I lay, dying, getting closer to death every tick of the clock. I was in pain. And then the shifts changed. I saw Carlisle come in. he talked to my mother, then wheeled her away. When he came back, he had an expression of determination on his face. He took me away to. I knew where we were going-the morgue. Yet I was not dead. I tried to speak, but I could not. SOmething told me that something terrible was about to happen. Yet I had no idea what was in-store for me.
We arrived. Carlisle's determination was replaced by pain. I could only wonder why. Anad then he opened his mouth, and I felt a strange sensation on my neck. It took me a minutue to realize that he was biting me. And then the burning came. I screamed, never knowing anything like it before. He bit me again, my wrists, my ankles. I screamed again......before Carlisle picked me up with inhuman speed and ran to his house. I wondered what I was becoming. but i knew, it was like him. Not human. I waited, waiting for the pain to stop.
Hey guys, how do you like it. its going to be a story of Edwards past. Im a first time writer, so please give me feedback!
Thanks!!
Kirsty Ashton
We arrived. Carlisle's determination was replaced by pain. I could only wonder why. Anad then he opened his mouth, and I felt a strange sensation on my neck. It took me a minutue to realize that he was biting me. And then the burning came. I screamed, never knowing anything like it before. He bit me again, my wrists, my ankles. I screamed again......before Carlisle picked me up with inhuman speed and ran to his house. I wondered what I was becoming. but i knew, it was like him. Not human. I waited, waiting for the pain to stop.
Hey guys, how do you like it. its going to be a story of Edwards past. Im a first time writer, so please give me feedback!
Thanks!!
Kirsty Ashton
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i hope yOu like it!!!
i didn't know how my life will be has vampire, how things should work with Charlie and Mom, keeping my self away from then is torturing my self.
i felt like i'm trapped without a exit
the only thing thatr keep me strong is my family
Edward and Rennesme, nOw that they are not in mOre danger i feel more in peace.
But what will i shOuld tell charlie when the time to move arrive?
hoe he react to this, i think that he already know what we really are, but he is too scared to said it or just think about it.
But what i really know right now is that we are safe and will start our Happy Ever After.
I think!!!!
i hope yOu like it!!!
i didn't know how my life will be has vampire, how things should work with Charlie and Mom, keeping my self away from then is torturing my self.
i felt like i'm trapped without a exit
the only thing thatr keep me strong is my family
Edward and Rennesme, nOw that they are not in mOre danger i feel more in peace.
But what will i shOuld tell charlie when the time to move arrive?
hoe he react to this, i think that he already know what we really are, but he is too scared to said it or just think about it.
But what i really know right now is that we are safe and will start our Happy Ever After.
I think!!!!
im going to put an introduction to this one up today. it has to do with twilight and a band called Paramore(my two fav things-paramore and twilight)most of my friends like my writing but when i do post i would like some criticizing comments for me to improve with.
Thanks
<3 Danie
ok, i know she loves both but its probably ovious who she loves more, but im not sure is it edward or jacob.
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she said when edward asked her,
" are you sure you made the right choice, i have never seen you in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she said when edward asked her,
" are you sure you made the right choice, i have never seen you in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better