I'm sorry for posting three chapters with "unexpexted" instead of "unexpected", I edited that and feel pretty stupid XD Hope you'll enjoy my new chapter.
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4th chapter Guessing
Edward
"And what is wrong with Emi being so fast?" Rosalie asked angrily when we returned home.You're jealous, that's it. I rolled my eyes at her mental tone - there was no way that Rosalie would turn against baby whom she wished for so long.
"There's nothing wrong with her" I answered as calmly as I could "If there is something wrong, that would be the situation - three half-vampire babies left on our stairs. Doesn't sound weird?"
"The letter, Edward, did you read it? That explanation wasn't enough?" and added in her thoughts You're disappointed cause my girl who were adopted is better then your own daughter.
I stared at her shocked - I never heard and never even imagined Rosalie saying something like this about Nessie. I growled but Emmett put his hand on my shoulder.
"Calm down, man" he said and I knew he was right. As much as weird it'll sound but this time Rosalie wasn't trying to be mean, she was overprotective of Emi. She simply loved her too much to suspect anything.
"I'm sorry. I guess, I'm just surprised. Besides, except for Nessie and Nahuel, we didn't knew any other half-vampires to compare" I tried to get rid of my suspicious thoughts.
That evening I reported Bella everything that happened. I tried to sound confident hoping she won't worry but she was too accurate.
"I know it's not fair to doubt three little children but how cannot I? It's not a daily news where mom leaves her baby to strangers"
"I agree that's strange but I have an idea. These babies were born about the same time and that means their mothers conceived about the same time too. I think, their father might be the same - he planned this. Remember Joham, Nahuel's father? What if Emi's, Nick's and Jalley's father is also like him? Calling himself a scientist..." I watched Bella proceeding my words.
"Poor babies..." she whispered "But why he left them?"
"Well, the letter said that parents are dead - I assume the mothers, or abandoned them - I guess that might be their father. Maybe he decided they're not worthy his time"
"That could be possible... But who is Doreen then?" Bella wasn't giving up her suspicion easily.
"A friend?" I suggested. "Someone who knew about his plans and helped them"
Bella didn't look convinced so I tried again.
"Honey, I agree that it's not something usual. But what other choice do we have? We can't abandon them too."
"You're right. I don't know why I'm making such a big deal of everything in the first place" she sighed and I hugged her.
"You just care for your family. It's natural" I whispered kissing her neck.
Next morning I was greeted with laugh.
"Hey, Edward, how about the race? My princess is always ready!" Emmett offered and snuggled Emi.
"No thanks"
"What about you?" Jasper turned to Jalley. I needed few seconds to realize that they were fighting playfully. I guess, Jasper tuned into father-mode too.
"No" Jalley shook her head "I'm not a bit as fast as Emi" she complained "Or as strong as Nick"
"Nick is strong?" I asked surprised.
"Well, he's strongest of us three"
I went upstairs where Nick and Esme were watching cartoon.
"Hi, Esme, Nick. Watching TV?" I tried to sound casual.
"Yes. Want to join us?" Esme suggested while stroking boy's hair.
"No. Actually, I'm here to offer a little challenge for Nick" I watched Esme's surprised expression and continued "You see, Jalley mentioned that you're very strong and I decided to find out if she's right"
Nick looked at Esme waiting for her reaction. She smiled.
"Go boys, have some fun"
Nick jumped from sofa, hugged Esme and cheerfully followed me downstairs. Emmett and Jasper also joined us. I decided that football would be a good choice to value Nick's strength.
"One, two, three. Go!" Emmett threw me a ball and I watched Nick running to knock me down. I slowed my pace so he could reach me and prepared. BUMP! I was flying backwards. When I hit the ground I realized that even Emmett sometimes weren't able to knock my so hard as Nick just did. Great! Now every toddler in our home could joke how they won against me. I heard Emmett's laugh.
"You're losing your form, bro!" he exclaimed.
I got up off the ground and went to them trying to snap out so they wouldn't notice my concern. One girl with superspeed, one boy with superstrength. What I should expect from Jalley then?
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4th chapter Guessing
Edward
"And what is wrong with Emi being so fast?" Rosalie asked angrily when we returned home.You're jealous, that's it. I rolled my eyes at her mental tone - there was no way that Rosalie would turn against baby whom she wished for so long.
"There's nothing wrong with her" I answered as calmly as I could "If there is something wrong, that would be the situation - three half-vampire babies left on our stairs. Doesn't sound weird?"
"The letter, Edward, did you read it? That explanation wasn't enough?" and added in her thoughts You're disappointed cause my girl who were adopted is better then your own daughter.
I stared at her shocked - I never heard and never even imagined Rosalie saying something like this about Nessie. I growled but Emmett put his hand on my shoulder.
"Calm down, man" he said and I knew he was right. As much as weird it'll sound but this time Rosalie wasn't trying to be mean, she was overprotective of Emi. She simply loved her too much to suspect anything.
"I'm sorry. I guess, I'm just surprised. Besides, except for Nessie and Nahuel, we didn't knew any other half-vampires to compare" I tried to get rid of my suspicious thoughts.
That evening I reported Bella everything that happened. I tried to sound confident hoping she won't worry but she was too accurate.
"I know it's not fair to doubt three little children but how cannot I? It's not a daily news where mom leaves her baby to strangers"
"I agree that's strange but I have an idea. These babies were born about the same time and that means their mothers conceived about the same time too. I think, their father might be the same - he planned this. Remember Joham, Nahuel's father? What if Emi's, Nick's and Jalley's father is also like him? Calling himself a scientist..." I watched Bella proceeding my words.
"Poor babies..." she whispered "But why he left them?"
"Well, the letter said that parents are dead - I assume the mothers, or abandoned them - I guess that might be their father. Maybe he decided they're not worthy his time"
"That could be possible... But who is Doreen then?" Bella wasn't giving up her suspicion easily.
"A friend?" I suggested. "Someone who knew about his plans and helped them"
Bella didn't look convinced so I tried again.
"Honey, I agree that it's not something usual. But what other choice do we have? We can't abandon them too."
"You're right. I don't know why I'm making such a big deal of everything in the first place" she sighed and I hugged her.
"You just care for your family. It's natural" I whispered kissing her neck.
Next morning I was greeted with laugh.
"Hey, Edward, how about the race? My princess is always ready!" Emmett offered and snuggled Emi.
"No thanks"
"What about you?" Jasper turned to Jalley. I needed few seconds to realize that they were fighting playfully. I guess, Jasper tuned into father-mode too.
"No" Jalley shook her head "I'm not a bit as fast as Emi" she complained "Or as strong as Nick"
"Nick is strong?" I asked surprised.
"Well, he's strongest of us three"
I went upstairs where Nick and Esme were watching cartoon.
"Hi, Esme, Nick. Watching TV?" I tried to sound casual.
"Yes. Want to join us?" Esme suggested while stroking boy's hair.
"No. Actually, I'm here to offer a little challenge for Nick" I watched Esme's surprised expression and continued "You see, Jalley mentioned that you're very strong and I decided to find out if she's right"
Nick looked at Esme waiting for her reaction. She smiled.
"Go boys, have some fun"
Nick jumped from sofa, hugged Esme and cheerfully followed me downstairs. Emmett and Jasper also joined us. I decided that football would be a good choice to value Nick's strength.
"One, two, three. Go!" Emmett threw me a ball and I watched Nick running to knock me down. I slowed my pace so he could reach me and prepared. BUMP! I was flying backwards. When I hit the ground I realized that even Emmett sometimes weren't able to knock my so hard as Nick just did. Great! Now every toddler in our home could joke how they won against me. I heard Emmett's laugh.
"You're losing your form, bro!" he exclaimed.
I got up off the ground and went to them trying to snap out so they wouldn't notice my concern. One girl with superspeed, one boy with superstrength. What I should expect from Jalley then?
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hi i dont know what to call this but heres the first chapter if you have any ideas tell me
"Alice we don't need to dress up it's just high school.again." I said under my breath.
"Oh come on Bella can't you let me have some fun today."
"Fine." I said giving up trying to argue with Alice. Alice had me in dark washed skinny jeans and high heel ankle boots,with a purple long-sleeved layered casual t.
"Just today though."Not wanting her to get the wrong idea that i would let her do this everyday.
"Agreed.Now stay still I'm almost finished.
"Time to go Renesemee,Jacob."I yelled upstairs. Jacob was now moved in with us we all pretty much not breath anymore but we had to get used to it again since we can go to schol again beacause renesemee is 7 now and stoped ageing
"Alice we don't need to dress up it's just high school.again." I said under my breath.
"Oh come on Bella can't you let me have some fun today."
"Fine." I said giving up trying to argue with Alice. Alice had me in dark washed skinny jeans and high heel ankle boots,with a purple long-sleeved layered casual t.
"Just today though."Not wanting her to get the wrong idea that i would let her do this everyday.
"Agreed.Now stay still I'm almost finished.
"Time to go Renesemee,Jacob."I yelled upstairs. Jacob was now moved in with us we all pretty much not breath anymore but we had to get used to it again since we can go to schol again beacause renesemee is 7 now and stoped ageing
This is for people who have been reading Esme's Story:
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please comment and tell me which ones you like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If you can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a more interesting name so it draws more attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a list of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please comment and tell me which ones you like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If you can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a more interesting name so it draws more attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a list of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
Edward's Pov.
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? Or later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? Or later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Renesmee Pov.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back next to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he said gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
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I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back next to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he said gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
__________________________________________________
I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
ALICE AND JASPER:
FOR THE FIRST TIME IN ALMOST A DECADE I FELT HOPE
JASPERS HEART FROZEN IN TIME BY A SINGLE BITE.
FLYING LIKE A HUMMING BIRDS WINGS (THIS LINE WAS SAID TO BELLA BY EDWARD -ECLIPSE-)
HOPE, HAPPINESS, KINDNESS, UNDERSTANDING, AND...LOVE
ALL AT ONCE COMING FROM SUCH A SMALL PERSON.
EMOTIONS HE BEARLY RECONIZED.
EMOTIONS HE WOULD NEVER LEAVE.
EMOTIONS THAT WOULD SOON BE HIS WHOLE LIFE.
EMOTINS THAT BELONGED TO ALICE HIS ONE AND ONLY REASON TO LIVE.
LOVE SO STRONG, THEY WOULD KILL. KILL ONCE, TWICE... UNTIL THEY GOT TO THERE OTHER HALF
ALICE ISNT JUST JASPERS LOVE
SHE IS HIS KEY, HIS KEY TO HAPPINESS
THERE SOULS ATACHED FOREVER
THERE SOULS INTERWINED TOGHETHER
THERE SOULS BELONG TO EACH OTHER
SOULMATES FOR THE REST OF INTERNITY
BROUGHT TO HAPPINESS TOGHETHER AND WHEN IT COMES TIME THEY WILL BE TAKEN OUT TOGHETHER
THANX FOR READING
WRITTEN BY RACHEL KETTLEWELL
TWILIGHT GIRL
FOR THE FIRST TIME IN ALMOST A DECADE I FELT HOPE
JASPERS HEART FROZEN IN TIME BY A SINGLE BITE.
FLYING LIKE A HUMMING BIRDS WINGS (THIS LINE WAS SAID TO BELLA BY EDWARD -ECLIPSE-)
HOPE, HAPPINESS, KINDNESS, UNDERSTANDING, AND...LOVE
ALL AT ONCE COMING FROM SUCH A SMALL PERSON.
EMOTIONS HE BEARLY RECONIZED.
EMOTIONS HE WOULD NEVER LEAVE.
EMOTIONS THAT WOULD SOON BE HIS WHOLE LIFE.
EMOTINS THAT BELONGED TO ALICE HIS ONE AND ONLY REASON TO LIVE.
LOVE SO STRONG, THEY WOULD KILL. KILL ONCE, TWICE... UNTIL THEY GOT TO THERE OTHER HALF
ALICE ISNT JUST JASPERS LOVE
SHE IS HIS KEY, HIS KEY TO HAPPINESS
THERE SOULS ATACHED FOREVER
THERE SOULS INTERWINED TOGHETHER
THERE SOULS BELONG TO EACH OTHER
SOULMATES FOR THE REST OF INTERNITY
BROUGHT TO HAPPINESS TOGHETHER AND WHEN IT COMES TIME THEY WILL BE TAKEN OUT TOGHETHER
THANX FOR READING
WRITTEN BY RACHEL KETTLEWELL
TWILIGHT GIRL
For those of you who don't know me, or have never read my fanfictions, I'm renesmeblack. I write a story from Renesmee, Jacob, Mine, and occasionally Emmett's POV. Now, I have a ton of bad ideas, and some of the things you read from me are crash tests. Thankfully, many of my readers enjoy my fanfictions. The dummy is saved!
My stories are for girls who can't stop reading the books. It's for girls who'd pester Stephenie Meyer to write a sequel, if they had a chance! I love Jacob, so that's another reason why girls read my, frankly, ameteur (hope I spelled that right!) writing. You wanna know the best part?
Okay, here goes nothing.
IT NEVER ENDS!!!
There. I feel better now. Yup, you read correctly. It'll never end until I grow out of the Twilight Stage (like that'll happen.).
For the very few fans I have, thanks for the support and I'll see you in the reading section!
-Thanks!
renesmeblack xoxo
My stories are for girls who can't stop reading the books. It's for girls who'd pester Stephenie Meyer to write a sequel, if they had a chance! I love Jacob, so that's another reason why girls read my, frankly, ameteur (hope I spelled that right!) writing. You wanna know the best part?
Okay, here goes nothing.
IT NEVER ENDS!!!
There. I feel better now. Yup, you read correctly. It'll never end until I grow out of the Twilight Stage (like that'll happen.).
For the very few fans I have, thanks for the support and I'll see you in the reading section!
-Thanks!
renesmeblack xoxo