Twilight Series Article: A first chance chapter 1 *flash back*

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posted by Team_robstean

i love twilight

"MOMMY, MOMMY" i yelled over to her "take a picture of me and daddy!"it was a warm summer day when it all happen
"okay honey smile" she took the picture "you look so beautfull honey" she pinched my cheak "and dont you look handsome" she said to daddy "come one lets all get in the picture.. even you danny." she yelled over to my older brother he sat on the porch swing, he could not move as fast because he has keymoe, he got over and mom gave the camra to papaw,
"smile every one!" papaw took the picure. that when it all went down we heard a car scerching around the conner and some gun shote danny pused me down in front of our car that was parked in the drive way... i hid my face in danny shoulder my heart was pounding, i was so sceard when the gun shotes stoped i looked up from dannys shoulder. then i saw mommy and daddy laying on the ground
"DADDY, MOMMY!!!" i yelled i ran over to daddy
"OH know daddy dont die please dont die" tears started pooring down my face "daddy" wispered
"I.. I.. love you baby" he said with his dieing breath.
"i love you too daddy" i ran over to mmoy to see if she was okay
"MOMMY, oh mommy no not you to please!" tears come ferise down my cheak..
"oh honey i love you" with all the streath she had left she got the camra and handed it to me
"dont forget honey" then it slpied out of her hand... i looked to find papaw but he was no where in sight.
i went over to danny..
"so wat do we do know?" i asked
i dnt know lizzie i dnt know" i sat in his laped crulled up and cryed...
for 3 mounth i lived with danny untill her died then they put me in foseter cear.. so know here i sat in the social sureves office... waiting for tamie came in
"hello lizzy how are you today?" she smilled at me her smily made me smile back...
"im fine today" i said
"good good" she took out my file "well we found u a new home this is a really good family i promise."
"okay but are they like my last family?" my last family was up tight to strickt i thought, i could not live with them..
"no no" she said "im sure you will like this family lis=zzy they are good people" she smiled again
"okay tamie when will they be here?" i asked
"tommorrow around 12"
"okay i got my stuff and was getting ready to leave when she stoped me.
"they really are a good family lizzy i promise"
i didnt say any thaing i justw went to my room and got ready to go to bed, i thought about my new family they probly wont like me because im not there perfect child or somthaing, oh well i didnt press to much on teh sucbject i looked at the picter of all of us that one day it still makes me cry somtimes,i truned off my light and went to bed

My alram went off at 3:00 in the morning i dont know why it did, but it did i went to my miny fridge in my room and got somthing to drink i looked up out my room in to the sky and saw the moon it was full and the stars were out when out of the cornner of my eye i say somthing mabey a dog run into out woods i had to go see if it was okay.
i went out side but saw nothing i was getting ready to go back in but then i heard it howl so i had to go see if it was okay.. i went into the woods and looked up at the sight of a hairy, fearful, huge monster, i steped back but didnt make it to far because i fell on a twig then all of a sudden i was looking it right in the eyes...

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Character review; Edward Cullen

posted by shannon9396

Edward Cullen by Robert Pattinson

Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, born in Chicago, Illinois June 20, 1901.

His adoptive father, Carlisle Cullen, transformed him into a vampire in 1918 to prevent him from dying of Spanish influenza during epidemic in Chicago, Illinois. Carlisle instilled in him a sense of morality uncommon in most vampires, and central to his way of life is the refusal to consider humans as food.

Edward meets Bella Swan in 2003, a human girl whose thoughts he is unable to read, and whose blood smells overwhelmingly sweet to him. He fights a growing attraction to her, but after saving her life on several occasions,...

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just another love story chapter 9

posted by anna0789

thanks for the great comments im writing as fast as i can go lol

Noah's pov

While this jacob was in the air i raised a wall from the floor to protect my love my world
Renesmee
how this Dog could tell me that the girl i love is his and then attack me while she was so close of course he didn't love her as much as i do

Nessie was crying her deep brown eyes were so miserable
i had to make this stop seeing her like this was worst than any toruture i've been through
i kissed her in her forhead both her cheeks and at her lips and walk to face ,and kill the dog that had make so miserable my reason for...

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Mary Alice, Chapter 5

posted by teamalice_0

She looked like the pictures, except her hair was shorter now. She looked more like me now that her hair is shorter. But the man next to her..

He looked nice, but I didn't like men. I didn't grow up around them. I was scared of them ,unless I got used to them. Which never happened. Even with my creator, Maria, who had men at her fingertips, I was still scared. They could do you some harm if they wanted to. And they were stronger than me.

I walked along with the group, comming back to the present. I wasn't scared of human men, they couldn't hurt me, vampires though, could. Some of the group almost...

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just another love story chapter 6

posted by anna0789

"And how do you know renesmee,noah?"
Noah took a step foward i still was holding his hand so i also took a step.

"i am at the same school, when i saw renesmee i thought i was dreaming i had never imagine that they were more like me or seen someone so beautiful "he smile showing his dimples at me and i had to smile at that.
grampa carlisle and grandma esm appear from upstairs and rush downstairs to hug me.Then grampa good nature as always

"hello Noah is a plesure to meet you" noah pulled away from my hand to shook gramp's and grandam's hand then he continue with the rest of the family.
my dad's...

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Another Story Chapter 54

posted by surfergal

When I woke up, Nathen was still by my side except this time his head was lying back on the chair. Everyone was still in the same posistion as they were when I woke up the last time except Edward and Bella were there. I was thinking to myself, I wonder if Nathen has even left and Then I looked at Edward and he shook his head no. Poor thing he must be exuasted everyone must be. This is what I was saying before how everyone had to worry about me. I was sad that this happened to me but I was glad that no one else would have to go through it, I mean like I could take the pain but someone else might...

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Mary Alice, Chapter 4

posted by teamalice_0

Thanks you guys for reading!
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Do you want to know how you move thirty odd kids? Bus.
There wasn't enough room, for me to sit by myself, so I had to sit near this annoying girl.

"Mary!" At least she used my nickname. Usualy everyone says 'Mary Alice' or "Brandon."

So it was off to a better start than most.

I walked down the aisle and sat next to her. SHe started talking about how exciting this was to go on a feil trip, and to a hospital, and ect.

I said things back, at the correct times. But part of me didn't want to encourage her, she was...

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Another Story Chapter 49

posted by surfergal

When I woke up, I felt like Emmet or another Vampire was sitting on my shoulder. I can't describe the pain.When my vision was clear Alice, Carlisle, Esme and Jasper were in the room. Carlisle walked over to me and said.
Addi, how do you feel? He ask.
My shoulder its hurting really badly. I told him.
Okay. Carlisle said and then walked out of the room.
Where is Nathen? I ask.
Alice looked at me and said, He's fine.
Oh okay. I said.
I didn't know where he was but I shouldn't have to know where he was as long as he was okay. I didn't want to be so clingy, like always asking what are you doing, where...

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Creset till Dawn Chapter 2

posted by RATHBONE07

Thanks for all the good feed back:) this ones for you guys:)

“What’d you do over the weekend?” Lizzie asked me as we ate our lunch.
“Nothing. Cleaned, did my homework, the usual.” She looked down at her half eaten sandwich, and then carefully put it back in her bag.
“Have you noticed Ashley lately. She’s gotten so skinny, all the boys are paying to much attention to her, especially David.” She said, that last part a whisper. Lizzie had like David for as long as I could remember, she never really admitted it, but I knew that this really bothered her.
“Its Okay, trust me, he’s...

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another story chapter 40

posted by surfergal

When I woke up, I turned over and looked at my clock and it said it was 6 am. I couldn't believe i woke up at six! I decided to get out of bed, I went over to my computer and checked the surf as I usually did. I saw that the waves are going to be great so I put on my bathingsuit and sweat pants and then a sweat shirt on. I grabbed my wetsuit out of the colset and went downstairs and ate breakfast. Alice was in the kitchen when I walked down.
Hey Addi, Whatcha doing up this early? she ask.
Oh, just the usual surfing all day. I told her.
I ate and then left for the garage got my bike and board...

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Amore - Ch. 12 - Against the Clock

posted by patrisha727

Just 15 minutes! How can I clear all of my questions in just 15 minutes!?!?! I groaned. Angela knows the school better than I do. Then I had an idea.
"Angela?" I asked.
"Yeah?" she asked.
"Is there a library here?"
"Of course there is. All colleges have a library. Follow me." she said, and we quickened our walking speed, almost running.
"The library is through these doors." Angela said while pointing to the double doors.
As we went in, there were at least 200 shelves of books. I looked around. I would definetely spend most my time in here in the future.

"So what exactly are we looking for?"...

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New Story - Switched

posted by patrisha727

Hey you guys. You may know me here for the story Evening Star and Amore. But this is an exclusive story that can only be read on the link I hope you guys would like to read "Switched". Here's a little summary:

Bella Swan is a usual student in the small town of Forks. A new student comes along, and seemed to be hiding something huge. But Bella is also hiding something. But like forbidden love, they connect. Then on one April's Fool's Day, a mystical prank caused Edward and Bella to change bodies. While Carlisle tries to find the cure, Edward and Bella discovers the secrets behind their personal lives...

I hope you guys would want to read it. Plz join my spot and read from there! Thx!
BTW: The link of "Switched" is up.

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Zoey M. Cullen Chapter 13

posted by Sk8bordNewMoon

Some one came up behind and started to put there arms around me just as I flew into the air. I flew up so fast that I landed behing him and wrapped my arms around him. I started laughing, Emmett started laughing sort of but he was saying oww. Bella was trying to sneek up on but I truned around and said "Hi Bella!" We all started laughing accept me. Emmett your sorta of squeezing to hard. Emmett was now carriering me acroos the stream. I was starting to get sick cause Emmett was squeezing me too hard. Emmeett, if you squeeze me any tighter I puke! I was so full, I over did it with the moutain...

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Zoey McDaniel Chapter 10 Seth's POV part 2 sorta

posted by Sk8bordNewMoon

Seth's POV
I was at the Cullen's house waiting for Zoe to come back home. All the sudden Edward jumped up. Edward started panicking, Bella grabbed his hand trying to make him stand still. Edward, what is wrong?- Bella ket asking. It's Zoey, she has been shot! I was freaking out. What do you mean Zoey has been shot. I asked Edward, I couldn't grasped it. Collin is will be here in 3 minutes, Bella get on the phone with everyone. I have to go set up everything. He ran up stairs, I folloed him. What can I do?? I asked in a worried tone. I don't know. Bella came into the room and hannded him the...

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Zoey McDaniel Chapter 9 Part 2

posted by Sk8bordNewMoon

Before we went home we went to the store. I needed to fix my self up before. I was also scared of vampire bites. You think I would be use to vampire bites since I have been biten twice already. "okay, you need some gauz, neosporn and some guaz tape Seth said as he was hitting his finger with his other finger". Do you think the come in colors I asked. "I don't know but we can look for some Seth said". We found the guaz. What color should we get I asked excitedly? You mean you not us. Said Seth. The blood that was dripping down my leg was now drying. Here is some lime green quaz Seth point...

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Amore - Ch. 7 - A Visitor

posted by patrisha727

one for today! ^_^

I unpacked my things in about 20 minutes. There wasn't so many things to unpack in the first place. I only brought my clothes, some of my books, and toiletries. After I was done, I looked out of the window again, and saw the skyline of Juneau's sunset. It was beautiful up in the north. I missed home too. There was a computer next to my bed, so I decided to turn it on and see if Renee sent any emails. Alice was looking in her closet for some outfits to wear tommorrow. I ignored her.

The computer started up about 10 times faster than my actual computer. I smiled when I saw...

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Love Bites Chapter 3

posted by TwilightNerd6

Sorry this one is up late ive been busy with Netball training and stuff like that.
Sorry it's a bit long.

"You know how I said that I would be back in five days?"He asked.
"Yes?"I said confused.
"There's a change of plans, were going to be back a little earlier than we planned."He explained to me softly.
"What do you mean?"I asked. I felt like escaping but Alice and Rosalie would catch me so there really was no point.
"That means since your missing me so much, were on our way home."He anwsered my question like he was an angel.
"You are?"I said with my thoughts all messed up.
"Yes, were running back...

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Chapter Ten: White Lace

posted by UchihaYuki

Sorry it took me so extremely long to post this chapter, I've been and still on a trip with my family[ugh] but anyways here it is <3

-Yuki<3

“Jaake…Wake up” Nessie said sweetly as she kissed his cheek trying to wake him up “mmm, What time is it Ness?” he mumbled into his pillow, she grinned “It’s 7:30am… I’ve been up since 6, Mommy, Alice and I are going shopping, so I just thought I’d wake you up and tell you good morning and that I love you..” Jacob flopped from his side to lay on his back so he could see Nessie, he smiled at the sight of her sweet smiling face and...

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This could be the end (Chapter 3 The Cult)

posted by Edwardlover93

before I start I just want to say thank you to my friend Alicelover92 and also princesspinkla for helping me with my writers block thank you and also Stassja thank you for your brill comment :)

Chapter 3 The cult

“What you on about.?” I was shaking with anger. How dare she say what I am and what I'm not. “forget you”
I walked away from her, suddenly James was in front of me, smirking at me. He had a evil glint in his eyes then he slowly vanished.
I had to get out of here.
By the time I come back it will be to late. I was walking down the empty street the sun had set already. How long have...

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Amore - Chapter 4 - Inner Look

posted by patrisha727

Here's one for today! ^_^

"Oh. My. God." Angela and I said, perfectly syncronized.
After a few mintes of silence, Angela and I bursted out laughing.
"This is NOT funny!" Lauren yelled.
That comment made us laugh even harder.
"I NEED a picture of this." Angela said, getting her messenger bag,
"Don't. You. Dare." Lauren growled.
Angela took her small camera and made a quick picture of Lauren's horror-strucked and embarrassed face.
"GIVE ME THAT CAMERA!" Lauren yelled.

Before any of us could reply, a flight attendance came towards us.
"Excuse me? Miss? You need to be more quiet and take your seat."...

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Blood Lusт - Cнαpтεг six.

posted by EdwardCullen604

"Cora why are your eyes...oh!" seths face went blank what did he think? did he still care about me i hoped so. What could i say to him, Surpise, it definitely was that but the word just didn't fit.

"hello i'm Elena this is my coven, Antonio and Charro...and now also Cora" her eyes lookedlike they were trying to burn a hole through ofcourse that was not the case she was just using her gift, willing him to accept this.

"Seth are you okay i'm so sorry about all of this i..." i didn't continue there was no point he was shaking so much that i doubted he was even listening to my words. As seth phased...