Sorry for taking so looong:((
All was done. We all strode out of the bar together. Of course I was ashamed of what I had just done. Killing others for my own survival. James held me tightly, hushing me silently every time I whimpered. Laurent and Embelline were on either of our sides, licking their lips, savoring the blood.
“Embelline?” Laurent stopped dead in his step and turned around to face Embelline. “Im going up North, get a few more, im still not full.” Embelline nodded.
“Ill come with you. It wasn’t the best ive eaten either.” And they left, hand in hand. It was weird though. After all the time I had spent with then I would have never thought they would end up together. James tightened against me. I looked up at his face, the words torn, pain, and hate, was written in huge bold letters on his face.
“James?” I asked. “What’s wrong?” He was acting so weird.
“Nothing.” He said, his voice really tight. He pushed me against his stone chest, and then left me. I could see him until he turned the corner. James had left me here all alone.
“Miss?” I turned towards the man. His face was all serious, he wanted me out.
“The stores closing. You’ll need to leave.” I looked down once again at the newspaper in my hands. It was dated from yesterday, on the front page was a girl. Her brown hair and bright red eyes made her pop out of the page. Memories came rushing back inside my head, memories I thought I had already forgotten. I quickly put the newspaper back on the stands and left the store. The bell rang as I closed the door behind me. I couldn’t get the picture out of my head. Her face, her wicked smile, her terrified eyes. She deserved to be terrified, after all she had done. I walked down the street in wonder. People continued to pass me without knowing the real meaning of this world. Fear. I hadn’t seen James in about a week or so. He had stuff to deal with, other than me. I missed him though, more than I would ever admit. He said that he would be back, just needed to think things over. What things? I passed another newsstand, and noticed the picture again. I flinched more than I thought I would ever at the picture of Mary, starring at me, hate written on her face. She was back.
All was done. We all strode out of the bar together. Of course I was ashamed of what I had just done. Killing others for my own survival. James held me tightly, hushing me silently every time I whimpered. Laurent and Embelline were on either of our sides, licking their lips, savoring the blood.
“Embelline?” Laurent stopped dead in his step and turned around to face Embelline. “Im going up North, get a few more, im still not full.” Embelline nodded.
“Ill come with you. It wasn’t the best ive eaten either.” And they left, hand in hand. It was weird though. After all the time I had spent with then I would have never thought they would end up together. James tightened against me. I looked up at his face, the words torn, pain, and hate, was written in huge bold letters on his face.
“James?” I asked. “What’s wrong?” He was acting so weird.
“Nothing.” He said, his voice really tight. He pushed me against his stone chest, and then left me. I could see him until he turned the corner. James had left me here all alone.
“Miss?” I turned towards the man. His face was all serious, he wanted me out.
“The stores closing. You’ll need to leave.” I looked down once again at the newspaper in my hands. It was dated from yesterday, on the front page was a girl. Her brown hair and bright red eyes made her pop out of the page. Memories came rushing back inside my head, memories I thought I had already forgotten. I quickly put the newspaper back on the stands and left the store. The bell rang as I closed the door behind me. I couldn’t get the picture out of my head. Her face, her wicked smile, her terrified eyes. She deserved to be terrified, after all she had done. I walked down the street in wonder. People continued to pass me without knowing the real meaning of this world. Fear. I hadn’t seen James in about a week or so. He had stuff to deal with, other than me. I missed him though, more than I would ever admit. He said that he would be back, just needed to think things over. What things? I passed another newsstand, and noticed the picture again. I flinched more than I thought I would ever at the picture of Mary, starring at me, hate written on her face. She was back.
They've nominated the flick for 8 of their Razzie awards, which are like the Oscars but for the "worsts" of the year, so they're a little more fun.
Breaking Dawn was nominated for:
•Worst Picture
•Worst Screenplay
•Worst Prequel, Remake, Rip-Off, or Sequel
•Worst Director
•Worst Screen Ensemble
•Worst Actor: Taylor Lautner
•Worst Actress: Kristen Stewart
•Worst Screen Couple
Do you think Breaking Dawn deserves the nominations?
Bella swan was a shy girl,
she came to live with her dad who is shy as well,
She joined forks high school with no friends
But look how she turned out in the end,
A boyfriend whom she loves very much,
And her friend Mike who has a crush
She has entered the supernatural world
and now has to join the Cullen family as well.
Victoria is back and in a hunting mood,
Edward, Bella and Jacob camping in the woods,
Bella has agreed to marry Edward
and Jacob didn't realize he isn't very clever
Honeymoon in isle Esme is oh so great
until Bella falls pregnant
She has a little girl called Renesmee
And Jacob Black imprints on her and Bella isn't happy.
she came to live with her dad who is shy as well,
She joined forks high school with no friends
But look how she turned out in the end,
A boyfriend whom she loves very much,
And her friend Mike who has a crush
She has entered the supernatural world
and now has to join the Cullen family as well.
Victoria is back and in a hunting mood,
Edward, Bella and Jacob camping in the woods,
Bella has agreed to marry Edward
and Jacob didn't realize he isn't very clever
Honeymoon in isle Esme is oh so great
until Bella falls pregnant
She has a little girl called Renesmee
And Jacob Black imprints on her and Bella isn't happy.
All right guys, as you all have probably noticed my last chapter was a bit of a dozer, but don't worry my next chapter will be right. And just incase that you have not figured it out yet. Most was the chapter is correct except for the bit about going into the car. That bit will be coming up in the next chapter. Also don't be afraid to give me any advice on how I can make my writing Better any critasim is welcome.
On another note this whole story will only be bell as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
Love flynnismine
On another note this whole story will only be bell as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
Love flynnismine