So I've decided to start new fanfic and I hope it won't be boring. Please comment what you liked the most and what you think I could improve.
It's happening two years after the end of Breaking Dawn.
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Bella
The match was exciting! I was never really into sports but after becoming a vampire (which meant after losing my clumsiness) I started to enjoy it. Edward likes to joke that I'm almost as bad as Emmett. But how can I didn't like that wonderful feeling when you almost fly?
Today's match was also amazing because everyone was playing so we were able to form two strong teams of four people. Nessie was referee and that was good choice cause everybody loved her too much to protest her judging.
When the game ended (my team won!), Emmett and I were the only ones who wanted to repeat it, others had different plans. I was a little bit disappointed but Emmett offered to race who will reach home first and I agreed.
Emmett was about twenty feet behind and I was winning when I suddenly stopped. I smelled unknown vampire.
"What is it?" Emmett asked surprised and frowned when scent reached him. "Who it might be?"
"I don't know" I sniffed the air and was sure that the trail was heading towards our house.
When others caught up we decided to approach.
"Hey, did you smell the scent going away from our home?" Jasper asked when we saw the building. I took the deep breath - he was right.
"Maybe someone was simply curious?" Esme suggested hopefully.
"And then decided not to mess with eight vampires?" Emmett added.
"It is possible, but..." Carlisle was trying to say something when we heard a noise at the main door. It was baby crying.
"A child?" Carlisle asked disbelieving and in a second we were at the stairs leading to the main entrance. In front of the doors was lying a huge cradle. I froze when noticed that there were three fast heartbeats instead of one. Rosalie was the first one who take a look.
"It's three of them" she whispered surprised. "Three babies"
We surrounded the cradle and I saw them myself: three little babies were lying squeezed in one big cradle - one, about month old, crying boy and two bigger, about two-three months old, girls. Esme took the boy and started swaying. The boy was like an angel - pale skin, very light golden hair and gorgeous blue eyes. Rosalie cuddled one of the girls, she was green-eyed and also blond, but her hair touched by sunlight had a strange orange color. Alice took the last one - girl was pale as others with such black eyes that human couldn't separate pupil from iris. Black curls framed her lovely features. Actually, they all were extremely beautiful.
"Poor baby" Esme said still swaying "They look so weak, we should feed them". She went into the house and everyone followed her. Before coming in I throw a gaze into cradle and noticed a letter.
"Uhm, guys? Here's a letter!" I bent to pick it up - it was a simple envelope dedicated For Cullens
"What does it say?" Emmett asked curiously. I opened it and started reading out loud.
Dear Cullens,
I'm very sorry I had to leave you in such situation without giving a chance to choose, but, please trust me, I had no other way. I have heard about your kindness and I think there aren't better parents for these three half-vampire babies than you. Their real parents either died either abandoned them so you are the only hope they have.
Boy's name is Domenico, girls are Emera and Jalline.
Again I'm sorry for everything but I hope you'll make right decision.
Good luck,
Doreen
"She left the babies for us?" Rosalie asked excited.
"Half-vampires?" Jasper asked in less enthusiastic tone.
"I wonder who that Doreen might be..." Carlisle whispered.
"We need to get them blood then" Esme said concerned and everyone draw their attention to babies. I, on the other hand, didn't felt so excited. Three half-vampires? That meant that three woman had to become pregnant from vampire about the same time. And their children ended up right on our stairs. Was it coincidence? Fate? Trap?
Thanks for reading!
It's happening two years after the end of Breaking Dawn.
***
Bella
The match was exciting! I was never really into sports but after becoming a vampire (which meant after losing my clumsiness) I started to enjoy it. Edward likes to joke that I'm almost as bad as Emmett. But how can I didn't like that wonderful feeling when you almost fly?
Today's match was also amazing because everyone was playing so we were able to form two strong teams of four people. Nessie was referee and that was good choice cause everybody loved her too much to protest her judging.
When the game ended (my team won!), Emmett and I were the only ones who wanted to repeat it, others had different plans. I was a little bit disappointed but Emmett offered to race who will reach home first and I agreed.
Emmett was about twenty feet behind and I was winning when I suddenly stopped. I smelled unknown vampire.
"What is it?" Emmett asked surprised and frowned when scent reached him. "Who it might be?"
"I don't know" I sniffed the air and was sure that the trail was heading towards our house.
When others caught up we decided to approach.
"Hey, did you smell the scent going away from our home?" Jasper asked when we saw the building. I took the deep breath - he was right.
"Maybe someone was simply curious?" Esme suggested hopefully.
"And then decided not to mess with eight vampires?" Emmett added.
"It is possible, but..." Carlisle was trying to say something when we heard a noise at the main door. It was baby crying.
"A child?" Carlisle asked disbelieving and in a second we were at the stairs leading to the main entrance. In front of the doors was lying a huge cradle. I froze when noticed that there were three fast heartbeats instead of one. Rosalie was the first one who take a look.
"It's three of them" she whispered surprised. "Three babies"
We surrounded the cradle and I saw them myself: three little babies were lying squeezed in one big cradle - one, about month old, crying boy and two bigger, about two-three months old, girls. Esme took the boy and started swaying. The boy was like an angel - pale skin, very light golden hair and gorgeous blue eyes. Rosalie cuddled one of the girls, she was green-eyed and also blond, but her hair touched by sunlight had a strange orange color. Alice took the last one - girl was pale as others with such black eyes that human couldn't separate pupil from iris. Black curls framed her lovely features. Actually, they all were extremely beautiful.
"Poor baby" Esme said still swaying "They look so weak, we should feed them". She went into the house and everyone followed her. Before coming in I throw a gaze into cradle and noticed a letter.
"Uhm, guys? Here's a letter!" I bent to pick it up - it was a simple envelope dedicated For Cullens
"What does it say?" Emmett asked curiously. I opened it and started reading out loud.
Dear Cullens,
I'm very sorry I had to leave you in such situation without giving a chance to choose, but, please trust me, I had no other way. I have heard about your kindness and I think there aren't better parents for these three half-vampire babies than you. Their real parents either died either abandoned them so you are the only hope they have.
Boy's name is Domenico, girls are Emera and Jalline.
Again I'm sorry for everything but I hope you'll make right decision.
Good luck,
Doreen
"She left the babies for us?" Rosalie asked excited.
"Half-vampires?" Jasper asked in less enthusiastic tone.
"I wonder who that Doreen might be..." Carlisle whispered.
"We need to get them blood then" Esme said concerned and everyone draw their attention to babies. I, on the other hand, didn't felt so excited. Three half-vampires? That meant that three woman had to become pregnant from vampire about the same time. And their children ended up right on our stairs. Was it coincidence? Fate? Trap?
Thanks for reading!
