Twilight Series Article: Fell Apart Ch.4

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posted by DarkStranger

the funniest thing is, that I don't know why it took me so long to write this chapter. I didn't wanted to write today, but when I read all the comment's, I changed my mind. So... hope you like it :)
xxKatie

Still Edward POV (when Bella leaves)

It took two seconds to understand what Bella said. And one second to stand up and follow her.

The trees where merged, I saw only face on Bella, in front of me. My subconscious was playing with me. I could not understand what is real what is not.

I suddenly stopped. I took a deep breath, trying to smell Bella. But I only smelt animals, and their blood.

Panic took control of me.I tried to run to the opposite side, when to the right or left. Finally I found myself in meadow, kneeling and sobbing.

She was gone...

So was I ..

I feel myself slipping more and more every second without her..I fell as though i am drowning in the inky black darkness that seams to strangle me.

I shut my eyes, I stop struggling, I let darkness overwhelm me.

I felt like shadow.. Empty..

"Edward?" I heard Alice voice, "What's wrong?" she panicked, "what's wrong?" I tried to speak, but nothing came out. "Answer me" she begged "I don't see anything.. what's wrong?"

Hard to answer the question "What's wrong" when nothing is alright.

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Tatti it's brilliant

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jacob_lover5253 I LOVE IT...YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE...ASAP!!!! :) I AM WAITING!!

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Farmer's Daughter

posted by LexisFaith

Bella POV

I woke up next Edward on Sunday morning. We had fallen asleep while he was crying. That heartless bitch. I could see that at least in his sleep he was peaceful. I got in the shower and lathered up in my Herbal Essences Hello Hydration shampoo- the smell was amazing- and conditioner and coconut liquid body wash. So I like the smell of coconut. What?
After I got out, I dried my hair in my room so not to wake Edward, and slipped into a cobalt blue summer dress. I walked through the bathrooms and walked into Edward's room to wake him.
"Edward." I shook him gently. His eyes opened and found...

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Our Fallen Angel--Chapter 4

posted by Summer_Leanne

Hi again, guys! So, as I said in my Cold Roses update, this is the last post I will be doing until Tuesday of next week because this weekend is 4th of July. Thanks for understanding, darlings, and thank you SO SO much for all of your heartwarming comments! I'm thrilled you all are loving the story so far :) I do hope you enjoy this chapter ^.^ Enjoy!! :D
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When we reached home, I found that Edward's prediction had been correct. Renesmee had locked herself in her room and was sprawled across her bed.

She turned up the music on her IPod when she...

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Unpredictable and Undeniable

posted by LexisFaith

Right now, I am listening to 'Knee Deep' by Zac Brown Band. It's pretty upbeat and nice for this chapter. Certin parts of the song go along with this last...yes..this last chapter :) So if you wanna listen to it, go get on youtube!! :)
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Bella was 8 and a half months pregnant with a girl. Charlee Ann Cullen. Charlee after Bella's beloved father, and Ann, my mother's middle name. Mason was all about having a little sister. He talked about reading to her and feeding her but he would not "under any circumstamps, play tea party". He stopped off mad...

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As the sun sets chapter 14: To save a life

posted by xoxpoisonxox

I would like to start this chapter off with yet, another apology. I havn't been writing for a while, at a writers block. So i went back and read the twilight seris once more. I now have new, exciting ideas. And since you have responded to the different point of views i will Definintly keep that in mind when writing more! (: I hope you enjoy this chapter! Again, any ideas , comments or questions inbox, or comment!

CHAPTER 14: To save a life.
Renesmee's POV (point of view)
(CONTINUATION OF WHERE RENESMEE'S (POV) LEFT OFF IN CHAPTER 13)

I decided to call Jacob, I should probaly check up on him. I...

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Father and Daughter 2

posted by LexisFaith

So, I totally forgot I even wrote this story to begin with. This is my first fan-fic where everyone is the way they are in the books, so bare with me through this.

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"It's beats for you, Ness." Jacob whispered in her ear.
She giggled and snuggled closer to him. "How come Seth didn't come see me?"
"He wanted to." Jacob ran his fingers through her curls. "But Sue wanted him home for supper."
"Speaking of supper." Esme walked out from the kitchen holding a large plate in on hand, and a tiny pink one in the other.
"Yum!" Renesmee jummped up and sat beside...

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Team Seth.

posted by merastewart

Okay. I don't know about you guys , but Im tired of all the Jakob and Edward drama. (If i had 2 pick , it would be Jakob). So i say , fudge it and go for TEAM SETH!! Seth Clearwater is part of the Reservation Pack. He is the son of Harry and Sue Clearwater. He helps Jakob protect Bella from the pack. Bella describes him as a boy with russett skin, and gangly hair. The only part i dont like in the story is when Seth has his arms around Bella. I meann , she's not even pretty , why does she get all the attention.Anyways , Seth is like Edward and Jakob in many ways but isnt like one all together....

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Life, Love, and the Mafia.

posted by LexisFaith

So tihs is a story I haven't added to in 2 months! I've had this big writers block for this story :( But I'm back now! No need to worry!
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Bella POV

I threw my last bag into the trunk of Emmett's car and put myself in the passenger side. "Okay."

He put the car in gear and pulled out of my driveway. "You ready to go kick some ass?"

"More like blow up." I grined. "You did tell Dad we were comming through the outside gate right?"

"Of course." He goffed. "Like they would let us through with all your giant guns and bombs if we didn't."

"Good." I nodded....

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The wolf and the little girl chapter one lost and found

posted by Rennerocks

Renesmee and Jacob

Hey everybody this my new story based on this image.In the image its Renesmee and Jacob so its about them but jacob only changes into his human forum every so often.And yes renesmsee's a half vampire in this, so is her famliey is vampires of course.So Jacob after renesmee was born jacob left and didn't come back ever to see the cullen's.And the volturi never came to see the cullens. So I hope you like it <3.
Enjoy.

~~~~~~~The Wolf And The Little Girl~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter one lost and found.

Renesmee's POV.

Today looked like the perfect day for a walk in the woods.The sun was shining not...

The Ties that Bind - Heroin

posted by alexajaye

Author's note: I posted this on FanFiction and Deviantart, but I wanted your take here on Fanpop. It's Post-Breaking Dawn. You'll see by how much when you read. If you like it, hate it, whatever, leave a comment below. Thanks in advance.

Heroin

Bella

Chicago was nice, as far as the Windy City part, which it was very much. I'd never been anywhere except Phoenix and Florida with my mom, California with my Dad and Forks. It was something to get used to, but I was adjusting. It had been fifteen years since Renesmee had been born, and she was fully grown...

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Unpredictable and Undeniable

posted by LexisFaith

To be totally honest...I was freaking out. I had no idea how to take care of a baby. Sure, Bella said Haylee was 6 months, but she still couldn't do for her self. Putting the life of a tiny human, in my hands, was terrifying.

"Edward?" Bella waved her hand infront of my face.

"Hu?"

She one hand on her hip and the other holding out a new cleaned plate for me to dry. "I have been holding this plate infront of your face for three minutes." She giggled as I took it from her hands. "Where were you at?"

"Thinking."

"About?"

But before I could answer her the door bell rang and I felt my face flush. Here...

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Dark Moon Chapter 20.

posted by GothicGirl0525

Chapter 20:

The plane ride has been every quite as all the humans are sleeping around us. Edward and I even have to pretend to be sleeping when a flight attend walks by us. Though it doesn’t help much that Edward and I haven’t talked scene we left the house. I am still mad it him a little bit because of that fact that I didn’t want to leave our baby alone. Though at the same time I understand his point that I shouldn’t be going alone and that our baby is not the family we left her with would die for her as much we would. I have just never been this far from her. I keep thinking what...

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Alice, Jacob and Amelia: Chapter 1.

posted by disneygood

Note: I do not own Alice or Jacob. I made up Amelia Black and Elizabeth. Go to star-doll and check me out! I do not own the Twilight Saga.

Do not read if you like Renesmee or Jasper!

Chapter 1.

Jacob walked into the house, exhausted as always, and rested his feet upon the coffee table. He picked up the remote from the table and turned on the telly.Right on cue, Amelia ran down the stairs and launched herself into Jacobs arms.
* Mental note: Amelia is Jacob little sister who moved in with Alice and Jacob*
"Jakey!" she yelled with excitement.Amelia had bright brown eyes and was exactly like Alice,...

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Unthinkable -~ An Alec Volturi Love Story~- CHARACTERS

posted by kaulitztwinsfan

~~Unthinkable~~(Alec Voluri Story)
Characters

Name:Scarlett Rosalia Brandon aka Meckie
Age: 15
Hair: Black, Wavy and Shoulder length
Eyes: A violet beautiful colour..but hides them with contacts.
Race: Human(later changed)
Powers: Can control a person/vampire’s mind
Extra: Is moving to her Aunt’s place in Forks, Washington

Name: Alec ( Volturi)
Age: 375 years (looks 16-ish)
Hair: Brown, Short, Shaggy.
Eyes: Mesmerizing Scarlett ( I know its her name)
Race: Vampire
Powers: Can cut off anyone’s senses.
All the other characters are known: The Volturi, The Cullens,The Pack(two packs). They all belong to Stephanie Meyer. I own Scarlett aka Meckie and others related to her. Some of them are real. They are my friends. I LUUURRRVVVEEE <3 <3 <3 them!!

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Mtv's top 12 quotes from the Eclipse commentary

posted by 1TeamEdwardFan

I thought this commentary was on of the funniest things I have heard. Here are Mtv's top 12 quotes from it.

Scene: Xavier becomes a vampire
Rob: Xavier would make a wonderful hamburger... He's just dripping with spread.
Kristen: Ew, that's so gross.
Rob: Okay, how do we be serious about this?

Scene: The first meadow kiss
Rob: There's a lot of kissing in this film. I noticed that when I was watching. After a while, it made me a little uncomfortable.

Scene: Bella gets in her truck. Edward is waiting for her.
Bella (in movie): "You scared me."
Rob (in commentary): I was trying to. (low voice) I thought...

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Lost Love

posted by groovychicklisa

Chapter 16

Previously.....

(B) You know what? I am so, arghh! Im going home! (B) (E) Bella, please don’t go? (E) (B) Edward I ……..

B|Pov
(B) Edward, I......(B) i honestly didnt know what to do, do i risk leaving and having him do it again? Or do i stay? because god only knows that at this moment in time i want to.(E) Please? Bella dont leave?(E) he pleaded. (B) Edward, I need you to know that i love you so much, it consumes me and thats why im doing this, i wont leave you again i promise, but right now i just need some time to think. can you give me that? please? (B)(E) bella, i need...

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Seth Clearwater-FOREVER!! ( Imprint Story)

posted by kaulitztwinsfan

Sorry Guys....I know this is a HELL OF A DELAY!!! But had so amny things to do...school work..piano lessons...blah blah blah...
So here it is.. the 3rd Chapter...

Chapter 3

Norah's POV

I kept staring at the wolf. It was beutiful, in a way..
The the wolf suddenly became alert..
It stopped staring and turned its back on me. Where was it going?? Was it leaving me? I wanted to shout, tell the wolf not to go but I had no strength to shout, let alone run after the wolf.
Why was it going? Then I thought...
Why did I want it to stay? It was a big, fierce wolf..that didn't kill me...
I felt so protected under...

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Breaking Dawn’ Script – ‘It’s Awesome!

posted by KatiiCullen94

Start dusting off your Team Edward and Team Jacob shirts because the scripts for ‘Breaking Dawn’ are finished and in the hands of the cast!

Peter Facinelli, who plays Carlisle Cullen, took no time to Tweet about his excitement after reading the Breaking Dawn scripts to tell fans how pumped he is to get started on the project!

“Just read the Breaking Dawn scripts. I must say… AWESOME! Very excited,” he wrote.

We’re excited too! Until production gets underway, we’ll have to be satisfied with what we know so far about the fourth installment of the Twilight series:...

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Edward and Bella's honeymoon. Edward's POV chapter12

posted by halunik

!!!!!!!!!WARNING!!!!! ONLY FOR ADULTS!!!!!!
Hello, friends. Thank you again for your comments and support. Here is the next chapter.

“Do you want to help me?”
“I’d better find some food for you,” I said in a quiet voice, and he gently unwound her arms. I heard her sighed as I moved to the kitchen.
I moved too fast for her to stop me and do something stupid again. I forced my mind to concentrate on preparing food for her. She was hungry. I stated this in my mind and moved all other thoughts out of my head. In 10 seconds I found myself preparing some omelet for her. As I always helped...

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Runaway Love Should I Continue??

posted by LexisFaith

"Alice! Hurry!" Bella grabbed for her sister's hand as they raced across the lawn.

"Bella! My feet hurt!" Alice complined behind her.

"We can't stop running Alice. We have to get as far away as possible. Unless you want the weight of the kingdom on your shoulders in a fortnight we must hurry!" Bella reminided her.

Twins, Isabella Marie and Mary Alice Swan were to be crowed queens on their eighteenth birthday. Nither one wanted to resposibility at such a young age. They were running from their problems which they knew never to do, but this was unavoidale any other way.

"How far do we have to run?"...

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From Heaven and Hell 6

posted by LexisFaith

If you know the song "Whiskey Lullaby" you all might recgonize some lyrics in here :)

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Whiskey Lullaby
Edward POV

She took intake of a breath and stared at me.

"You don't have to say it back." I quickly asured her. "I just wanted you to know that I love you and that if you want to talk...I'm always here."

"Thank you." She whispered.

"You're welcome."

"Would you like to hear the story?" She asked.

"Only if you want me to." I told her.

"I do." She nodded. She sat up and placed her hands in her lap and took a deep breath. "Renesmee was the girl of his dreams....