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posted by SuperFunFan1001
Sorry if the chapters come a little slow. Right now I'm traveling so... well you know how things are. haha

I have gotten a suggestion to make the story have more emotion and action so I am going to try and add some of that. Hope it's good!

Disclamer: I....... do not............. own.......... Twilight......... or any of its characters. Stephanie meyer does.

(I wish I did though) :(

One night it got bad so Zach invited me to go hunting with him. I was trying not to think of him So I distracted myself by focusing on my prey. A fully grown mountain lion. I lunged for it and drained it.I hadn't even noticed the hiker watching me untill it was to late. I had let our secret slip to a human! How could I have been so careless?

I quickly killed him but knew deep down that there would be a punishment for breaking the most important rule even though the human no longer lives.

Bella POV

I didn't want to kill the poor human and the second I snapped his neck I felt a pang of guilt.

"I know it's hard Bella. That's one of the reasons that you are a vegetarian, but if you hadn't done it then Aro would have and then he would have suffered a more painful death."

said Zach, seeming to have seen the extra emptiness in my eyes. I looked at him and forced a smile.

"That's true. I suppose it was for the better but I still feel guilty. If I had been paying attention-"

Zach interupted me, "No! If we had been paying attention, then this wouldn't have happened. I am just as much of fault. I didn't notice him either."

Sigh.....

"Oh and I suggest we get out of here." he continued, "The volturi will be coming soon and I personally don't feel like dying today if that's what I even do."

"'kay let's go." I said.

Personally I don't care if the volturi find me. I'd rather be dead anyway. But I do have to protect Zach. He won't leave without me. He cares to much.

I feel a little bad. I have been with him now for about a month and a half and I can tell he likes me but I can't give him what he wants. My heart is already taken.

We ran for about 2 hours but then had to stop and hunt. We didn't get to finish what we started because of our little run in with the human.

So after about three deer and a bear I was ready to go. I walked back to were I told Zach we would meet up after hunting but he wasn't there.

About an hour passed and still no Zach. I decided to go out and look for him. I soon came across his scent and followed it."AHHHH!"

ZACH! It was Zach's scream. I started running and about a minute later I saw him. He was lying on the ground, dead. Next to his corps were three men. Correction, three vampires. I froze in shock. My best friend!

"Who are you? Why did you kill him?" I shouted at them.

The one on the right with long, blond hair answered, "You have broken a rule so you must be punished. We are members of the volturi coven," he pointed to himself and the girl in the middle. "My name is Alec and this is Jane. Our leader here is Aro." He pointed to the tall man with black hair on the end.

"I've heard of you." I said.

"Oh well then, I guess we don't need to explain why we are here or what our powers are." said Aro

"Let's just get this over with!" Said the girl who is named Jane.

"One moment. I would like to know a little about her first." Aro said as he grabbed my hand.

Zach had told me about Aro's power to read minds and see into your past so I just let him look.

Good luck trying to see anything. I have my shield up and there's no way you are breaking it down!

There is no need to let anyone see into my past at my hurt. "hm... interesting," he mumbled. "I cannot read your thoughts. How is that possible. You seem to be immune to my gift.......................... I wonder, Jane dear. Shal we see if she is immune to your power as well."

Jane stepped forward, "we shal," she said then looked into my eyes. Suddenly I felt a sharp stabbing pain trying to penitrate my shield. Jane took another step forward as she tried to push her power even harder. "It won't work," I said.

"Why is that? Alec?" asked Aro

"I'll try..." said Alec and I felt another sharp pain in my shield.

"Ahahahaha PERFECT!" Exclaimed Aro.

"Just get my punishment over already! Kill me!" I finally said. I can't take this anymore! Just kill me!

Aro spoke again, "My dear-"

I interupted him again. "Bella" he abviously didn't know my name.

"Bella," he repeated, "You broke the most important law of our kind but I am willing to oversee that if you are willing to join us."

"But she must be killed! You know what she did!" yelled Alec and Jane together.

"True.... Well let's go back home and we will talk about it. Here is not the right place." Aro replyed calmly.

Alec and Jane started running and Aro encouraged me to follow. "Let me say goodbye." I said. With that I bent down and kneeled next to Zach.

"Zach," I started, not even caring that Aro was listening, "I am so sorry I let this happen to you. You never should have befriended me. You took me in when I was broken and helped me learn to use my powers. But most importantly, you gave me a friend. You were the only one I could trust. Everyone else has abandoned me. I love you, like a brother. Goodbye." On the outside I probably looked like my empty lifeless self but on the inside I was breaking.

"Ok I'm ready." I said and started running in the direction that Alec and Jane had ran. I caught their scent and ran up to them. They were easy to catch with the speed I was able to run at. Aro was still far behind me.

I ran up beside Jane and she looked at me and slowed a little in surprise, I shot right past her but then started to slow back down to her pase, fore I do not know where I was suppose to go.

Ok this was short but I had to go. I promis that I will try to make the next chapter longer. Comments always help!

Rate and Review please!

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This is sort of an informal rant/observation.

We all know that New Moon is about tragedy and the loss of love and the aftermath. Edward left Bella. But why did he leave her?

Since New Moon is being adapted into a feature length film, I've been seeing alot of questions and accusations reguarding Edward's absense.

Examples:
- Jacob's better than Edward because he didn't leave Bella!
- Why would Edward leave Bella if he loved her?
- Edward's scum. When you love someone, you don't just abandon them and leave them to die!

Despite the fact that I'm Team Edward, I find these accusations to be...
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Author's Note:Okay.So first of all,all the characters in this fanfic are human.I thought I's make that clear.LoL.Second of all,the families are pretty much all the same,but they're also kinda different.

The Cullens--Carlisle{father},Alice{daughter},Emmett{son},and Edward{son}
~Their mother,Ana,died 15 years ago

The Hales--Esme{mother},Rosalie{daughter},and Jasper{son}
~Their father,Peter,died while Esme was only seven months pregnant

The Swans--Charlie{father},Renee{mother},and Bella{daughter}
~Renee and Charlie never split up

So,in this fanfic,Rosalie,Alice,Edward,Emmett, Jasper,and Bella are best...
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Hello ladies lets have a debate!! Team Edward or Team Jacob?!?! Why do you like that character better than the other? What is you favorite quote from Edward or Jacob(doesn't have to be your favorite characters quote!)Are you in love with that character? Do you like there actor that plays him(i know i do!!) Voice your choice!!


P.S These are my answers: I like Edward better because he is sensitive and protective. My favorite quote is "Do i dazzle you?" i am in love with Edward!! Duh, i like Robert Pattinson!!
These are the most popular questions that I got while on tour. This page is thick with explicit spoilers, so I would recommend not reading this if you have not yet read the book but are still planning to.

What does the cover mean?

Breaking Dawn's cover is a metaphor for Bella's progression throughout the entire saga. She began as the weakest (at least physically, when compared to vampires and werewolves) player on the board: the pawn. She ended as the strongest: the queen. In the end, it's Bella that brings about the win for the Cullens.



What does the title mean?

The title Breaking Dawn is a reference...
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