This is my new fanfiction. Its a little different to the others i had ago at writing. But I hope thats a good thing.
Hell had just broken loose. “You can’t see Jacob for a while, you understand Renesmee?” What on earth was dad talking about why couldn’t I see Jacob.
“WHY?” I screeched
“BECAUSE IT’S GETTING IN THE WAY OF YOUR SCHOOL GRADES.” Dad shouted back.
This just wasn’t fair. Jacob had nothing to do with school. My school grades were my responsibilities and if I wasn’t doing as well as I could, then that was up to me to sort out, not Dad. And banning me from seeing Jacob defiantly wasn’t going to help. It would probably make things even worse than they were.
“RENESMEE ARE YOU LISTENING TO ME?” my dad shouted.
“YES!” I shouted back.
“Edward I don’t think that stopping Renesmee seeing Jac...” My mother started, trying to reason with dad. “Let me deal with this” Dad told her. Mum sighed, giving me a sympathetic look and heading out of the house.
“Are we clear, Renesmee?” Dad asked.
“Yes.” I whispered. Tears were staring to form in my eyes.
“Good.” He nodded.
“I HATE YOU!” I shouted running out of the house and into the woods, hot, angry tears flowing down both my cheeks.
Hell had just broken loose. “You can’t see Jacob for a while, you understand Renesmee?” What on earth was dad talking about why couldn’t I see Jacob.
“WHY?” I screeched
“BECAUSE IT’S GETTING IN THE WAY OF YOUR SCHOOL GRADES.” Dad shouted back.
This just wasn’t fair. Jacob had nothing to do with school. My school grades were my responsibilities and if I wasn’t doing as well as I could, then that was up to me to sort out, not Dad. And banning me from seeing Jacob defiantly wasn’t going to help. It would probably make things even worse than they were.
“RENESMEE ARE YOU LISTENING TO ME?” my dad shouted.
“YES!” I shouted back.
“Edward I don’t think that stopping Renesmee seeing Jac...” My mother started, trying to reason with dad. “Let me deal with this” Dad told her. Mum sighed, giving me a sympathetic look and heading out of the house.
“Are we clear, Renesmee?” Dad asked.
“Yes.” I whispered. Tears were staring to form in my eyes.
“Good.” He nodded.
“I HATE YOU!” I shouted running out of the house and into the woods, hot, angry tears flowing down both my cheeks.
ok so this is my first stoy so please comment and tell me if you want me to continue and if you have any ideas it would help.plz.=D
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the next thing i knew he was on top of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward said angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i said through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are you and what do you want!?!i asked hard.my name is jasmine im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i said guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the next thing i knew he was on top of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward said angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i said through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are you and what do you want!?!i asked hard.my name is jasmine im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i said guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.