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posted by Tatti
I'm sorry for posting three chapters with "unexpexted" instead of "unexpected", I edited that and feel pretty stupid XD Hope you'll enjoy my new chapter.

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4th chapter Guessing

Edward

"And what is wrong with Emi being so fast?" Rosalie asked angrily when we returned home.You're jealous, that's it. I rolled my eyes at her mental tone - there was no way that Rosalie would turn against baby whom she wished for so long.
"There's nothing wrong with her" I answered as calmly as I could "If there is something wrong, that would be the situation - three half-vampire babies left on our stairs. Doesn't sound weird?"
"The letter, Edward, did you read it? That explanation wasn't enough?" and added in her thoughts You're disappointed cause my girl who were adopted is better then your own daughter.
I stared at her shocked - I never heard and never even imagined Rosalie saying something like this about Nessie. I growled but Emmett put his hand on my shoulder.
"Calm down, man" he said and I knew he was right. As much as weird it'll sound but this time Rosalie wasn't trying to be mean, she was overprotective of Emi. She simply loved her too much to suspect anything.
"I'm sorry. I guess, I'm just surprised. Besides, except for Nessie and Nahuel, we didn't knew any other half-vampires to compare" I tried to get rid of my suspicious thoughts.
That evening I reported Bella everything that happened. I tried to sound confident hoping she won't worry but she was too accurate.
"I know it's not fair to doubt three little children but how cannot I? It's not a daily news where mom leaves her baby to strangers"
"I agree that's strange but I have an idea. These babies were born about the same time and that means their mothers conceived about the same time too. I think, their father might be the same - he planned this. Remember Joham, Nahuel's father? What if Emi's, Nick's and Jalley's father is also like him? Calling himself a scientist..." I watched Bella proceeding my words.
"Poor babies..." she whispered "But why he left them?"
"Well, the letter said that parents are dead - I assume the mothers, or abandoned them - I guess that might be their father. Maybe he decided they're not worthy his time"
"That could be possible... But who is Doreen then?" Bella wasn't giving up her suspicion easily.
"A friend?" I suggested. "Someone who knew about his plans and helped them"
Bella didn't look convinced so I tried again.
"Honey, I agree that it's not something usual. But what other choice do we have? We can't abandon them too."
"You're right. I don't know why I'm making such a big deal of everything in the first place" she sighed and I hugged her.
"You just care for your family. It's natural" I whispered kissing her neck.
Next morning I was greeted with laugh.
"Hey, Edward, how about the race? My princess is always ready!" Emmett offered and snuggled Emi.
"No thanks"
"What about you?" Jasper turned to Jalley. I needed few seconds to realize that they were fighting playfully. I guess, Jasper tuned into father-mode too.
"No" Jalley shook her head "I'm not a bit as fast as Emi" she complained "Or as strong as Nick"
"Nick is strong?" I asked surprised.
"Well, he's strongest of us three"
I went upstairs where Nick and Esme were watching cartoon.
"Hi, Esme, Nick. Watching TV?" I tried to sound casual.
"Yes. Want to join us?" Esme suggested while stroking boy's hair.
"No. Actually, I'm here to offer a little challenge for Nick" I watched Esme's surprised expression and continued "You see, Jalley mentioned that you're very strong and I decided to find out if she's right"
Nick looked at Esme waiting for her reaction. She smiled.
"Go boys, have some fun"
Nick jumped from sofa, hugged Esme and cheerfully followed me downstairs. Emmett and Jasper also joined us. I decided that football would be a good choice to value Nick's strength.
"One, two, three. Go!" Emmett threw me a ball and I watched Nick running to knock me down. I slowed my pace so he could reach me and prepared. BUMP! I was flying backwards. When I hit the ground I realized that even Emmett sometimes weren't able to knock my so hard as Nick just did. Great! Now every toddler in our home could joke how they won against me. I heard Emmett's laugh.
"You're losing your form, bro!" he exclaimed.
I got up off the ground and went to them trying to snap out so they wouldn't notice my concern. One girl with superspeed, one boy with superstrength. What I should expect from Jalley then?

Thanks for reading!
hey.okay two things ive got to do. first Bella and Edward are supposed to be inside the house not out it. Soz for the mistake :) and i apologise again because Carrie ann was trying to do what Stephanie Meyer did in breaking down with the house standing up and the game with the score.
second is, remember carrie anns in france and im not on after friday till september. anyway thanks.

The next day was the day that Nessie was bringing Cally and Kris to meet us. Alice was running around trying to make sure that the house was cleaner then the already spotless state it usually is in.
It was just before...
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posted by callejahLUVSed
okay guys! please keep up the comments :) next chapter should be up soon!

CHAPTER FIVE- The Volturi

I had met the Volturi twice in 90 years. That doesn’t happen to most vampires. The first was brutal. I don’t even know how it started but for some peculiar reason, they thought I had harmed one of the Volturi guards, as his disappearance occurred the same time I was turned. Carlisle was out hunting. Let me get one thing straight. The Volturi aren’t just ‘special’ vampires. They are vampire royalty, the guardians of the vampires, if you will. So basically, you don’t piss them off....
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posted by VAMPirella1997
End of part 4:
When we opened the door, we were greeted by a shocking sight. A terrible sight. Because it meant that we hadn't left fast enough. We were being exposed to the town. And they believed...

Part 6:
I gasped. It was so quiet that only Alice would have heard. Alice was standing behind me. She stood on her tip-toes to see over my shoulders. "Oh my God." She murmured. Again, only we could here each other. Angela was standing on the doorstep, her face livid. What looked like almost the whole town stood behind her, all their faces the same mask of fury-and a slight hint of fear in some....
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posted by bubble_babe
Ok don't get me wrong I love the Cullens but take a look at what I would do if I was a Cullen


I would hot wire Edwards car and take it for a joy ride

I would go into my life story when ever I'm board

I would never sleep so I would jump all over

I use the saying "oh bite me" alot and I don't normaily get into fights but this is the Cullens we'r talking about

Sometimes I say my thoughts out-loud

I would think about Jakes body

I would be mad that I'm young and no guy would want to date a girl like me

I'd copy Edward

I'd piss off Edward

^^If I did I'd say Bella did it^^

I might crack up when he trys to hold his anger

I would jump off a big tree a yell "I belive I can fly"

And most of all I'm Crazy

So tell me if I should be a Cullen
posted by callejahLUVSed
new fanfic, brought to you by the same author of me and the cullens! LOL so.. read it, enjoy it! new chapter should be up by tomorrow.. COMMENT AND REVIEW!

CHAPTER ONE- Who I am

"GAME ON, BROTHER", I whispered, so quiet that no human would be able to hear it but loud enough for Emmett to understand. We always did this, had sprinting races, 10kms long. Jasper (my older, older brother) never bothered racing me.
"Game on, little sister", he whispered back. We held these races in the forest, because if any human saw our races, we’d make the front page. So I guess it’s a good thing we live Forks,...
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posted by edwardcullen865
when we arrived home Nessie and Jacob were asleep.Nessie on the couch , and Jacob on the floor.i walked into Mason's room and layed him down for bed . when i walked back into the living room Edward had put Nessie in her room and was about to wake up Jake.
" no don't he has probably had a tiring day and needs some rest." i told Edward before he could wake up Jacob.
i walked into our bedroom and straight to the closet alice made for us. i changed into some silf pjs .it seemed that was all my closet had was silk.
i went back into the bedroom and laid in bed.i was waiting for Edward .i waited for...
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hey people. heres the long awaited part 6. i finally got it done! i really hope it makes sense because i had to add quite abit of extra detail to make this part make sense and to keep the interest. thank you all for reading it. i hope you like it :)

part 5
We made it to forks hospital quickly, for human eyes maybe but the car wouldn’t go fast enough for me.
I walked to the reception and asked to see Charlie, but they wanted to know the relationship between us. It took another half an hour till I could persuade the nurse to let me see him. I took a seep breath before I walked into the room. Right...
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posted by CoolMandyz43
Hi my name is Amanda and I have helped a few people out on fanpop. I'm in a college English course and wanted to put up and ad for myself! Anyone looking for an editor for there fan fiction I'm the one. I do not changes stories I just add more descriptive elements like how stephanie Myers is so descriptive. You can email your story at CoolMandyz43@Aol.com and then I will send them back to you and you can post it or change somethings I did. I would love to write my own fan fiction but I'm not a great idea person but I can really edit stories to the point of perfection! So anyone who wants a helping POV get at me!
posted by renesmeblack
2. Problems



The bell rang to lunch. Jacob sprinted to the cafeteria doors. I sprinted to the wall. Only a few minutes. Gotta make it quick. I desguised myself as Jacob and ran to Renesmee. There she was, looking like a goddess, her hair twisting freely in the autumn breeze.
"Boo," I whispered romantically in her ear. She jumped and started to laugh. Then she grabbed my hair and started kissing me. It was perfect. I removed the flask from my pocket and placed the potion in my fingers. Then I wove them through her silky hair. She pulled away and I took off my desguise. She gasped.
"You're not Jacob!...
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posted by Edward_Bella234
This is for people who have been reading Esme's Story:

I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please comment and tell me which ones you like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:

Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment

If you can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a more interesting name so it draws more attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a list of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!

THANK YOU!!!
posted by Natalia94
----------Edward and his family leave Forks because he believes he is endangering Bella's life. Bella falls into a deep depression, until she develops a strong friendship with werewolf Jacob Black. Jacob and the other wolves in his tribe must protect her from Victoria, a vampire seeking to avenge her mate James' death by killing Bella. A misunderstanding occurs, and Edward believes Bella is dead. Edward decides to commit suicide in Volterra, Italy, but he is stopped by Bella and Alice, Edward's sister. They meet with the Volturi, a powerful coven of vampires, and are released on the condition...
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Its short sorry. its supposed to be a cliff hanger. the next one is a lot longer.
I promise.


Bella's Pov.

We all looked at each other. That scream was SO familiar. Where's Alice?
Alice?

"Alice? Alice where are you?!" I shouted.

Then there was another yell coming from the middle door.
Then we realized. Alice went ahead of us and went towards the middle
section. We all ran as fast as we could. Edward smashed the door
and there they were. Alice, The mysterious man, and Jasper, with
mysterious purple eyes.

"Surprised to see me?" the man and Jasper said at once.
Writting part 30 on my spot! ^_^

[i]Jacob's POV [i]

I still can't believe this... Bella? Why would for any reason she would do that? I know that she like "mind controlled" but still!!!

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Then we saw a small red house. The Volturi can't fit in there! It's too small. Edward knocked on the door and the door opened. I looked around, the place was old, but fully decorated with picture frames, red flags, and some maps of the world. This place is larger than what it looked like outside.

In the end of the hall there were three chairs, thrones I guess. I couldn't reconize who was in the center or...
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posted by Isabellaashley
PREFACE


The woods were filled with silence and I looked around for any signs of the slayer. As I heard the leaves on the ground rustling, I turned around and there he appeared from the treetops of a nearby tree and he gave me a sly smile which sent shivers down my spine before slowly approaching me and my heart was pounding inside my chest. I was vulnerable as there wasn’t anyone to protect me and I knew that I was going to die here, alone. Please let this be over fast, I thought to myself.
Every step that he took towards me was another step closer to death. His long, black hair was flowing...
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For a special treat, I'll add one more here for today. I wrote until part 18 in my spot. So if you are eager for more, check it out!



Edward's POV

Bella? Why does she have a blank face? It reminds me of Alice when she gets a vision. But Bella can't see visions!

Then Bella startled me by saying " Rosalie and Alice are near our vacation house. I heard Rosalie SCREAM!"

Once she said that, everyone got off from the couch and we all ran full speed to our vacation house. Oh crap, PLEASE tell me no one is going to go inside, we didn't cover the damage.....


Well thank GOD we aren't going inside. Most...
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I promoted my stories and my confessions by making a new spot. It's name is my username patrisha727. I will post up more articles there than here. So if you would want to read more, cheack out my spot and check news in the forum for rules and rewards if you participate ( it'll explain what I'm talking about ) and for additional news in the future. I'll post announcements from there and if there are any delays. PLEASE JOIN MY SPOT!!!!! YOU'LL BE REWARDED IF YOU DO!!!!!!

Bella's POV

After that call with Rosalie, I announced to everyone, the Cullens and the pack on where Alice and Rosalie werre...
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posted by Doopey
Hey ... This is my first fanfiction :D so if its not good just give me some constructive critism to make it better. Thanks (:


Preface.



The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
posted by Isabellaashley
Hey everyone, I'm back and trying to complete my story as I had been busy with my exams and now my school holidays has just started so I am gonna try to get some new ideas!!! This is the continuation of twilight(MODIFIED)so please read the preface in my previous article about 2 months ago!!! Thanks!!!

Chapter 1

I woke up panting and out of breath in my bed and I sat up before turning on my bedside lamp and looked around my small bedroom. I could still hear my father's loud snores from his room besides the silence and darkness that filled the house. My life felt different ever since I had moved...
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posted by Edward_lover101
Today was the first day of school for Reneseme, me and Edward too. We packed her backpack.
"Reneseme. Don't let anyone trade lunches with you ok. And don't tell them your a vampire."
"Ok, daddy" Reneseme's school was in the same building as the high school. Edward and I walked her to her first class. Then we saw the jock. He saw Reneseme.
"Hey, cutie. Are these two you aunt and uncle?"
"No." she said in her high toned voise. "This is my mommy and daddy."
"I'm sorry I didn't get your name. What was it?" Edward said to the jock.
"Oh, It's Andy."
"Andy this is Reneseme. Now if you will exuse us we...
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Bella's pov

I woke up again and I was still on the bed. I started to look around and I didn’t see him anywhere.
I slowly got out of bed and walked around. Where is he? Is he gone. I couldn’t hear anything. I gently walked thru the living room and noticed I’ve past out for 2 days again. I looked around the room again when I heard the front door, I grabbed a vase and walked gently toward the door, it opened and I jumped.
“Alice” I whispered “I could have hit you with the vase”
“Lucky you stopped in time” she said amused. I looked over her shoulder and the rest of the Cullen’s...
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