No one is looking at you, i promise myself but deep, deep inside of me i knew that everyone in Forks was staring at me.
"Mmmm Charlie, can we just go eat at home, i don't want to go to your favorite Restaurant please?" i ask him with my little puppy eyes."Nessi come on you never go out of the woods, now is the time please try?"
well charlie was right but i wasen't hungry anyways i when hunting with my aunt Rosalie 2 days ago, but i will do it just for grandpa.
"Here we are, My number One Restaurant"Charlie said very exited. " yeah dinner time" i reaply as we started walking to the door, everyone started staring at me like i was i weird thing, from another planet."ugh"
"Oh my God you are real beatiful girl, you look like bella and Edward some way" i lady told right away when charlie and i seat down on the corner table.
"Oh yeah thats what too much people say but is immpossible i just move here like 3 weeks agO from Italy, Carlisle is my Uncle"
"Very nice the whole town lOve Mr. and Mrs. Cullen well the whOle family"
"Well kid leets eat because Bella is waiting for yOu" Charlie told me
we started eating and out of the nowere a kid stop on front of our table.
"Hey you are yOu family whith the Cullens?" he ask me as we looked at me very weird. "yes i'm Rennesme Cullen, why?" "Ugh another Cullen Freak in tOwn, well i was just asking because you look like those freaks" as soon he finish whith his comment i get out of th restaurant running with the tears running on my face, how people can think that wa of my family if the only thing that they have been doing is protect Forks, how can they say that.
"Rennesme wait, honey let's go home don't pay attension to those comments"
"i just want to go home Charlie" "yeah we will be there soon"
we took off and when we got to my grandparents house as soon as Charlie stop the car i start running to the house.
"Nessi wait" he yelled "No!!! i want to be alone"
i ran to my room crying because i can't understand how people say those horrible comments.
"Nessi, what happend, cahrlie told me that you were crying, he left very worried about you, can you explain this to me?" mom ask me as she sit down next to me
"Mom i don't want to go out to the human world ever again, they think that we are freaks, they are so rude!!!!! so i'm no going to school, i dont have to"
"Rennesme Carlie Cullen, you are going to school, this monday, no exceptions and you have to deal with it" My dad yelled at my from the door. "But dad you dont unders...."
" i dont have to understand nothing you are going, end of the story" he looked so mad but i didn't know why, i was too confuse
"Edward Mason Cullen don' talk to her like that, just give her some time, she is doing her best"
"oh no you too Bella, Rennesme need to experience the Mortal side, so she is doing what i just said,is it clear?"
we both shake our head, and he leave very angry, something was going on with him, my mom was in shock just like me.
"Mom what was that about?"
"i don't know honey let me go talk to him ok everything is going to be fine" she kissed my forehead and leave the room, i really needed talk to dad, and get things straight up. i started walking to his room.
"Mmmm Charlie, can we just go eat at home, i don't want to go to your favorite Restaurant please?" i ask him with my little puppy eyes."Nessi come on you never go out of the woods, now is the time please try?"
well charlie was right but i wasen't hungry anyways i when hunting with my aunt Rosalie 2 days ago, but i will do it just for grandpa.
"Here we are, My number One Restaurant"Charlie said very exited. " yeah dinner time" i reaply as we started walking to the door, everyone started staring at me like i was i weird thing, from another planet."ugh"
"Oh my God you are real beatiful girl, you look like bella and Edward some way" i lady told right away when charlie and i seat down on the corner table.
"Oh yeah thats what too much people say but is immpossible i just move here like 3 weeks agO from Italy, Carlisle is my Uncle"
"Very nice the whole town lOve Mr. and Mrs. Cullen well the whOle family"
"Well kid leets eat because Bella is waiting for yOu" Charlie told me
we started eating and out of the nowere a kid stop on front of our table.
"Hey you are yOu family whith the Cullens?" he ask me as we looked at me very weird. "yes i'm Rennesme Cullen, why?" "Ugh another Cullen Freak in tOwn, well i was just asking because you look like those freaks" as soon he finish whith his comment i get out of th restaurant running with the tears running on my face, how people can think that wa of my family if the only thing that they have been doing is protect Forks, how can they say that.
"Rennesme wait, honey let's go home don't pay attension to those comments"
"i just want to go home Charlie" "yeah we will be there soon"
we took off and when we got to my grandparents house as soon as Charlie stop the car i start running to the house.
"Nessi wait" he yelled "No!!! i want to be alone"
i ran to my room crying because i can't understand how people say those horrible comments.
"Nessi, what happend, cahrlie told me that you were crying, he left very worried about you, can you explain this to me?" mom ask me as she sit down next to me
"Mom i don't want to go out to the human world ever again, they think that we are freaks, they are so rude!!!!! so i'm no going to school, i dont have to"
"Rennesme Carlie Cullen, you are going to school, this monday, no exceptions and you have to deal with it" My dad yelled at my from the door. "But dad you dont unders...."
" i dont have to understand nothing you are going, end of the story" he looked so mad but i didn't know why, i was too confuse
"Edward Mason Cullen don' talk to her like that, just give her some time, she is doing her best"
"oh no you too Bella, Rennesme need to experience the Mortal side, so she is doing what i just said,is it clear?"
we both shake our head, and he leave very angry, something was going on with him, my mom was in shock just like me.
"Mom what was that about?"
"i don't know honey let me go talk to him ok everything is going to be fine" she kissed my forehead and leave the room, i really needed talk to dad, and get things straight up. i started walking to his room.
This story take place after Nessie is born. Zoey has been in the family since The begining of twilight. Although I don't cover anything from the books. Whatever happen to Bella it happen to Zoey accept getting pregant with a half vampire half human baby. Zoey is in love with Jacob Black but Jake is in love with Nessie. Alice and Jasper are practically her parents. She fill like the outsider because she is not a vampire, warewolf or like Nessie. The Volturi have dicided that she can be a human, until a day after she turns 17. She has her GED so she doesn't have to go to school.
Ok don't get me wrong I love the Cullens but take a look at what I would do if I was a Cullen
I would hot wire Edwards car and take it for a joy ride
I would go into my life story when ever I'm board
I would never sleep so I would jump all over
I use the saying "oh bite me" alot and I don't normaily get into fights but this is the Cullens we'r talking about
Sometimes I say my thoughts out-loud
I would think about Jakes body
I would be mad that I'm young and no guy would want to date a girl like me
I'd copy Edward
I'd piss off Edward
^^If I did I'd say Bella did it^^
I might crack up when he trys to hold his anger
I would jump off a big tree a yell "I belive I can fly"
And most of all I'm Crazy
So tell me if I should be a Cullen
I would hot wire Edwards car and take it for a joy ride
I would go into my life story when ever I'm board
I would never sleep so I would jump all over
I use the saying "oh bite me" alot and I don't normaily get into fights but this is the Cullens we'r talking about
Sometimes I say my thoughts out-loud
I would think about Jakes body
I would be mad that I'm young and no guy would want to date a girl like me
I'd copy Edward
I'd piss off Edward
^^If I did I'd say Bella did it^^
I might crack up when he trys to hold his anger
I would jump off a big tree a yell "I belive I can fly"
And most of all I'm Crazy
So tell me if I should be a Cullen
Hi my name is Amanda and I have helped a few people out on fanpop. I'm in a college English course and wanted to put up and ad for myself! Anyone looking for an editor for there fan fiction I'm the one. I do not changes stories I just add more descriptive elements like how stephanie Myers is so descriptive. You can email your story at CoolMandyz43@Aol.com and then I will send them back to you and you can post it or change somethings I did. I would love to write my own fan fiction but I'm not a great idea person but I can really edit stories to the point of perfection! So anyone who wants a helping POV get at me!
This is for people who have been reading Esme's Story:
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please comment and tell me which ones you like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If you can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a more interesting name so it draws more attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a list of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please comment and tell me which ones you like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If you can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a more interesting name so it draws more attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a list of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
Bella's Pov.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme said wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing you all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking you out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper said calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will show you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme said wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing you all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking you out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper said calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will show you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.
Edward's Pov.
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? Or later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? Or later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This was short for a reason. CLIFFHANGER!!! hehehehehe......
Bella's Pov
I never thought I would lose my family like that. I never would
have thought I put them in so much danger. Especially
my poor Renesmee!!! (sobs)
"WHY!!!!!!!!?????????" I shouted as loud as I could.
Then I started to think, what if I never see them again?
Do I have to marry Jasper to get my family out?
ARE THEY OKAY?!
Then I snapped myself out of that subject.
There are three possible ways of getting my family back to safety.
1: Marry Jasper
2: Get the spell out of Jasper
3: Find a way to find my family then snap my family out of the spell,
then get Jasper out of it and then, fight him if we have to.
I now know what to do.
Then, I went back to the dark black castle to fight Jasper and whoever
the man is...
Bella's Pov
I never thought I would lose my family like that. I never would
have thought I put them in so much danger. Especially
my poor Renesmee!!! (sobs)
"WHY!!!!!!!!?????????" I shouted as loud as I could.
Then I started to think, what if I never see them again?
Do I have to marry Jasper to get my family out?
ARE THEY OKAY?!
Then I snapped myself out of that subject.
There are three possible ways of getting my family back to safety.
1: Marry Jasper
2: Get the spell out of Jasper
3: Find a way to find my family then snap my family out of the spell,
then get Jasper out of it and then, fight him if we have to.
I now know what to do.
Then, I went back to the dark black castle to fight Jasper and whoever
the man is...
Renesmee Pov.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back next to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he said gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
__________________________________________________
I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back next to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he said gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
__________________________________________________
I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
I probaly said thank you thirty times.
When I heard that they didn't have a place to stay i offered for them to stay here. They aren't living in out hotel room but they are only to doors away.
When i woke up i turned to susans side.She wasn't there. A note took her place.
It read
Dear Chris,
I am pretty sure i got you with the note!
The guys said you would think i left. (it worked)
We are hanging out in their room and we are playing spin the bottle. (what!)
Love,
Susan ps. got you again!
I looked at her hand writing it was very pretty.
I got dressed and walked to the elevator.When i noticed i pressed two when i didn't even have to change from 11 the doors closed.I pressed the 11 button mabye 5 times.When it went up I sighed.
...
to be continued...