This is my new fanfiction. Its a little different to the others i had ago at writing. But I hope thats a good thing.
Hell had just broken loose. “You can’t see Jacob for a while, you understand Renesmee?” What on earth was dad talking about why couldn’t I see Jacob.
“WHY?” I screeched
“BECAUSE IT’S GETTING IN THE WAY OF YOUR SCHOOL GRADES.” Dad shouted back.
This just wasn’t fair. Jacob had nothing to do with school. My school grades were my responsibilities and if I wasn’t doing as well as I could, then that was up to me to sort out, not Dad. And banning me from seeing Jacob defiantly wasn’t going to help. It would probably make things even worse than they were.
“RENESMEE ARE YOU LISTENING TO ME?” my dad shouted.
“YES!” I shouted back.
“Edward I don’t think that stopping Renesmee seeing Jac...” My mother started, trying to reason with dad. “Let me deal with this” Dad told her. Mum sighed, giving me a sympathetic look and heading out of the house.
“Are we clear, Renesmee?” Dad asked.
“Yes.” I whispered. Tears were staring to form in my eyes.
“Good.” He nodded.
“I HATE YOU!” I shouted running out of the house and into the woods, hot, angry tears flowing down both my cheeks.
Hell had just broken loose. “You can’t see Jacob for a while, you understand Renesmee?” What on earth was dad talking about why couldn’t I see Jacob.
“WHY?” I screeched
“BECAUSE IT’S GETTING IN THE WAY OF YOUR SCHOOL GRADES.” Dad shouted back.
This just wasn’t fair. Jacob had nothing to do with school. My school grades were my responsibilities and if I wasn’t doing as well as I could, then that was up to me to sort out, not Dad. And banning me from seeing Jacob defiantly wasn’t going to help. It would probably make things even worse than they were.
“RENESMEE ARE YOU LISTENING TO ME?” my dad shouted.
“YES!” I shouted back.
“Edward I don’t think that stopping Renesmee seeing Jac...” My mother started, trying to reason with dad. “Let me deal with this” Dad told her. Mum sighed, giving me a sympathetic look and heading out of the house.
“Are we clear, Renesmee?” Dad asked.
“Yes.” I whispered. Tears were staring to form in my eyes.
“Good.” He nodded.
“I HATE YOU!” I shouted running out of the house and into the woods, hot, angry tears flowing down both my cheeks.
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-Renesmee-
I terminate the call, and scream at the top of my lungs. It takes Carlisle and Rosalie thirty two seconds to reach me. The other Cullens are out hunting.
I find I can only speak in short bursts, so I focus only on Carlisle's voice, asking me what happened. I try to answer, but then, oh joy, more pain.
* * *
I've been in labour for the past eight hours now. Imagine, just for a moment, that Rosalie is capable of PMS. And that simultaneously, someone's hidden her hair products, her iPod, her BMW, and her laptop. I was currently in a mood that would make that look like a kitten having a tantrum.
I broke Jacob's wrist by accident.
I terminate the call, and scream at the top of my lungs. It takes Carlisle and Rosalie thirty two seconds to reach me. The other Cullens are out hunting.
I find I can only speak in short bursts, so I focus only on Carlisle's voice, asking me what happened. I try to answer, but then, oh joy, more pain.
* * *
I've been in labour for the past eight hours now. Imagine, just for a moment, that Rosalie is capable of PMS. And that simultaneously, someone's hidden her hair products, her iPod, her BMW, and her laptop. I was currently in a mood that would make that look like a kitten having a tantrum.
I broke Jacob's wrist by accident.
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Jasper's Pov
"What's wrong Alice?"
Alice looked as if she were faint or something.
"Nothing is of the matter, I mean...nothing is...well
nothing is wrong okay?"
I really can't trust her sometimes, so I went to Edward.
"Edward, what is Alice thinking?"
"Why would I want to help you?! You tortured me once already!"
"Please! Just tell me what she is thinking!"
"I don't think I should tell them or should I? If someone is controllong Esme, where is this person-"
"Someone is controlling ESME!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?" Edward shouted.
Then, everyone looked at Alice, Edward, and Esme's purple marking.
Jasper's Pov
"What's wrong Alice?"
Alice looked as if she were faint or something.
"Nothing is of the matter, I mean...nothing is...well
nothing is wrong okay?"
I really can't trust her sometimes, so I went to Edward.
"Edward, what is Alice thinking?"
"Why would I want to help you?! You tortured me once already!"
"Please! Just tell me what she is thinking!"
"I don't think I should tell them or should I? If someone is controllong Esme, where is this person-"
"Someone is controlling ESME!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?" Edward shouted.
Then, everyone looked at Alice, Edward, and Esme's purple marking.
Bella's Pov.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme said wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing you all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking you out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper said calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will show you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme said wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing you all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking you out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper said calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will show you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.