This is coninuing from the last article, i try and keep u all happy by doing a little bit off chapter one, this is the third part of chapter one out of 6.
thx for the support, i just started an hour ago and now, i cant seem to stop typing! heeheehee. i was planing to use this rough draft as a base line for my real book, but i cant get my book published until i am older so i thought may aswell let them see the rough copy. its not as good as my real copy, soo sorry. enjoy x
I woke up in a room, not my room, but someone else’s. I groaned, my body was stiff and very sore.
“She‘s finally waking.” I didn’t recognise the voice, but it was a girls.
“We can finally get going.” another voice, male this time.
“Shut up, Emmet.” I recognised this voice it was Erik.
“Erik.” I groaned.
“I‘m here.” he stroked my hair.
I tried to open my eyes, but I was too sore. It seemed that I was lying on a mattress, it was very comfortable. The thick heavy blanket was to thick for my liking, I was sweating already. I tried to find Erik’s hand, but instead of finding his hand, I felt something cold, rough, hard and it was shaped like a gun!
I gasped and put my hand under the blanket.
“Aw, frig sake Emmet, you could of put that somewhere else.” Erik complained and moved away from me. I kept my eyes closed hoping that maybe it wasn’t a gun. I felt someone stroking my hair again, must be Erik. I was quiet for a long time. The hand that was stroking my hair, was now stroking my face, neck and arms.
“When will that girl wake up Erik. Look at the time.”
“She’ll wake up when she’s ready, Victoria.” Erik replied softly.
“Yeah well, I’m ready to go.” The girl named Victoria said harshly.
“well go, we’ll meet you later.”
I heard the shuffle of footsteps fade away. I lay there maybe for about an hour and then I heard Erik sigh.
“Come on Mel, wake up.”
I opened my eyes slowly, still feeling really sore. I was in a dark room, Erik’s face was right in front of me smiling. He stroked my cheek. “Hello.” he whispered.
I tried to get up, but I couldn’t. so I gave up.
“Where, where am I?” I asked.
My eyes scanned the dark room. I could see everything even though it was very dark. There was another bed beside mine, a wardrobe in the corner. Their was a rocking chair beside the window and It was night time.
“Mel, I’m afraid I’ve done something.”
I turned at looked at Erik. “Yeah, you have. Why on earth did you write that letter? What did it mean that, I’m leaving? ”
“Look, Mel you’re the one. I can feel it. I love you and I want you to come and live with me. But I have done something else.” he took my hand, and somehow I was standing up. We went to the far wall. It was smooth and it was a dark purple colour.
“I want you to climb up this wall.” He stroked the wall.
“You what?” I shrieked.
“Look, watch me.”
I could see Erik, smiling. And then he was climbing the wall. He was climbing a wall, using his hands and feet. When he reached the top, he jumped down.
“How did you do that?” I asked. Stroking the wall.
“I am a vampire.”
I didn’t believe him at first but then I was able to do all these cool things and I realised I was a vampire to. I fainted when I understood what was going on. The next day we went
to the airport. I got out of the car, and went to the boot. Erik kindly packed my clothes and some of my beloved items. I took out my two blue suitcases and set them on the suitcase trolleys. Erik set his suitcases on mine and started pushing the trolley towards the doors.
“Where‘ re we going?” I asked. He didn’t exactly tell me where we were going but, there’s no point going back to my mum because I am a completely different person even though I feel the same inside, on the outside, I have changed so much. I have become really beautiful, my skin is as white as the colour it’s self. My voice has become more softer, which was hard to believe, how a dangerous, evil, sick vampire could be soft and sweet. I can climb walls, run really fast and I can lure humans to me. I am very strong. I can read peoples mind, but I need to be touching them, to be able to get into their heads. I can torture humans and vampires using my mind. It is cool being a vampire, having lots of cool features, but the down side is, not ever being able to be with my family and I have to suck humans blood. I shivered at the thought.
“Where are going to Alaska.” Erik answered.
I put my arm around his waist and set my head on his shoulder. I may as well get used to being kind with Erik, he did say I was the one he wanted and that he loved me. He put his arm over my shoulder. I helped him steer the trolley. We were sitting on the airplane, I was sitting beside Erik. I was pretty tried and I decided maybe I needed some sleep. It was 11pm after all, the great thing is vampires can sleep and go out in the sunlight.
I yawned. “I‘m gonna go to sleep.” I warned Erik.
He stoked my cheeks. “You do look tired.”
“Hmm,” I yawned again. I set my head on his shoulder and he wrapped his arms around me. That’s how my new life began.
Three days later...
I woke up from the dream. That was how I became an vampire, and I would never forget it. Erik was awake looking down at me, smiling. I felt sick, how could this guy or should I say vampire, smile at me, after what he has done to me. That reminded me, he never did tell me how I was turned into a vampire.
I sat up, Erik sat beside me and took my hand. “How did I become a vampire?” I asked.
He laughed. I looked at him, giving him a dirty look. “I don’t find it funny, Erik.” I folded my arms.
“Sorry. Okay, well all I had to do was…”
“Was?”
“Suck your blood.” he looked down playing with the nightgown I was wearing.
“Well, I know that, but how did you suck my blood exactly?” I asked.
“Well, the only way we can suck out your blood is by scraping the left side of your neck and sucking all the blood out, until you are free from it, then I have to lick you scar and cut open the right side of my neck and pore a few drops into your neck.”
I didn’t understand one thing he said, but I didn’t bother asking him to explain it again. I put my hand up to the left side of my neck.
to be continued.......
thx for the support, i just started an hour ago and now, i cant seem to stop typing! heeheehee. i was planing to use this rough draft as a base line for my real book, but i cant get my book published until i am older so i thought may aswell let them see the rough copy. its not as good as my real copy, soo sorry. enjoy x
I woke up in a room, not my room, but someone else’s. I groaned, my body was stiff and very sore.
“She‘s finally waking.” I didn’t recognise the voice, but it was a girls.
“We can finally get going.” another voice, male this time.
“Shut up, Emmet.” I recognised this voice it was Erik.
“Erik.” I groaned.
“I‘m here.” he stroked my hair.
I tried to open my eyes, but I was too sore. It seemed that I was lying on a mattress, it was very comfortable. The thick heavy blanket was to thick for my liking, I was sweating already. I tried to find Erik’s hand, but instead of finding his hand, I felt something cold, rough, hard and it was shaped like a gun!
I gasped and put my hand under the blanket.
“Aw, frig sake Emmet, you could of put that somewhere else.” Erik complained and moved away from me. I kept my eyes closed hoping that maybe it wasn’t a gun. I felt someone stroking my hair again, must be Erik. I was quiet for a long time. The hand that was stroking my hair, was now stroking my face, neck and arms.
“When will that girl wake up Erik. Look at the time.”
“She’ll wake up when she’s ready, Victoria.” Erik replied softly.
“Yeah well, I’m ready to go.” The girl named Victoria said harshly.
“well go, we’ll meet you later.”
I heard the shuffle of footsteps fade away. I lay there maybe for about an hour and then I heard Erik sigh.
“Come on Mel, wake up.”
I opened my eyes slowly, still feeling really sore. I was in a dark room, Erik’s face was right in front of me smiling. He stroked my cheek. “Hello.” he whispered.
I tried to get up, but I couldn’t. so I gave up.
“Where, where am I?” I asked.
My eyes scanned the dark room. I could see everything even though it was very dark. There was another bed beside mine, a wardrobe in the corner. Their was a rocking chair beside the window and It was night time.
“Mel, I’m afraid I’ve done something.”
I turned at looked at Erik. “Yeah, you have. Why on earth did you write that letter? What did it mean that, I’m leaving? ”
“Look, Mel you’re the one. I can feel it. I love you and I want you to come and live with me. But I have done something else.” he took my hand, and somehow I was standing up. We went to the far wall. It was smooth and it was a dark purple colour.
“I want you to climb up this wall.” He stroked the wall.
“You what?” I shrieked.
“Look, watch me.”
I could see Erik, smiling. And then he was climbing the wall. He was climbing a wall, using his hands and feet. When he reached the top, he jumped down.
“How did you do that?” I asked. Stroking the wall.
“I am a vampire.”
I didn’t believe him at first but then I was able to do all these cool things and I realised I was a vampire to. I fainted when I understood what was going on. The next day we went
to the airport. I got out of the car, and went to the boot. Erik kindly packed my clothes and some of my beloved items. I took out my two blue suitcases and set them on the suitcase trolleys. Erik set his suitcases on mine and started pushing the trolley towards the doors.
“Where‘ re we going?” I asked. He didn’t exactly tell me where we were going but, there’s no point going back to my mum because I am a completely different person even though I feel the same inside, on the outside, I have changed so much. I have become really beautiful, my skin is as white as the colour it’s self. My voice has become more softer, which was hard to believe, how a dangerous, evil, sick vampire could be soft and sweet. I can climb walls, run really fast and I can lure humans to me. I am very strong. I can read peoples mind, but I need to be touching them, to be able to get into their heads. I can torture humans and vampires using my mind. It is cool being a vampire, having lots of cool features, but the down side is, not ever being able to be with my family and I have to suck humans blood. I shivered at the thought.
“Where are going to Alaska.” Erik answered.
I put my arm around his waist and set my head on his shoulder. I may as well get used to being kind with Erik, he did say I was the one he wanted and that he loved me. He put his arm over my shoulder. I helped him steer the trolley. We were sitting on the airplane, I was sitting beside Erik. I was pretty tried and I decided maybe I needed some sleep. It was 11pm after all, the great thing is vampires can sleep and go out in the sunlight.
I yawned. “I‘m gonna go to sleep.” I warned Erik.
He stoked my cheeks. “You do look tired.”
“Hmm,” I yawned again. I set my head on his shoulder and he wrapped his arms around me. That’s how my new life began.
Three days later...
I woke up from the dream. That was how I became an vampire, and I would never forget it. Erik was awake looking down at me, smiling. I felt sick, how could this guy or should I say vampire, smile at me, after what he has done to me. That reminded me, he never did tell me how I was turned into a vampire.
I sat up, Erik sat beside me and took my hand. “How did I become a vampire?” I asked.
He laughed. I looked at him, giving him a dirty look. “I don’t find it funny, Erik.” I folded my arms.
“Sorry. Okay, well all I had to do was…”
“Was?”
“Suck your blood.” he looked down playing with the nightgown I was wearing.
“Well, I know that, but how did you suck my blood exactly?” I asked.
“Well, the only way we can suck out your blood is by scraping the left side of your neck and sucking all the blood out, until you are free from it, then I have to lick you scar and cut open the right side of my neck and pore a few drops into your neck.”
I didn’t understand one thing he said, but I didn’t bother asking him to explain it again. I put my hand up to the left side of my neck.
to be continued.......
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im going to put an introduction to this one up today. it has to do with twilight and a band called Paramore(my two fav things-paramore and twilight)most of my friends like my writing but when i do post i would like some criticizing comments for me to improve with.
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Ouch! And ouch again!
Method acting? Vampire-playing Robert Pattinson admits he sometimes slips into character when he's out with the ladies.
"I've been known for a little nibble," he told reporters at the London premiere of his film Twilight.
Mr. Pattinson's co-star, meanwhile, shared one of his less-successful efforts to impress the opposite sex. "He tried to pick me up ... and he pulled his groin," said Kristen Stewart, 18. "It was hilarious! He was hurt, but he was laughing."
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Summit Entertainment seizes up the next three books
LOCATION: Forks, cont.
THE SKINNY: Despite TWILIGHT not even being out in theaters yet, Summit Entertainment knows they have something major on their hands.
The studio has scooped up the rights to the next three novels in Stephenie Meyer's teen vampire series. Not only that, but TWILIGHT screenwriter Melissa Rosenberg is already planning to write scripts based on the second and third books, NEW MOON and ECLIPSE. A writer has not yet been attached to the fourth book, BREAKING DAWN.
TWILIGHT, which introduces audiences to the relationship between regular teenage girl, Bella, and a vampire, Edward, will be out in theaters this Friday.
OK EVERYONE IS LIKE TOTALLY HEAD OVER HEALS FOR EDWARD AND WHEN ALL COMES DOWN TO THE FACTS EDWARD JUST LEFT HER WITHOUTH THE APPROPRATE GOODBYE. JACOB WHOS WAS THERE FOR HER ALL THOSES MONTHS EDWARD WAS GONE. THE PROTECTED HER AND LET HER IN ON HIS WEREWOLF SECRET WHILE MAINTAINIGN A REALATIONSHIP WITH HER EVEN THOUGH HIS WOLF PACHK SAID NO. THATS TELLS ALOT ABOUT WHAT KIND OF FRIEND JACOB IS AND THEN OUT OF NOWHERE EDWARD COMES BACK INTO HER LIFE.WAT A LOOSER. AND THEN BECAUSE OF THE TREATY ITS LIEK EDWARD EXPECTS BELLA TO JUST STOP BEING JACOBS FRIEND. EDWARD JUST NEEDS TO TRUST BELLA I MEAN WATS CHANGES NOW SHES KNOWN HIS SECRET SINCE BEFORE EDWARD CAME BACK AND THEN SOME.
Bella: How old have you been 17?
Edward: A while.
Bella: How long is a while?
Yesterday when I started re-reading twilight i noticed that Bella asks Edward that questiion when she goes out to dinner with him...
But in the first trailer she says it to him in the woods.
Right now i am worried that the movie isn't going to be as good as the book. If you compare the trailer to the book i bet you will find much more of messed up scenes.
Please leave me acomment on what you think about this.... because I am kind of pissed that Stephanie would allow the director to change everything...
Well you know maybe im speaking to soon with out seeing the movie....but thats what I think.
Edward: A while.
Bella: How long is a while?
Yesterday when I started re-reading twilight i noticed that Bella asks Edward that questiion when she goes out to dinner with him...
But in the first trailer she says it to him in the woods.
Right now i am worried that the movie isn't going to be as good as the book. If you compare the trailer to the book i bet you will find much more of messed up scenes.
Please leave me acomment on what you think about this.... because I am kind of pissed that Stephanie would allow the director to change everything...
Well you know maybe im speaking to soon with out seeing the movie....but thats what I think.