heyy here's my new fanfic it doesn't have a name yet so if you have any ideas let me know please.
Chapter 1.
'Bella, oh Bella. My sweet baby sister.' I heard in my head. "Lily?" I asked out loud. 'Shh. You can only here me in your head. I'm coming don't worry. We'll be together again.' She said before fading out of my head. "Bella who are you talking to? Who's Lily?" Edward asked waking me up. I was alseep? Okay it was just a dream. "Oh, just a dream."
It's been 10 years today that I haven't seen Lily. She had gone missing right from her bedroom. I was 9 and she was 16. So long ago. Too long. I missed her dearly. I never told Edward about Lily. Jake never mentions her because he loved her like an older sister. The truth is we both miss her.
Edward repeated again. "Bella? Who's Lily? I bursted out crying. "My-my sister." I said. "Oh. Bella. I'm so sorry. What happened?" I looked up at him. "I was 9 and she was 16. We were playing and I said I was hungry she made me a snack while we waited for our parents to come home. I heard her cell phone ring and she ran upstairs. I remember sitting there for a half hour waiting for her. She never came back down. When I went upstairs to her room the window was smashed. I couldn't remember my parents phone number so I called 9-1-1. I told them my sister was watching me and she's no where to be found. I remember crying when my parents came home to the police in their house. 10 years today she's been missing. And I-I miss her!" I started to sob.
Edward craddled me in his arms. "Then the worst part is I have a dream about her!" Edward rocked us back and forth. "It's okay. She's in a better place." Edward comforted me.
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I know this is really short but I want to know what you think so I know wiether or not to continue this story.
Chapter 1.
'Bella, oh Bella. My sweet baby sister.' I heard in my head. "Lily?" I asked out loud. 'Shh. You can only here me in your head. I'm coming don't worry. We'll be together again.' She said before fading out of my head. "Bella who are you talking to? Who's Lily?" Edward asked waking me up. I was alseep? Okay it was just a dream. "Oh, just a dream."
It's been 10 years today that I haven't seen Lily. She had gone missing right from her bedroom. I was 9 and she was 16. So long ago. Too long. I missed her dearly. I never told Edward about Lily. Jake never mentions her because he loved her like an older sister. The truth is we both miss her.
Edward repeated again. "Bella? Who's Lily? I bursted out crying. "My-my sister." I said. "Oh. Bella. I'm so sorry. What happened?" I looked up at him. "I was 9 and she was 16. We were playing and I said I was hungry she made me a snack while we waited for our parents to come home. I heard her cell phone ring and she ran upstairs. I remember sitting there for a half hour waiting for her. She never came back down. When I went upstairs to her room the window was smashed. I couldn't remember my parents phone number so I called 9-1-1. I told them my sister was watching me and she's no where to be found. I remember crying when my parents came home to the police in their house. 10 years today she's been missing. And I-I miss her!" I started to sob.
Edward craddled me in his arms. "Then the worst part is I have a dream about her!" Edward rocked us back and forth. "It's okay. She's in a better place." Edward comforted me.
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I know this is really short but I want to know what you think so I know wiether or not to continue this story.
