Twilight Series Article: Fell Apart Ch.4

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posted by DarkStranger

the funniest thing is, that I don't know why it took me so long to write this chapter. I didn't wanted to write today, but when I read all the comment's, I changed my mind. So... hope you like it :)
xxKatie

Still Edward POV (when Bella leaves)

It took two seconds to understand what Bella said. And one second to stand up and follow her.

The trees where merged, I saw only face on Bella, in front of me. My subconscious was playing with me. I could not understand what is real what is not.

I suddenly stopped. I took a deep breath, trying to smell Bella. But I only smelt animals, and their blood.

Panic took control of me.I tried to run to the opposite side, when to the right or left. Finally I found myself in meadow, kneeling and sobbing.

She was gone...

So was I ..

I feel myself slipping more and more every second without her..I fell as though i am drowning in the inky black darkness that seams to strangle me.

I shut my eyes, I stop struggling, I let darkness overwhelm me.

I felt like shadow.. Empty..

"Edward?" I heard Alice voice, "What's wrong?" she panicked, "what's wrong?" I tried to speak, but nothing came out. "Answer me" she begged "I don't see anything.. what's wrong?"

Hard to answer the question "What's wrong" when nothing is alright.

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Talent Part 3

posted by CarlislesLover

Please comment.xx

When I arrived they were both standing face to face arguing.
“You blonde slag”

“Brown bitch”

“Piss off and get a life”

“Why don’t you”

“No I have a life unlike somebody”

“Umm no you don’t, you’ve been in a coffin for the last few decades”

“You’re arms disappearing, maybe its old age”

“Hahaha very funny, I’m not old!”

“Yes you are”

“Well my little friend I suggest you piss off now”

“Since when am I your friend”

“STOP NOW BOTH OF YOU”

“Sorry Bella”

“That’s ok Rosalie”

“Oh so Rosalie’s perfect now”

“No”

“Blonde”

“Alice...

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Borrowed lifes VIII

posted by Tatti

When I woke up, it was already dark. I tried to get up but noticed that I was in hospital: the bed, the drip, the equipment around me - all medical stuff so I had to be a hospital. But then Carlisle came in and I recognized the glass wall. Am I still at their house?
"How are you feeling?" and he started checking my blood pressure.
"I have a headache but everything else seems fine" I said concentrating on my sensations "How long have I been unconscious?"
"For a long time - about 7 hours. I even scanned your brain but there was nothing unusual. Did you ever had any head traumas?"
"No... I don't...

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Paris Hilton wants to steal Robert Pattinson from Kristen Stewart

posted by Hellohoudini

June 10, 2010 09:48 PM EDT

It seems that Kristen Stewart isn't the only one who thinks that Robert Pattinson is hot. Yes, I know that millions of women everywhere know this, but I'm talking about celebrity woman. There's one very well known celeb chica who wants to date Rob Pattinson and keep him to herself. Supposedly Paris Hilton has a thing for R-Patz. That's right, Paris has been saying lately that she thinks Rob is such a hottie and would like to date him.

After the MTV Movie Awards, Paris tweeted: “Rob and Taylor are so hot!” Presumably she's talking about Robert Pattinson and Taylor...

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Blackout!!! Part 8

posted by smileyfaceddude

Renesmee

My heart skipped a beat, my head spun and my breathing fastened. I looked at him as if I had never seen him before. It was like he was speaking a foreign language. “Well, when,” I had to take a deep breath. I need to stay calm. “When did this happen?” He was looking at the silk duvet, tracing the patterns with one long, pointy, pallid finger. I put my hand on it and he looked up. “Not long, just a few days.” He confessed in a sad tone. His earlier crimson eyes had turned to scarlet. I couldn’t think why. Maybe it’s the light? I thought. “I’m sorry about what I said...

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Letters from the dead Part 3

posted by CarlislesLover

Please comment. XX

I sat and waited for someone to come and take the note but no one did. I went down stairs to see if anyone had figured out who could have sent it. “Do you have any idea Carlisle?”

“No, sorry Edward”

“It’s ok” I wandered back up to my room. I went to get the note on the window but it wasn’t there. Someone had taken it whilst I went downstairs. Whoever this was quite clearly didn’t want to meet you. I decided I would go downstairs but not tell the others about it. Alice couldn’t see whoever was sending these notes so she wouldn’t have seen whoever took it....

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bree tanner part two (propa book)

posted by xroylex

"hulk mad" kevin bellowed "hulk...... SMASH!!!"
he leaped up to meet the car before it could brake grabbed the front bumper and flipped it over his head so that it struck the pavment upside down with a squreal of bending metal and shattering glass inside a women started screaming.

"oh man" diego said shacking his head he was pretty with dark dense curly black hair big wide eyes and really full lips but then who wasnt pretty ? even kevin and raouls morons were pretty. "kevin were supose to be laying low riley said-"
"riley said" kevin mimicked in a harsh soprano "get a spine diego riley is not...

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Hidden Love-Chapter Five

posted by Rose22882

The forest was a cold and scary place to be. Instead of going to the aboned house I found, I was spralwed acrooss the forest floor. The cullens were a strange family and I wanted to know about them. You would think that somebody who witnessed her parents being murderd would be afraid to find out who did it but I wasn't. I wanted to know what these creatures were. I had these weird dreams about them since I was six years old and know they came to me. I knew I was different, it didn't matter to me through. I rolled over on the cold floor and screamed. It was the only thing I could do. I relized...

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Conversation EPOV part 7

posted by CarlislesLover

Sorry it's been ages since I posted this.
XXXXX

We sat and did nothing for the best part of four hours. I didn’t know what to do. Nobody did. Suddenly Alice jumped up. “What Alice?” Jasper and I asked her at the same time. “I saw something. Well a flash”

“Of what?”

“Bella and Renee on the plane to forks”

“Really?”

“Yes. I saw them get off and then both futures disappeared”

“What do you think happened?”

“I’m not sure. I hope everything’s ok though”

“So do I” We then sat in silence for a while. All of us were waiting for Alice to jump up and see something again....

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Why...CH.5

posted by decullen

One year later
I knocked on the door ever so lightly.Seconds later all the Cullen`s were there and Tanya Edwards soon to be wife.I didn`t expect it.
"Ah"I screamed.Alice jumped on me.

"Bella,What happened to you?We all thought you were dead"Alice asked me.

"Well Victoria kidnapped me and said she was going to kill me but then I found out I was...ur... pregnant.She said she always wanted a child so she looked after me,I know Victoria looking after me.Anyway I give birth but I lost a lot of blood and I was about to die.When Victoria bit me and as you can see I am know a vampire."I said.Everyone gasped.I...

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Conversation part 7

posted by CarlislesLover

I'm sorry it's been so long since I last posted this story.

We were on the plane now travelling back to forks. I just wanted to lie down and rest back home. Not in forks. We both had tea on the plane and I slept for I little while. When I woke up my mum was just wheeling me off the plane. “How do you feel?”

“My back still hurts and I think it’s still bleeding”

“Ok once we get to Rosalie’s house we can have a doctor sort it out for you”

“Ok”

“Maybe you should go back to sleep for a while”

“I don’t want to” Just then a man I recognized came running up behind us. It was...

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Fell Apart Ch3

posted by DarkStranger

Can vampire's black out? I assumed that no, so why I don't see anything? I can't move my head, my body. I can't breath too, What's happening to me?

"What you done to him?" someone asked, I tried to reed her mind, but it only caused pain.

"Oh don't worry, everything will be okay" I heard the same red-eyed woman voice. "He will live with me, from now" she laughed. No I wanted to scream, but I couldn't. I was trapped in my own body, what she done to me?

" If he has family?" I recognize man voice. Yes I wanted to scream at them I have a family, I have daughter, wife, brothers and sisters Red-eyed...

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The beginning ( Part 5

posted by a-jforever

Its been a while since I posted this. So heres part 5 hope you like it.

Emmett’s POV

The day was over. It wasn’t so bad, if I say so myself. Other than Gym which Jasper hadn’t turned up for. I guess it was too much for him, poor kid. We did badger him on about it a bit though, and it got on his nerves. Maybe I would see if he wanted to wrestle to take his mind off things. I grinned to myself scaring the little girl walking next to me. I joined Alice and Rose in Edwards Volvo. “Where’s Edward?” I asked. “Funny. I was gonna ask you the same thing” Rosalie said looking clearly pissed...

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Gone Part 1

posted by CarlislesLover

Heyy guys. This is my new fan fic Gone.
Hope you all ike it!!XX

I wasn’t sure what to do any more. My life was getting complicated. Jacob and Edward had continuous arguments over me. I was fed up of it. I was thinking about leaving but I wasn’t sure. Maybe I could go live with Renée like I used to. I went into town just wandering and looking around. There wasn’t much to look at. Just the same old forks. I sat on a bench and did nothing. People came and went. Time flew by. It was night time now. I thought of going back home. But I didn’t want to. I had to think. I knew Charlie would be...

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Conversation EPOV part 4

posted by CarlislesLover

This one was hard to write but i did my best anyway. XXX

“I don’t care Edward just come over here, please?”

“Ok” I went and replaced Jasper who was holding her hand. “I love you” She told me “I love you too” I replied “Edward please tell me we’re still getting married”

“Of course we are. I don’t want to lose you Bella. I love you more than anything else in the whole world”

“Edward we need to put Bella to sleep so I can take the rest of this glass out of her back” Carlisle thought to me. I nodded my head in reply and he placed the mask over her face and she drifted...

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is edward really that good?

posted by S8rah

ok so i am going to come out with this as i think it i love twilight it is brill but i hate edward i think he is to controling over bella and he doesn't want her to go and see jacob because jacob is way better looking than he is and he is afrad that he will get better and another thing is why do people think that he is good looking i think he is really ugly i can't see why people really fancy him i luv taylor launter and i am 100% a team jacob because at the end of the day jacob is just way better than edward and that is the end of it!

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A famous reminder chapter 1

posted by KatiiCullen94

"Bella, come here, i need to put more gloss on you and fix up your her and i sear if you fall up on that.............""
I flashed out of my new fresh vision. Bella.
i sighed a heavy sigh for hurt still growing from the loss of my best friend.
She was pretty, all dressed up, she was surronded by people making her pretty. puzzled over what the lady holding a pink gloss towards bella, was about to say before my vision finished.

"Alice! STOP IT!!! I CAN BLOODY HEAR YOUR HEAD!!" edward roared from the deeps darkness of his room.
i fear for my brother, he never leaves his room.
He needs bella, he...

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Dreams do come true Chapter 13

posted by Darktimes104

(It feels like forever since I updated this story.)

Emmett's POV:
The footsteps continued to come closer then a voice came to match them, "You two better get back to the house and be social, stop running off, Carlisle said so."
I know that angelic voice anywhere, it was Rose. It slowly stepped out from the cover of the tress and then I knew It was the right time to ask her to be my wife.
Edward started to run off into the forest and called after us, "you better hurry or I will send Irina."
"We are coming Edward." Rose said as she started to run after him but I caught her and spun her around to...

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a beautiful death

posted by xroylex

a beautiful death

chapter 1

it was the middle of the night i know a good place to start the story right? midnight seams beautiful and romantic and all the things you wont life to be. well thats were your wrong this is were the worst thing and the best thing in my life happened.

this is were i fell in love

he seamed like my everything my one and only and this is were my story begins

"make sure you call me when your get there tell charlie i said hey" my mum tried to make me stay with her we have been traverling for years now and grandad charlie hasnt seen me so they think its safe to let me see...

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Dreams do come true Chapter 12

posted by Darktimes104

Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy.

Emmett's POV:
"Of course Emmett, what's wrong?" Carlisle said sitting on a tree that had fallen.
I walked over slowly and sat beside him. "Carlisle," I started, "you know that I love Rosalie and I want to marry her." I finished and Edward walked out in front of us.
"So, hes going about it the old fashion way, asking permission first." Edward said leaning against a nearby tree.
Ignoring Edwards comment, Carlisle said, "Yes Emmett you have my permission, we will take you and get a ring."
I wanted to get up and sprint to the stores myself, I was excited....

Alice's past (2)

posted by Tatti

1915, June 06

The cell was cold, but I didn't feel it. The only thing I felt was numbness. Officers who sometimes come to look at me always have the same anger in their eyes though I don't care. But even in this depression visions don't leave me alone. I closed my eyes trying to imagine something so it would fade away...
It was a spacious and dark room. The only source of light was a fireplace and a man was standing in front of it, I could see only his back. It was quiet when suddenly someone knocked on the door.
- Excuse me, mister Rowenson, but you have guests,- the man turned around and I...