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posted by Twilight597
a/n umm...yeah someone commented and it made me happy..thanks! so heres chapter 5, and the next one isnt done yet, but it will prolly be done 2maro this ones kinda long too...
~Daniella

Chapter 5

Laurent grabbed me, and I gasped in shock. The next thing I knew we were standing next to the end of the clearing following the one named Carlisle and Esme. I don’t know what we were doing, but I was scared. Laurent followed them up to a giant house. Once again, I was thrown over his shoulder and on my feet. I screamed and fell down again, because it was so abrupt and it scared me.

“You said you were a doctor?” Laurent asked Carlisle.

“Yes, I am,” He answered.

“Can you check her out? I think James threw her around a little, and he has been really harsh with her,” Laurent asked.

“Oh, sure,” Carlisle said, and walked over to me, “Can you stand up and walk?”

I tried, and ended up standing, but I didn’t know if I could walk yet.

“Uhh, I don’t know,” I said.

“Okay, what’s your name?” he asked.

“Becky,” I replied. For some odd reason, I felt like I trusted him, more then I trusted Laurent.

Carlisle picked me up gently and walked inside at a normal pace. Esme and Laurent followed him in. Carlisle set me down on a nice white couch, that I didn’t want to get dirty, because I was probably covered in filth. Carlisle walked up the stairs, saying he will be right back.

“Would you like anything to eat or drink, dear?” Esme asked me.

“Oh, sure I haven’t eaten anything in like four days. I guess I haven’t realized how hungry I was,” I said, after my stomach growled, thinking about it.

“I’ll fix you something, what would you like?” she asked as she was walking out of the room.

I shrugged and I immediately regretted it, because I pulled at my ribs, and I cried out in pain. Suddenly Carlisle and Esme were both in front of me. It seemed weird that these people that I just met, cared for me that much. I grabbed at my chest, and leaned back on the couch, crying.

“What hurts?” Carlisle asked.

“Hmm, I don’t know, I’m kind of grabbing my ribs, maybe my foot,” I said, “Sorry, bad habit.”

“Esme, can you run upstairs and grab some morphine?” he asked his wife. She suddenly disappeared, and I began breathing heavily. I think I was going into shock, because I’m not used to this whole vampire speed thing. I next thing I knew, I felt a sting in my arm, and a few seconds later, I blacked out.

When I finally came to, I found myself in a large bed, covered in all white. I thought I was at the hospital, but it was too home like to be a hospital. I heard the beep of the machines next to me, and I was wondering where I was. If I wasn’t in the hospital, then where was I?

The door opened and I saw Carlisle and Esme, and two other people walk in behind them.

The one person following them was kind of scary. He was lean, but built. The girl had spiky black hair and was literally bouncing off the walls. I’ve never had anyone so happy to see me. That was quite a surprise. I was scared of everyone in the room. I didn’t know what was happening, but I suddenly felt calm. That was weird. I couldn’t make myself feel scared anymore. Something was wrong.

“Whoa,” I whispered.

“It’s okay,” Carlisle said to me, “Alice, come back later with Jasper, I think she’s fine now.”

I took a deep breath, and the two left, following Carlisle’s orders. Alice seemed mad that she had to leave.

“How are you feeling?” Carlisle asked me, and then went over to check out the beeping thing. I just realized, I had a needle stuck in my arm.

“Uh-uh, n-no, I don’t like needles. Not at all, c-can you take that out? Please?” I asked, closing my eyes and taking another deep breath, though this time, I stuttered.

“Well you seem fine; I just need to take one more x-ray for your ribs, and then, I’ll fix them up, which if there are bad enough, I might have to conduct surgery,” He said.

“Well can we do that now? I don’t like this,” I asked.

“Okay. Esme, can you watch her while I set up the machine?” he asked Esme.

He left, so I asked Esme, “Is Laurent still here?”

She came over and sat on the edge of the bed, “No, did he need to be?”

I sighed, “Well I don’t know where we are, and I don’t know where my family is. Victoria just kind of took me from my home, and took me somewhere, making me drink her blood. She bit me too, literally drinking my blood. She says I am a vampire now. Well turning into one, in a few days more. I never believed any of that when I was a kid, and I still don’t, please tell me she was kidding.” I hadn’t noticed, but in my speech, I had started crying. I also hadn’t noticed Carlisle standing in the doorway.

“I’m very sorry for your loss, and I am very sorry to say that Victoria wasn’t kidding. I’d be honored to have you stay at my house, until we can find out about your parents,” Carlisle said, “I’m sure Rosalie can take care of you until then. She loves children. I’m also ready for you down the hall.”

I wiped my eyes and pulled the blanket off and pulled my legs.

I held up my arm, and looked at Carlisle.

He walked over to me and told me to look away. I felt him peel off the tape, and the needle slowly slid out.

I felt like I was going to puke. That was nasty. I looked back, and Carlisle was cleaning it off in a sink by the back window. When he was done, he walked back over to me, at a slow pace, not to frighten me again.

I saw him stick out his arm, and put it around my shoulder, and put his other arm under my knees, and I was being lifted from the extremely white bed. I closed my eyes, and then suddenly felt cold on my back.

The cold metal on my back started moving, and I was pulled into the machine. I didn’t even feel myself being pulled out, because I woke up back on the bed, with another needle in my arm.

I looked at it, and saw water moving in it. I gagged and almost puked, I didn’t want to get any in the room because it’s so white. I saw someone come over to me, as I was trying to get up to run to the bathroom. They had a bucket in their hand. I took it and sat up. I felt it come up in my mouth before I even realized it. The person handed me a glass of water, and took the bucket. After I was done drinking the whole thing, she took it and set it on the table next to me. I finally looked up at her. She was the prettiest girl I have ever seen. Beautiful, wavy, flowing, blond hair and the same color eyes as Carlisle.

“T-thank you,” I said and lay back down, because I had a headache now.

“That’s okay; I’m Rosalie, I’m going to be taking care of you until Carlisle comes home with Edward, Emmett, and Jasper. with James and Bella,” the beautiful lady said.

“Umm, do you know if you can take that out? I asked Carlisle before and he did,” I asked.

“I don’t know; he did something, after the last x-ray. I’ll call him now,” she replied. She pulled out a cell phone, and dialed a number. She walked away, towards the door.

I waited until she walked back to say thank you. Again, I didn’t watch as she slowly pulled it out. When she did, I looked over to her, and asked, “Can I eat something? It’s making me feel dizzy that I haven’t eaten anything in so long.”

“Of course, do you want me to bring you up something?” she offered.

“No, can I walk down to see what there is?” I asked.

“Sure. Do you need help getting up?” she asked.

“No, I think I’m fine,” I replied. I pulled the blanket off of me, and slowly stood up. I’m surprised I didn’t hurt, when I walked. Carlisle must’ve been a really good doctor, because I’ve broken a rib, falling out of a tree before, and the next day, I walked on it, and it still hurt. At first, I limped, but after a few steps, I was walking fine.

We walked down the steps, and Rosalie waited patiently for me. I didn’t really look at their house, when I first came. There was too much of a shock. Now when I really look at it, it’s really nice. I wished I had a house like this back home. Then I thought of my house, which brought up so many memories. Mostly about my parents, and my sister, I really loved them.

Rosalie interrupted me, “Alice told me what you would want, she can see the future, and she knew exactly what you would want.”

I sat on the couch, until Rosalie walked out with something. I looked at the plate. It was my favorite kind of hash browns, with some chocolate chip pancakes and some chocolate milk. I chuckled, “Ha, I’m a chocolate kind of girl. It’s my favorite out of anything.” I kept laughing, and walked over tot he table to eat.

After I finished eating, Rosalie asked me to come outside.

“Becky, I’m very sorry, but Jasper was searching for your parents, and he found that they were murdered, and another girl, I think he said it was your sister. She wasn’t found, and they think she’s held hostage, or dead.” She told me, after we sat down on the swing.

I couldn’t say anything. The whole world just collapsed onto me. “H-how is that possible, w-what? This can’t be. V-Victoria must have done this, after I was gone, because she said something about me being the last half lamina in the world, and I was going to be a queen, and she was going to kill me, or turn me into a full one, but I didn’t think it would be my parents. I have to find Rachelle, she can’t be dead, and Victoria has to be willing to trade her for me, she’s only 6 years old,” I started crying in my hands, my parents never took care of me, really. I mean I loved them, but Rachelle, I promised to take care of her, and I will not, repeat, will not let her die.

“I won’t let you trade yourself for your sister, but I will do anything I can to try and find her. I promise you she will some home alive. Carlisle was talking, and said that if I wanted to keep you, and if you wanted to join our family, I could adopt you, because Emmett says I seem quite attached. He loves you already, says you seem fall a lot. He said it would be funny. I don’t think so. He laughs at anything, so if you say yes, then it’s something to get used to,” She pulled my head out of my hands, and made me look her in the eye, “Would you like to join my family?”

I didn’t really know what to say. This is such a big offer. “Are you really sure, I won’t be a hassle I mean seriously, I can go live with one of my,” I took a pause, “Scary aunts.”

“No, I don’t think I could let you go. I barely know you, but it seems like, you’re already my daughter. I feel this weird connection towards you, like I know you already too. Jasper even knows it. So please, I don’t think I could live without you. It was so worrying when you were asleep.” She told me, with so much emotion, I heard someone groan inside. The door slammed open and a scary looking guy came storming up to us. I was scared; it looked as if he was going to kill me, or both of us.
posted by GothicGirl0525
End of Chapter 8
“What?” I asked wondering why he was staring at me so much. And not answering my question..
“Edward? Why are you starring at me?” I asked then he got out of what he was thinking of because then he answered me
“I was looking at you at you stunned me to silence as always but this time I I was totally stunned when I saw you because I don’t know if we have that much longer and I don’t know how much longer of being with my daughter every time I turn Alice is having a vision of you always dyeing and our daughter always being taken away from us. I fell like the two people...
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posted by bella01
[Dreaming]
Something's wrong.I can feel it.
There is no light in the house but Charlie's cruiser is already here.
"No",I told myself,"maybe they are just just out".I walked towards the door.i took a deep breath before opening the door.Darkness enveloped me.
Just as I thought,no lights are open.I tried to switch on the light when something made me trip over.The smell of blood hit me.I panicked "Whose blood could that be?"I asked myself,hesitating.I quickly stood up,almost loosing balance because of the feeling of nausea.I walked towards the light switch while breathing through my mouth.(one of the...
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Chapter 8

*Bella’s pov*

I opened my eyes. Everything is clear. The sun shone upon me. Alice squeezed my hand slightly. I looked at her impassively. She was sitting beside me, expressionless.
“How are you feeling?” she asked.
“So far, so good.” I whispered.
“Are you sure you’re okay?” she asked anxiously as she helped me to sit on the bed.
“I’m fine, no harm done. What happened?”
She took a deep breath.
She looked at me vacantly, as if she doesn’t want to answer, afraid that I won’t be able to believe her. I’ve been with Alice for a long time, enough for me to know whether...
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this is a story like twilight but different it is also about edward and bella but different the dates and places

bella's pov it is like in 1800

preface
today it was my 17 birthday so i would have to go to what you can call a debutant dance and then i would have to go to many parties until i would find a "soutable husband" well that says my mother i sigh

i was already in my best dress ,my hair ( i like to leave it strait and natural ) but my mother make my hair look curly and elegant. i look myself in the mirror

my mom was so excited about the debutant dance... i was not... i felt like i was...
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Chapter 15
waking up and leaving

When i woke up jake's arms were around my me,like i was his pillow,i started to get up,vickie was going to be up very soon and i needed to get dressed.
jake groaned"what time is it?"he asked me not letting go
"jake its 9:30 so i got to get up,get dressed, pack,and talk with vickie,so let go"i said and kissed him
"i dont want you to go"he said and sounded really sad
"jake come on let go"i said and tickled him till he let go he laughed and laughed
"fine"he said and let go with a pout

i got up dressd in my favorite pair of jeans,on the left back pocket it says stuborn...
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Chapter 3

Edward’s POV

We went out of the school – cutting classes. Bella was still silent sitting on the front seat with me. Alice was not with us, she’s riding her Porsche. Every minute, I glanced at Bella. I can’t stand it when she’s in bad mood. I’m uncomfortable when she’s not talking with me.
“Hey, are you okay?” I finally managed to ask.
She didn’t respond as if she didn’t hear me. Bella was really good when it comes to ‘pretending’. She didn’t even look at me. She was still staring at the window. Her eyes were expressionless. Her lips pursed.
“Are you mad at...
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this one was fun for us to wright. hope you enjoy it.




Charlie's pov


Bella's here.....I said to Sue.

" Thats great " Sue said.

I went to the door to open it up for her. It looks like she brought Nessie,Jake and Alice as well.
"Hey guys come on in."

"Hay dad."

"Hi Grandpa"

"Hi Charile" Jake and Alice said together.

"Sue is here I see'' Jake said.

Ya she and I have somthing to tell you. But frist would you like anything to eat. Sue made breakfest.

"Sure" Jake and Nessie said.

"We just ate" Bella and Alice said.

So Sue made up a plate for Jake and Nessie.

" This is really good even better than Edwards'' Jake...
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posted by Emmett4ever
Hey everyone this is my first story and I hope all of you like it.


Bella's POV


Ugh! The day I have been wishing would never come is here. It's September 13th. I'm offically 18. Great the sun picks today to shine. I hope Charlie and Renee listened to me when I said I don't want any presents. I don't want to act happy on the day I want to mourn. I dressed in a gray shirt and jeans. I went downstairs to get breakfast started. "Happy Birthday,Bells" Charlie greeted me tis morning.CRAP. "Thanks,Dad" I replied."Your mom sent you this" Charlie wrapped box. I took the box and unwrapped it. It was a...
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Just when i thought my life couldnt get any better. I had a wonderful family and "almost" family, great friends (even if most of them were "mythical" creatures) and the best and greatest... fiance in the world. With the wedding only 2 weeks away, i'd better get used to it. I smiled to myself at how reluctant i was to think the world let alone say it out loud.
Speaking of my... fiance, why wasnt he here yet? Anxiety deffinitly wasnt good for me!
Edward had promised to be upstairs and in my arms as soon as Charlies head hit the pillow; which had been 15 minutes ago... not that i was counting....
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hi, please tell me if you like this poem.
and also please write comments. ^_^ thanks for reading it.

bella i need you to know
I will never be a foe
even if you go back to him
and all them even after
us we were best friends
but i hope one day the wound mends
but you hurt me so bad
i was so sad
i almost never got over you
but now that i see you'r haveing a baby
do you mind if she loves me because i want her
to be my renessme.
and she replaces you and all you used to do she is so sweet and when she talks to me I love her
and sure i'll take care of her because she belongs with me she is my renessme.
Warning: This is just my fantasy coming through. And some information to you; the story plays before Bella became a Vampire and there is no Nessie in sight. So its just for our little Jacob's sake, he needs some luving.

Information: Sorry for the long wait, i just really wasnt inspired. But i hope that will change by now. So have fun...

I wish i could scream
What day of the week was it? Not that it was really important, but the point was that i hadnt left that room in about a week, or more. And always by my side was my beautiful girlfriend, the reason why my heart kept beating, Kristine. All...
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posted by renesmeblack
9. The Semi-Sweet Taste of Reunion
Renesmee




I couldn't sit up. I couldn't even move my eyes. The angel looked into them for a fleeting second, with bright crimson eyes. In that same second they grew darker until they were the dark brown I knew. I wish my energy would return. The angel placed his hand over my heart.
"No," he whispered. "No, not my love. NO!!!"
He screamed with rage and ran at Mark.
"You! I saw you! You were killing her, now she's dead! She's dead!!!" he screamed.
"Renesmee asked for this, personally, Jacob. She wouldn't take no for an answer. She wanted the baby out before she...
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posted by CharmedVamp101
I pulled her onto the bed and wrapped the blanket around her, there was no way I wanted to freeze her to death. Then I wrapped my arms around her. Already, she was falling asleep. She was thinking about tomorrow and the wedding that was in two days. I smiled at her pictures, she didn't at all think of the wedding dress though.
I could tell when she was out. Her mind went dark, then it was filled with different pictures and my face was the background. We zoomed into a picture, one that hadn't happened. One that, I never wanted to have, of course the experience would be wonderful, but it was...
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posted by KrystenPeres
Dylan (Matt Dallas) and Gianna (Krysten Peres)
Dylan (Matt Dallas) and Gianna (Krysten Peres)
1. Hello Past

It's hot. I loved the weather in Arizona for that reason. Rain and cold are as scarce as an ace of spades. The windows of Carols, my mother, mini-van were rolled down. The air was slowly but surely getting colder. I inched towards Dylan, my boyfriend. He wrapped his arms around me causing my heart to race. He was looking out the window. I stared at his face lit by the sunset. The contrast shadows from the sun on his fair skin are beautiful; making him look like an angel.
"I still don't know why we're moving to Massachusetts...," my little sister Marcie announced; drawing my attention...
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Chapter 13 Pizza Boy (Nessie's POV)

I opened my eyes and saw Jake, my father, Sam and my grandfather standing over me. Sam had a strange look on his face like a deer caught in headlights; almost as though he wanted to run out of the room but he couldn’t. He was carrying a freshly killed elk. I swallowed hard trying not to think about what I was about to do.
    “Nessie, you don’t have to do this we can try to find another way…”
    I looked at my husband and wanted to cry. He looked horrible. His hair was standing up in every direction I could...
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I'm a Twilight fan myself, but this HAS to be said.

Since the movie came out, did you see a significant rise of it's fans on Fanpop? I did. It jumped alot. My question is, and maybe I'm wrong, are some of the new fans for the story or for the hot vampires/werewovles?

I can see why Twilight can be hated, even though I am a fan. Some Twilight fans are nuts. They scream "OMG I LOVE EDWARD CULLEN?JACOB BLACK!!!!!!!!!!!!" Not that that isn't true, but is that all there is in Twilight? Do those 'fans' care for the story at all? At first, I thought it would pass, but it's gotten pretty bad where...
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posted by Edward_Bella234
Sorry this took so long to get up. I have been working on other writing projects. So here it is, the long awaited Chapter 4.

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I glanced around the room at everyone’s faces. They were all looking at Alice. Sheesh, I thought to myself Enough visions for one day! I knew my dad would have smiled if he wasn’t concentrating on what Aunt Alice was seeing so hard.
    In the same second, both there heads snapped up.
    “Soon” They whispered in synchronization....
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Russet Noon Official Cover Artwork by Stephanie Lostimolo
Russet Noon Official Cover Artwork by Stephanie Lostimolo
According to an official statement issued today by independent publisher AV Paranormal, the talisman image currently being used as the cover art for the novel Russet Noon will be the same one featured on the book cover when it is released as a paperback this Fall of 2009.

Numerous allegations of "theft" and "copyright infringement" have been made against author Lady Sybilla for using the talisman image "without permission" from its creator, artist Stephanie Lostimolo.

On May 11, 2009, Lady Sybilla responded to these accusations with the following statement: "I have every intention of giving credit...
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please comment this is my first story

Bella’s POV

It was a cold day in Alaska but I didn’t care I was starting to read Wuthering Heights again when I remembered who gave it to me. I started to think of Carlisle, Esme, and my one and only love Edward when I suddenly had a vision of me living in Forks with them and Alice, Jasper, Rosalie, and Emmett. I decided that I would go and visit them. First I should call them because I have no idea how I will be able to get all of my stuff there. I wasn't planning to ride three times to get it all there.

Alice’s POV

“Alice what did you see” Jasper...
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posted by samiam4edward
I was covered in bruises, bumps and cuts and had just fallen out of a tree twice, I decided it was third time lucky and I was going to get up the there. In fact, I was so determined to climb this tree that I wouldn’t even really care if I broke an arm or a leg in the process. So I walked back a few paces and started to run. I got within a metre and I jumped – and slammed face-first into the tree trunk. I fell straight to the ground and flat on my face. I flipped myself over, moaning in pain. I looked at my right leg, biting back tears. There was a massive gash from my knee down to my ankle....
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