went straight to the tv, this didn't suprise me he wasn't really good at keeping someone company unless they were just like him. I knew where my room was so I headed straight there wanting to get settled as soon as possible cause Charlie started me in school the next day.
Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant Ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant Ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant Ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
desk and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant Ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
When we rushed in Sergeant Ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant Ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant Ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
desk and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant Ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.
But after reading all four books I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favorite author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to love HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publish in the near future.
But after reading all four books I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favorite author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to love HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publish in the near future.