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My hands began to shake and my knees were bashing together. Why would Aro do this? Alice told me on the plane he would say no, because Edwards’s power was too valuable.
“Bella? Bella!” Alice said as my hands clutched the dashboard.

“ALICE, WHY AREN’T YOU GOING BACK....YOU SAID YOURSELF THAT YOUR VISIONS WERE UNCERTAIN?” I shouted tears streaming down my face.
We were now half way back to the airport. She has to go back. Just in case she was wrong.

“Alice!” I sobbed.

“Bella. Please believe me, I know it’s difficult for you....but I can’t go back, I’ll end up ripping their heads off.” Alice looked as if she would be in tears herself, if she could cry, but I think I was crying enough for both of us.

I gave up collapsing back against the seat, trying to muffle my cries, and trying to forget. But how could I forget something like this had happened. That was just plain ridiculous.

Minutes later Alice half hurdled me out of the car, and into the airport grabbing my arm and making me jog along with her or we were going to miss out flight. Once aboard the fight I quickly fell asleep in my seat.

I dreamt of how it all happened. What went on between Edward and Aro, how Edward had felt so guilty, he wanted to die too just to get away from what he had done. And what Aro had said, or rather done, in reply. I screamed, but my mouth was covered by something cold and hard, I gasped and my eyes shot open.

“Bella!” Alice hissed, in the dark cabin. I took in my surroundings. It was a different cabin, how had we moved.

“I had to half drag you to our next flight; people were looking at me like I was dragging a dead body through the airport.” She said unhappily. She obviously didn’t like to look suspicious.

“Sorry, Alice. Why didn’t you wake me?” I asked. She looked guilty.

“That’s the most peaceful you’ve been since we left, and until you started shrieking just a second ago.” She said.

“Why did you start shrieking like that?” She asked her eyes soft.

“I had a nightmare Alice.” I whispered.

“Do you want to tell me what it was about?” She asked.

I shook my head, but I would someday.

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