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Her lips trembled as I began to pull back. “Please Alice; you know it’s only for two days.” I said searching her eyes, my hand running carefully along her back.
She was speechless.
“You know I hate to be away from you too, but this is something I have to do alone, you’ve inspired me to find out more about my past but I have to do it alone.” I said moving my hand to brush the length of her cheek.
Her beautiful face was washed with pain and sadness was rolling over me like waves. I almost gave in and told her I was going to stay with her but she spoke, her expression clearing.
“If this really is something you have to do alone, I guess I have to deal with it.” She said that irresistible pout slipping onto her lips.
“Thank you.” I whispered. Kissing her passionately, are lips lingered together longer than I had planned.
“When are you leaving?” She whispered, her sweet breath sweeping across my face.
“Now.” I said, pulling away from her. I felt her try to stop her emotions for hitting me but it didn’t work too well.
“I love you Jazz.” She smiled as best as she could.
“I love you too Alice.” I whispered kissing her once more before I turned around heading out the front door.
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Her lips trembled as I began to pull back. “Please Alice; you know it’s only for two days.” I said searching her eyes, my hand running carefully along her back.
She was speechless.
“You know I hate to be away from you too, but this is something I have to do alone, you’ve inspired me to find out more about my past but I have to do it alone.” I said moving my hand to brush the length of her cheek.
Her beautiful face was washed with pain and sadness was rolling over me like waves. I almost gave in and told her I was going to stay with her but she spoke, her expression clearing.
“If this really is something you have to do alone, I guess I have to deal with it.” She said that irresistible pout slipping onto her lips.
“Thank you.” I whispered. Kissing her passionately, are lips lingered together longer than I had planned.
“When are you leaving?” She whispered, her sweet breath sweeping across my face.
“Now.” I said, pulling away from her. I felt her try to stop her emotions for hitting me but it didn’t work too well.
“I love you Jazz.” She smiled as best as she could.
“I love you too Alice.” I whispered kissing her once more before I turned around heading out the front door.
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Why is Rosalie so unpopular in the Twilight fandom?
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can you imagine being shown up by someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after reading a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal friends who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can you imagine being shown up by someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after reading a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant Ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant Ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant Ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
desk and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant Ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
When we rushed in Sergeant Ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant Ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant Ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
desk and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant Ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.
But after reading all four books I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favorite author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to love HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publish in the near future.
But after reading all four books I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favorite author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to love HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publish in the near future.
