the funniest thing is, that I don't know why it took me so long to write this chapter. I didn't wanted to write today, but when I read all the comment's, I changed my mind. So... hope you like it :)
xxKatie
Still Edward POV (when Bella leaves)
It took two seconds to understand what Bella said. And one second to stand up and follow her.
The trees where merged, I saw only face on Bella, in front of me. My subconscious was playing with me. I could not understand what is real what is not.
I suddenly stopped. I took a deep breath, trying to smell Bella. But I only smelt animals, and their blood.
Panic took control of me.I tried to run to the opposite side, when to the right or left. Finally I found myself in meadow, kneeling and sobbing.
She was gone...
So was I ..
I feel myself slipping more and more every second without her..I fell as though i am drowning in the inky black darkness that seams to strangle me.
I shut my eyes, I stop struggling, I let darkness overwhelm me.
I felt like shadow.. Empty..
"Edward?" I heard Alice voice, "What's wrong?" she panicked, "what's wrong?" I tried to speak, but nothing came out. "Answer me" she begged "I don't see anything.. what's wrong?"
Hard to answer the question "What's wrong" when nothing is alright.
xxKatie
Still Edward POV (when Bella leaves)
It took two seconds to understand what Bella said. And one second to stand up and follow her.
The trees where merged, I saw only face on Bella, in front of me. My subconscious was playing with me. I could not understand what is real what is not.
I suddenly stopped. I took a deep breath, trying to smell Bella. But I only smelt animals, and their blood.
Panic took control of me.I tried to run to the opposite side, when to the right or left. Finally I found myself in meadow, kneeling and sobbing.
She was gone...
So was I ..
I feel myself slipping more and more every second without her..I fell as though i am drowning in the inky black darkness that seams to strangle me.
I shut my eyes, I stop struggling, I let darkness overwhelm me.
I felt like shadow.. Empty..
"Edward?" I heard Alice voice, "What's wrong?" she panicked, "what's wrong?" I tried to speak, but nothing came out. "Answer me" she begged "I don't see anything.. what's wrong?"
Hard to answer the question "What's wrong" when nothing is alright.
Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant Ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant Ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant Ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
desk and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant Ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
When we rushed in Sergeant Ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant Ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant Ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
desk and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant Ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.
But after reading all four books I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favorite author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to love HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publish in the near future.
But after reading all four books I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favorite author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to love HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publish in the near future.