Twilight Series Article: Review of Breaking Dawn...don't read if you haven't finished the book

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Review of Breaking Dawn...don't read if you haven't finished the book

posted by jacob_is_amazin

I just finished reading Breaking Dawn and all I can say is WOW!!! I thought it was really good...for the most part. There is some stuff about it that bothered me. Below are my many opinions on the book.

First of all...I adored the Jacob section. I thought it was so sweet and sad. I loved when he was imagining Bella pregnant with his child and how he was upset that Seth had his arm around her. I liked it when he told Quil that he didn't see the faces of other girls anymore. All his chapter titles were great...my favorites were 'Why didn't I just walk away? Oh right, because I'm and idiot.' and 'What do I look like? The wizard of oz? You need a brain? You need a heart? Go ahead. Take mine. Take everything I have.'. I liked his Preface, too...'Life sucks, and then you die. Yeah, I should be so lucky.'. I really like Jacob's character...he's one of my favorites. But I was upset that he imprinted on Rennesme so soon...I at least wanted to see how Jacob would feel about Bella after she was turned into a vampire. He was annoyingly possessive about the baby. I didn't like how Bella was like '"Jacob was letting me hold her"' or something like that. She doesn't need his permission.

Second...the Volturi scene. Don't get me wrong...i am so happy none of them died...but I was prepared for a fight. I was all ready to be all sad and depressed for days cause Emmett died or something...but they didn't even fight. I got all sad when they were saying their good-byes and nothing happened. Plus I really wanted someone to just tear Caius's head off...he is so mean. I felt bad for Tanya and Kate when the Volturi killed Irina. I think the fact that there wasn't a fight made all the previous preparation chapters kinda pointless...but still good. I'm happy they got their happy ending.

Thirdly...Alice and Jasper leaving. I was like "WHAT". I adore both of them so I was completely heartbroken when they left. I wasn't surprised when they showed up at the end because I knew they would. Alice wouldn't abandon them like that and I really don't think Jasper would either.

Fourth...Emmett's comments. LOL!!! He is great. I heart Emmett very much. '"At least 'someones' scoring around here"'...priceless!!!

Fifth...Rennesme. I was upset that Bella got pregnant...partially because I knew right then and there that Jacob didn't have a chance. And Bella was so different while she was pregnant...and what the hell was with Rosalie?? I knew Rosalie didn't like Bella but I thought sacrificing Bella's life for the baby was an all time low for her. The birth scene was disgustly awesome...Twilight meets Saw. And I adored Rennesme after she was born...I thought Bella's reaction to the nickname 'Nessie' was hilarious.

Sixth...Stephenie Meyer kept it clean. For the numerous sex scenes there were I was very surprised at how young adult appropriate she kept it. Big Cudo's for Stephenie Meyer

Seventh...Last but most diffinately not least...Edward and Bella. They are so sweet together. I felt really bad for Edward about the whole pregnant thing...poor guy/vampire/god. I liked that Bella still felt the same about Edward after she was changed and how in the end they lived happily ever after...forever and forever and forever!!!!

Over all Breaking dawn was amazing and great and I loved it.

jonas1fan, hellgirl223 and 4 others like this

sawabear i couldn't agree with you more on everything. emmett's comments had me rolling on the floor laughing. i didn't like rosalie to begin with but that was horrible, like she thought it was her baby or something. im glad jacob got his happy ending. my view for him changed in new moon by the way he helped bella through all that was sweet, but then dropped in eclipse, i know you should fight for your true love but you can't force someone to love you. then i ended up liking him again in breaking dawn. the whole imprinting on nessie thing was kinda gross, but at least bella was able to be calm about it, later on i mean. i actually thought for a second that he would imprint on leah but then i remebered that you can't imprint on someone you've already seen before. but i would have liked to see him fall in love with her or something. i agree that bella does not need permission by jacob to hold her own baby, i mean thats just crazy. i was completely balling my eyes out when edward and bella had to say goodbye to renesmee. when edward called jacob his brother i had to grab tissues and wait about 5 mins to read again because my eyes were so blurry i couldn't see the page. i think the cottage esme gave edward and bella was super sweet. and who could forget emmett's comment when they got back....priceless! i did love jacobs chapter names... "why didn't i just walk away when i had the chance? oh thats right, because im an idiot!" haha i love breaking dawn and agree completly with your comments

bodle an amazing overwiew of Breking Dawn, it's almost exactly what i thought of it although through the first three books i was really angry with Jacob, but that whole jacob part was amazing, and the blonde jokes, he is so sarcastic =] and the birth scene... "Twilight meets Saw" lol, great emmett's comment were probably one of the great hilights =] and before the fight with the Volturi, where Edward and Bella were saying goodbye to Rennesme, but her name.... was just wrong and your last comment about Edwar/Bella were so true, i'm a sucker for happy endings! =]

countrygirl2008 you are so right .the book was amazing. i was laughing so hard at emmet and bella as they arm wrestled,plus his jokes.it was funny when jacob and rose kept going at it. the honey moon scene was romantic.

krystalhale I liked hte fact there wan't a fight. I mean, I didn't wnay anyone to die, except maybe for Jane(:. But otherwise I agree completely with you. It was an absolutely amazing book. It was a great ending.

Amanda_Rae This isn't exactly a review, but it's a nice thought. The book was excellent. And most of the parts you liked, I enjoyed as well (though with less exclamation points...) Dunno if anyone agrees with me, but I enjoyed the fact that Esme was more involved in this book. She was written in many of the scenes, and even said SEVERAL things throughout the book. I just loved it because I always felt a burning love and attachment to all of the Cullens, but Esme always seemed a little... detached. We never really got her full-on as a character, and I liked that Stephenie included her in this book more often. There's my two cents.

jacob_is_amazin Actually Amanda_Rae I don't really think Esme was more involved than usual...though I would like it if she was because I do think she deserves a bigger part...but I don't even remember her saying more than a few words n the rest of the time the book just mentioned her crying or something like that...And I know its not exactly a review but I called it that for lack of better word.

tack94 I was disappointed in the last book "Breaking Dawn". I hoped that Edward & Bella would go to college and possibly meet up with others like themselves or find out that the college consisted mostly of Vampires. Too much of Jake in the last book. "Breaking Dawn" needs to be re-written. The 1st 3 books were believable that possibly spirtual & magically creatures do exist in our world. Maybe there is an Edward. Maybe their passion & true love does exist. But not in this 4th and final book. Please re-write "Breaking Dawn".

ECBCJB i love breaking dawn. i really liked emmetts comments. was so funny and jakes blonde jokes too. loved the stuff between him and rose. i never liked rose and i specially didnt like her in this book. all she cared about was the baby. she didnt care if bella lived or died as long as she got the baby. i like the birthing scene of course its gonna be bad its half vampire and if u couldnt breathe u would be freaking out like that and since she was so strong it hurt bella. i was alittle suprised that she had bella get pregnant after she said they couldnt have babies. but im glad she did it made a happy ending for everyone specially jake and he got to be part of the familty. also it kept the wolves from attacking the cullens. i wasnt upset when alice left i knew it was for a reason specially since she was seeing things ( like the jungle part) and edward was asking about it but she said she couldnt see. she didnt want him to know. and we know aro can see every thought uve ever had. i think it would have been better if they faught at the end. they would have kicked some butt and then they wouldnt have to worry about the volturi coming back which u know they will. they had the upper hand this time and next time they might not. i wanted bella and edward to go to college too. would have been cool and interesting for them to make friends. its awesome that bella was such a good vampire. she finally found a place she feels like she belongs. and my very very fav part is where edward finally gets to read bellas mind. hes wanted to ever since he met her. i cried when they said their goodbyes and when edward called jake his brother and son. he finally excepted him as family and not worried about jake im printing on his daughter anymore. im glad that bella got to keep charlie in her life but i think he would have freaked out more than he did. that just didnt seem like charlie to me. but it was awesome anyway. i also loved jakes POV. the titles were so jake and very funny. and i was glad to see exactly how jacob really felt and what he was going thru. i really love seth hes such a good person. dont like leah at all feel bad for her tho wish she could have had her happy ending too. SM rocks and i wish she would write more to the series. not just edwards POV but also more of the family. and jake and nessie. dont really like the name renesme but i like nessie.

twilight4ever97 I really likes all of the Twilight books, but I think that Eclipse was the best. Breaking Dawn was so great. I love Bella and Emmett. It's sooo funny when Emmett's teasing Bella, and I love when they have an arm wresling competition. I really hated how Jacob imprinted on Renesmee though. It's like, 'o my gosh Jacob, Bella hasn't even held Renesmee yet, and you're having a freaky werewolf connection with her!Get a life!' I loved the ending, except I really think that someone should go up to Marcus and Caius and just kill them! they are soo mean. Aro just lies to Renesmee! that is sooo wrong. I love how Stephenie wrote the middle section from Jacob's point of view. I can't beleive that Stephenie isn't going to write the 5th book, because I really like feeling what the characters feel. In the movie Twilight, I feel like they skipped out on to much, so when they make Breaking Dawn in movie form (which they might not) I hope that they get every detail that was in the book, because it was really good.

twilight4ever97 Man, I love Rosalie in Breaking Dawn. She's soooo funny! I was tearing up when it said that charlie was crying at the wedding. The best part in my opinion is when Bella's trailing with her sheild. I also love Jacob and his blond jokes.

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THE ALTARLAS THE FITH TWILIGHT BOOK

posted by rachel-rathbone

!!!IF U HAVE ALL READY READ THIS SKIP TO CHAPTER TWO FOR THE NEXT PART OF THE STOTY.!!!!!!!!!!

chapter one
"oh please mum ellie is my best friend please let here stay" renesmee begged
"nessie this life just isnt a place for a little girl to be"i hated it but it was true i even called her nessie. she looked at the floor her long black eyelashes cating a shadow on her cheeks, her long bronze hair falling on her face.
"ask our dad" i said sighing pushing the question on to someone else i couldnt stand hurting here.
******
"nessie you cleaned your room write sheel be her in 5 miniutes i can here the...

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Zoey McDaniel Capter 6 Part 2

posted by Sk8bordNewMoon

Collin's POV
I had to go home first but, I needed to morph. I quickly let her off, she had the weirdest and cutest look on her face. Then she relized and said "oh". She turned around, I morphed quickly and put on my pants. I snuck up behind her and put my hands over her eyes. Guess who, I said. Collin! she said. Let me go in through my bedroom window and then I will tell you when you can knock on the front door and come. Is it okay to come in? she said. Won't it be weird with your parents there? No, my dad cleared the problem up with my Mom. well I hope, he did. It must be nice to have real...

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Twilight Widowers Anonymous

posted by Lucian66

I recently read an post from Twilight widower on Twilight Widowers Anonymous( it's a support site for husbands, boyfriends and life partners of Twilight addicts). It cracked me up and i want to share it with you.

Onward and Upward

Firstly, please accept my apologies for the incredibly tardy post. As you can imagine, since
the photos of Robert Pattinson standing shirtless in Italy were released, it has been very difficult for me to get near the computer.

(I thought I could sneak a post in earlier this week, but then - alas - the New Moon trailer came out. Add to that the particularly fine weather...

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Emmett's maybe surefire way to annoy Alice(dogs included)

posted by jacob-superhoty

"EDDIE! EDDIE! EDDIE!", I said. "First, DON'T CALL ME EDDIE! EVER! Second what do you want?", he asked. "I figured out another way to annoy Alice.", I said. "OH. HELL TO THE HELL NO!!!", he screamed."Oh, well I guess Jasper was right. Shame shame.",I started. "What did Jasper."
"Oh nothing really. Just that you were I mean ARE terrified of a little, tinky, tiny, istsy bitsy pettite...shall I go on?",I interupted. "NO. And I am not afriad of little old..", he started to say."Me?", Alice finished. "No. We were just talking about ...", he said unable to finish. "How horrified of wolves he is.",...

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Eternal Midnight Part 7

posted by VAMPirella1997

this part might not be so good, cos i'm kinda tired... let's see how it goes!
-VAMPirella XX

End of Part 6:
the stress and worry made us move even faster as we dashed round the house, informing our family we had to leave. Now. They scurried around, packing. I dashed back to my cottage to grab my clothes. i chucked them all in my suitcase, not bothering to fold in my rush. finally, we were all ready and i dashed back to the house.

Part 7:
I scurried to Edward's side, holding myself to his side. I was scared. Edward wrapped one of his arms around my waist, squeezing my tight to him. I buried...

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moonshining night/day part 8

posted by leisha4

hey.okay two things ive got to do. first Bella and Edward are supposed to be inside the house not out it. Soz for the mistake :) and i apologise again because Carrie ann was trying to do what Stephanie Meyer did in breaking down with the house standing up and the game with the score.
second is, remember carrie anns in france and im not on after friday till september. anyway thanks.

The next day was the day that Nessie was bringing Cally and Kris to meet us. Alice was running around trying to make sure that the house was cleaner then the already spotless state it usually is in.
It was just before...

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Free LA-Area Outdoor Screening of "Twilight"

posted by CommCinema

"Twilight" has been selected to be the closing night event at this year's Old Pasadena Film Festival. The movie will be screened on Saturday, July 25th on the top level of the Schoolhouse Parking Garage located on the SW corner of Colorado Blvd. and Fair Oaks Ave (enter on Fair Oaks, Green, or Raymond). Chairs will be provided on a first-come, first-serve basis so you may want to bring your own lawn chairs or blankets. The movie will start at 9PM; admission is free.

The event is taking place as a part of the world's largest free outdoor movie festival, held every July at various locations throughout...

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Mark Sepia, 4

posted by renesmeblack

Ok, as you know, Tanya and her clan had found Mark dying in the snow in Denali. What happened to Renesmee?

My eyes opened. I was covered in quilts, and the room was really warm. A strawberry-blonde woman knelt beside me. I saw her golden brown eyes and freaked out.
"You're one of the Cullens, aren't you?!" I asked, fearing for my life. The woman looked shocked.
"The Cullens? You know them? This is great news!" she said seriously. I recognized her voice. This woman was Tanya.
"Well, yeah, but-"
"They called me and said Renesmee was kidnapped. You haven't seen her by any chance, have you?"
I stammered....

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I'm Ending My Story

posted by Bella_Cullen902

Hey,

Sorry i haven't wrote in a while it's just that i think people dont like my stories and i dont want to write things for no reason.

I just think it's better this way and i might start again but dont count on it. i know you guys are gonna be mad but i dont think that i'm gonna write anymore cause i'm not any good:(

Sorry again!!

If you want you can give me ideas that you have and ill make a story for you but thats 'bout the only way that i'll be writing stories.

Sorry,
Bella_Cullen902

*~Sad and Sorry~*

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That may have been the end, but not yet...not yet... chapter 16 - Another mission

posted by lycheelily

Last one for today. ^_^

Jasper's Pov

"What's wrong Alice?"

Alice looked as if she were faint or something.

"Nothing is of the matter, I mean...nothing is...well
nothing is wrong okay?"

I really can't trust her sometimes, so I went to Edward.

"Edward, what is Alice thinking?"

"Why would I want to help you?! You tortured me once already!"

"Please! Just tell me what she is thinking!"

"I don't think I should tell them or should I? If someone is controllong Esme, where is this person-"

"Someone is controlling ESME!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?" Edward shouted.

Then, everyone looked at Alice, Edward, and Esme's purple marking.

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Robert Pattinson interviw PART 1

posted by Natalia94

Question: Are really ready for the fandom that's going to result from this film?

Pattinson: Yeah. My brain doesn't really accept it. So it's fine. I can be put anywhere and it just goes completely over my head. I just don't want to get stabbed or something. Literally, my representation asked me, 'Do you have any problems with this? Is it going to be okay?' I said, 'I just don't want to get shot or stabbed. I don't want someone to have a needle and I'll get AIDS afterwards.' That's only my real fears.

Question: And the scary part is that there are probably people out there who would do that.

...

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chrises diary (part 8)

posted by Bella11700

She opened her eyes WIDE and said,"What?" in a tired voice. I could tell she didn't want to wake up at 6:00 in the morning but then again I couldn't sleep at all.
"We need to go. Now."I said.
I picked up my hand,put it as far away from me as possible and pointed two fingers at the suitcase and i brought my arm back to my chest. The suitcase flew rather fast across the floor.
I looked at Susan. She had the most horrified look on her face than ever. But she wasn't looking at me she was looking at the suitcase. I told her "No there are no strings. I figuired that out the hard way."I said now looking...

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chrises dary (part 4 )

posted by Bella11700

"Do yo really want to know?" I gulped. I hate getting yelled at. Even though she is 17 and im 18 it wouldn't make a diffrence if she was 5. ... Mabye. "I think you are nice ad kind and funny, well mabe not last night but-" she smiled at me and as soon as figured out i wasn't geting yelled at took a big breath. Meenwhile she got dressed ad went threw the little fridge that came with the hotel room.
Even the stove was littler than usual. I don't mean like a easy bake oven but i couldn't deny it was.
She puled out a bag of ham and a few slices of cheese. She got a ag of bread and started makin sandwiches....

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Dead Moonlight

posted by AdaLove

I confuse Sunrise with
the Twilight
A Start Ends
an ending begins
She changed my life
my dead heartbeat
my frozen heart
She made them Hers
with her sweet flying heartbeat,
her honey gaze
she makes me love Her face
and the moonlight does not compare Her
I want her Forever
not to move on
to stay here, in the
Dead Moonlight
But I Can't
the sunrise came
and we have no choice back

P.S this time i tried as hard as i could!i work it from the morning!i hope you like it!it is a bit sad but it is the best i can do!

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Edward's Dressing

posted by Isabellaashley

EDWARD'S PEA COAT

''Everybody wants to know where his pea coat came from!'' exclaims the costumer. Unfortunately, it is a one-of-a-kind piece (er, sort of: three to four were made for filming purposes) which Chuck herself crafted after not being able to find the perfect one. ''We needed the right fit, [and] I couldn't find anything in the right shade of gray,'' she recalls. ''Catherine [Hardwicke, the director] is really big on back story for her characters and anything that can help that, even if it's in a texture or color of clothes.'' After considering ''probably 20 swatches,'' Chuck went with one from Mood Fabrics and based her final design on a combination of other styles of pea coats. In the end, his turned out as ''a classic shape with a modern twist.''

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eDward's Lullaby : My Light in The Twilight

posted by AdaLove

You are my life sence
before you, my life was
a story without tense
yOU are the sweetest dream,
my nigh't's lullaby,
my only dream.
my only heartbeat
Bels,your sweet gaze
Cuts like a knife into the haze
I’d let you push me, make me frown
coz you are the most important thing
Your force of will now made unbound
YOUr chocolate eyes,
can take me higher,
you are the rason for me
you are my light in the twilight
my light love

p.s : hey guys!i like very much writing but i don't be a good poet!don't be mean with me!i hope you like it!

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Bella's Secret Life Trailor Part 4

posted by demilovatirocks

The Couples

Edward and Bella

Alice and Jasper

Emmett and Rosalie

Carlisle and Esme

Ashley and Kevin

Sonny and Joe

Selena and Nick

Lily and Mitchell

The first chapter will be posted soon.

PPPPPLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEE CCCCCCOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMEEEEENNNNNTTTTT AAAAANNNNNDDDDD RRRRRAAAAATTTTTEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please I know the trailor is long but it is finished.It had a lot of complications that I wanted to explain so you understood what was happening .Please tell me if you think it is good.

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Bella's Secret Life Trailor Part 2

posted by demilovatirocks

These are the rest of the characters.

Lily Troscout a.k.a Lily Troscout

Jason Dolley,Jason Earle,and Mitchell Musso
Mitchell is with Lily.

David and Daniel Azel
Donna Azel is married to Chris Brown so she is Donna Brown.

Tiffany Thornton,Claire Thornton,and The Thornton Quints

Peter and Simon Azel

Ritchie and Marcia Thornton

The next one will be the family and friends.

I will make the next one really long.I wrote it in my book it is 3 pages but I am still not finished.

PLEASE COMMENT,RATE,AND GET PEOPLE TO READ AND DO THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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My Twilight Fanfiction Update

posted by UchihaYuki

Hey Guys, Yuki here.

As some of you know,
I've been writing a Twilight FanFiction,
I've so far Written Six Chapters..
And I'm so Happy that Everyone seems to Love
it, I got a message, well a couple asking
when my Next Chapter's coming out,

I am in the thinking process,
right now.. I'm not sure what to write in
this chapter, So I wanna know what you guys
think my next Chapter should be about..
and so on, So just comment this with what you think.
I'll be glad to hear all of your opinions,
Or you could message me if you'd like, either way,
It doesn't matter.

For those of you who haven't Read my FanFictions...

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The story never ends, it’s a happily ever after - Part 20

posted by sasie_katje88

i'm still at work so i'm going to put a story up from this computer. so if there are mistakes i'm really sorry because this computer don't tell me if i made one :D Enjoy

Bella's pov

“Bella, Bella” I heard Alice yell with joy while running towards me.
“I’m so glad that your staying here for a couple days now we can dress each other” she said smiling.
“Oh, wow, Alice. I can’t wait, i’m so overjoy” I said sarcastic while looking at Edward so he could save me.
“I think Bella would love to Alice” he said laughing. I just couldn’t believe he just did that to me.
I lowered my shield...