This is the Twilight fanfic story I'm working on. I just finished the first chapter.Hope you guys like it and let me know what you think in comments =)
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I looked at the Cullens. Jasper and Alice were holding hands, Emmett was fooling around, Rosalie stared at me coldly, and Edward held me in his arms tightly. I could feel his cold chest against mine. I was wondering what Jacob was doing with his new girlfriend, Sarah. But that didn’t matter now. I was with my family and the love of my life. I glanced at Alice, who was still holding Jasper’s hand. I’ve seen them hold hands before, but never like this. It was as if they would lose each other if they let go. I pushed Edward away curiously.
“What’s wrong?” he asked in a shocked tone.
“Nothing. I was just curious.”
“About what?”
“Jasper and Alice,” I whispered.
“What about them?” Edward asked me in a hushed voice.
“I’ve never seen them hold hands like that before.”
I looked up at Edward. He was staring at Jasper and Alice.
“Neither have I,” he said quietly.
I looked back at the two. Alice noticed me this time. Her smile faded. She looked at me accusingly. I’ve never seen this look come from her before. I looked closely at her. I realized she wasn’t staring at me. She was staring at Edward. Then, she turned to Jasper again. Suddenly, Jasper fell. His hand was on his chest. Alice jumped up from her seat and kneeled down toward her soul mate. Now all the Cullens rushed to Jasper. Edward hopped up with me and practically started running toward his brother. He had a worried look on his face. Carlisle turned toward me and Edward.
"We need to get him upstairs,"Carlisle said worried.
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I looked at the Cullens. Jasper and Alice were holding hands, Emmett was fooling around, Rosalie stared at me coldly, and Edward held me in his arms tightly. I could feel his cold chest against mine. I was wondering what Jacob was doing with his new girlfriend, Sarah. But that didn’t matter now. I was with my family and the love of my life. I glanced at Alice, who was still holding Jasper’s hand. I’ve seen them hold hands before, but never like this. It was as if they would lose each other if they let go. I pushed Edward away curiously.
“What’s wrong?” he asked in a shocked tone.
“Nothing. I was just curious.”
“About what?”
“Jasper and Alice,” I whispered.
“What about them?” Edward asked me in a hushed voice.
“I’ve never seen them hold hands like that before.”
I looked up at Edward. He was staring at Jasper and Alice.
“Neither have I,” he said quietly.
I looked back at the two. Alice noticed me this time. Her smile faded. She looked at me accusingly. I’ve never seen this look come from her before. I looked closely at her. I realized she wasn’t staring at me. She was staring at Edward. Then, she turned to Jasper again. Suddenly, Jasper fell. His hand was on his chest. Alice jumped up from her seat and kneeled down toward her soul mate. Now all the Cullens rushed to Jasper. Edward hopped up with me and practically started running toward his brother. He had a worried look on his face. Carlisle turned toward me and Edward.
"We need to get him upstairs,"Carlisle said worried.
okay so we all know that edward is the best charcter in twilight. why? because of how loving he is. He treats bella like if she were gold and his biggest treasure.Many of us wish to have a boyfriend or girlfriend like edward. It makes someone really happy to be loved so greatly.
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in love and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would love edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the books yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank you for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please comment of wat u think of my article...=þ
Edward is amazing. That is why he is the best character of twilight because he really shows how much hes in love and protects bella through alot of troubles. Another reason why we would love edward would be because he is so hot!! hes the best looking in the movie! He is so GOOD looking...We all think that right? Cuz its so true!! hes awesome!!
okay so i havent read any of the books yet...but im judging from all the previews ive seen of the movie. Dont worry, ima read the book this week...ima go buy it at the store to read it! im so excited...!!!!! >.<
thank you for taking your time to read this (if u did read it...) please comment of wat u think of my article...=þ