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Carlisle kept flipping throught the pages and pages of pictures, when his eyebrow rose.
"Mary? Who is this?" he poitned to a picture.
"You honestly don't know?"
He shook his head.
"That's Alice, when she was human."
Everyone swarmed around him trying to see the picture. hoave they not seen her when she was human?
Edward made eye contact with me and shook his head. I stared around the room, thinking, my thoughts wandering.
"Mary?" I looked over to a sad Alice.
I started walking to her but stopped when Jasper hugged her. I moved so I could be close to her but not Jasper.
She ha the binder and pointed to an old picture, of me, my mom, Grandpa, and Grandpa.
"I still can't believe this. That's our family. Grandma, Grandpa, Mom and me."
SHe stared intently at the picture, tracing each person with her finger.
"What about your father, where's he?"
"I have no father." I growled.
Everyone stayed silent.
"Who changed you?" My head snapped in the direction of the voice, facing Carlisle.
"A woman, I know her name, but I never say it. I despised that women, I was only a disposable pawn in her book,"I rolled my sleeves up, and showed them some of my scars," I was lucky to survive. And these are some of the scars I got."
Everyone stared, then stared at Jasper. Thats when I noticed the scars, covering his face.
"You got the same scars as me, as least your creator was nicer to me."
Silence, I knew I was right.
"Mary?" I stared at my aunt waiting for her question, I knew I would answer it anyways.
"I know you won't like saying it, but can you tell me what her name is/was?"
"Anything for you, and I'm saying this only for you. Her name is Maria."
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Carlisle kept flipping throught the pages and pages of pictures, when his eyebrow rose.
"Mary? Who is this?" he poitned to a picture.
"You honestly don't know?"
He shook his head.
"That's Alice, when she was human."
Everyone swarmed around him trying to see the picture. hoave they not seen her when she was human?
Edward made eye contact with me and shook his head. I stared around the room, thinking, my thoughts wandering.
"Mary?" I looked over to a sad Alice.
I started walking to her but stopped when Jasper hugged her. I moved so I could be close to her but not Jasper.
She ha the binder and pointed to an old picture, of me, my mom, Grandpa, and Grandpa.
"I still can't believe this. That's our family. Grandma, Grandpa, Mom and me."
SHe stared intently at the picture, tracing each person with her finger.
"What about your father, where's he?"
"I have no father." I growled.
Everyone stayed silent.
"Who changed you?" My head snapped in the direction of the voice, facing Carlisle.
"A woman, I know her name, but I never say it. I despised that women, I was only a disposable pawn in her book,"I rolled my sleeves up, and showed them some of my scars," I was lucky to survive. And these are some of the scars I got."
Everyone stared, then stared at Jasper. Thats when I noticed the scars, covering his face.
"You got the same scars as me, as least your creator was nicer to me."
Silence, I knew I was right.
"Mary?" I stared at my aunt waiting for her question, I knew I would answer it anyways.
"I know you won't like saying it, but can you tell me what her name is/was?"
"Anything for you, and I'm saying this only for you. Her name is Maria."
hello fanfiction writers
I feeling really bored right now, so i guess i thought about all of you guys/girls :D
I want to congratulate you all for making such awesome and great fanfiction. So it must be said, so everyone can read about you're fanfiction :-)
I read most of the fanfiction (allot actually) myself and i just adore them i sometimes print them out and start reading them like a book, it's really amazing that people are still so broad-minded :o)
*****To all fanfiction writers out there continue the great job and don't ever stop :D LOL and to the people who want to start a fanfiction on there own, good luck and enjoy what you write :D*****
I feeling really bored right now, so i guess i thought about all of you guys/girls :D
I want to congratulate you all for making such awesome and great fanfiction. So it must be said, so everyone can read about you're fanfiction :-)
I read most of the fanfiction (allot actually) myself and i just adore them i sometimes print them out and start reading them like a book, it's really amazing that people are still so broad-minded :o)
*****To all fanfiction writers out there continue the great job and don't ever stop :D LOL and to the people who want to start a fanfiction on there own, good luck and enjoy what you write :D*****
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im going to put an introduction to this one up today. it has to do with twilight and a band called Paramore(my two fav things-paramore and twilight)most of my friends like my writing but when i do post i would like some criticizing comments for me to improve with.
Thanks
<3 Danie