hey im back, i had a brilliant holiday and i thought you would all like to have the next part. i apoligise i've just had an injection so im not feeling that good so most of it isn't edited and it short too so it's not as good as i want it to be, but please comment and rate anyway. heres the next part!
reminder of part 9
“Cally will you tell me what happened to Alice?”
“As much as I know anyway. I was born on the 3rd of March 1900. I was told that you and my family died in a house fire.” Cally broke of and nodded in Alice’s direction. Alice’s face was a picture it was full of confusion and hatred. “I blame the wolves” she muttered, and then Cally carried on “anyway I was either 16 or 17 when a stranger came up and said “there is something you need to know” and then he bit me. After a while I woke up I saw a note that said: ‘your mother’s alive, and alone she doesn’t say anything about you hope this helps. Signed vampire. P.S your mothers a vampire like me and like you. Find the Cullen’s and you will find your mother.’
‘I nearly found you three times but every time you moved away and it taken century’s to find you “ Alice’s face was very white, really pale even for a vampire. “How could you forget me? Your own daughter?” she whispered shaking her head.
Esme came in with food for Jake. “She was kept in the dark” Esme said to Cally before turning to Alice. “Alice you know this don’t blame yourself. You can’t expect to remember anything about you life as a human. But let’s look at the future. Your daughter is here, we can be twice as happy now and ....”Esme trailed off because we all heard the same sound.
A stranger approaching the house trying to be very quiet...
“Damm” Edward muttered “keep very quiet” he added.
And then we all heard tapping at the window and a loud shouting for all of us to come outside....
~~~
part 10
“Don’t move” Edward whispered again.
“GET OUT NOW” shrieked a woman’s voice now not tapping but banging the window.
“Don’t move” Edward repeated.
“Why?” i asked, but he wasn’t listening to me.
“CULLENS are you stupid or something? “Get OUTSIDE and come into view. NOW.' the shouting stopped and hesitate for a moment. "Maybe they are out Grace?”
“They aren’t I hear two beating hearts and whispering Tara” another hissed.
“Oh crap, crap, crap. It’s Grace Harris” Emmett muttered in horror. He was just as pale as Alice was.
“Who’s grace Harris?” Rosalie asked glaring at Emmett the way she used to glare at me when I was human.
“My was-to-be wife when I was human. You know my ex-fiancée.”
“I thought she died?” Edward whispered astonished.
“How come I didn’t know Emmett? How could you keep me from this after all these years?” Rosalie looked so hurt, if she could cry she would but then she shifted her weight and glared at Emmett with such injure that Emmett forgot to whisper.
“I thought she was. I realised like five seconds ago, I’m guessing she turned into a vampire even after I tried to safe her...” Emmett was cut off –
“Tara Emmett’s in there” grace called interrupting Emmett’s explanation.
“What do you mean?” The other asked.
“I hear his voice”
“Ohh. so what are we going to do? god it stinks what is that?”
“Well I want to kill that bitch that ran off with him. He will be mine now so she can push off. and i think theres a gigantic mutated dogs surrounding us, does that explain the smell?”
“But Grace you don’t even know if it’s him. It might just be another look-a-like, and thanks now i feel all lovely inside”
Huh? Another Emmett look alike. Hopefully Grace’s friend is wrong. Wait what is she on about?
"gigantic mutated dogs?" jacob whispered in self amusement. "can't they think of something more original?"
"she's the big fat bitch.” Rosalie whispered interrupting jacob “All I did is save him but it turns out his not told me everything.” She added and stalked out the front door with out not warning, too fast for any of us to stop her.
"stay in here Emmett it's dangerous. The rest come with me. Cally Kris what you do is up to you.” Edward seemed to be in a rush.
“Edward what the hell is happening asked as we ran out."
“Both planning to fight one another?” Esme guessed rushing even more.
“Yes” Edward said as we made our way out the porch.
We came face to face with two vampires both snarling, growling and circling one other and another shorter vampire who I assumed wanted to keep well out the way, that stood at the side of rosalie (think shes called tara?), and the vampire i asumed was Grace.
Jacob and his pack phased quickly as did Sams both heading towards the group for any hope in sopping the up coming fight.
“Who do you think you are running off with my husband-to-be?” one said losing her anger. Grace?
“well I’ve got news for you we’re already married” Rosalie hissed but then smiled brightly and added “so this conversations pretty damn useless.”
“Shame you’re not human though isn’t it?”
Rose just glared at her then stopped as Emmett came outside.
“Long time no see, Emmett” grace added waggling her perfect eyebrows.
“Back off Rose, cut that out Grace”
“No” they both said together then they resumed their circling. I knew and so did everyone else that it was only a matter off time. One would attack the other.
Rosalie and Grace came together at nearly the same time, both fighting for their lives...
reminder of part 9
“Cally will you tell me what happened to Alice?”
“As much as I know anyway. I was born on the 3rd of March 1900. I was told that you and my family died in a house fire.” Cally broke of and nodded in Alice’s direction. Alice’s face was a picture it was full of confusion and hatred. “I blame the wolves” she muttered, and then Cally carried on “anyway I was either 16 or 17 when a stranger came up and said “there is something you need to know” and then he bit me. After a while I woke up I saw a note that said: ‘your mother’s alive, and alone she doesn’t say anything about you hope this helps. Signed vampire. P.S your mothers a vampire like me and like you. Find the Cullen’s and you will find your mother.’
‘I nearly found you three times but every time you moved away and it taken century’s to find you “ Alice’s face was very white, really pale even for a vampire. “How could you forget me? Your own daughter?” she whispered shaking her head.
Esme came in with food for Jake. “She was kept in the dark” Esme said to Cally before turning to Alice. “Alice you know this don’t blame yourself. You can’t expect to remember anything about you life as a human. But let’s look at the future. Your daughter is here, we can be twice as happy now and ....”Esme trailed off because we all heard the same sound.
A stranger approaching the house trying to be very quiet...
“Damm” Edward muttered “keep very quiet” he added.
And then we all heard tapping at the window and a loud shouting for all of us to come outside....
~~~
part 10
“Don’t move” Edward whispered again.
“GET OUT NOW” shrieked a woman’s voice now not tapping but banging the window.
“Don’t move” Edward repeated.
“Why?” i asked, but he wasn’t listening to me.
“CULLENS are you stupid or something? “Get OUTSIDE and come into view. NOW.' the shouting stopped and hesitate for a moment. "Maybe they are out Grace?”
“They aren’t I hear two beating hearts and whispering Tara” another hissed.
“Oh crap, crap, crap. It’s Grace Harris” Emmett muttered in horror. He was just as pale as Alice was.
“Who’s grace Harris?” Rosalie asked glaring at Emmett the way she used to glare at me when I was human.
“My was-to-be wife when I was human. You know my ex-fiancée.”
“I thought she died?” Edward whispered astonished.
“How come I didn’t know Emmett? How could you keep me from this after all these years?” Rosalie looked so hurt, if she could cry she would but then she shifted her weight and glared at Emmett with such injure that Emmett forgot to whisper.
“I thought she was. I realised like five seconds ago, I’m guessing she turned into a vampire even after I tried to safe her...” Emmett was cut off –
“Tara Emmett’s in there” grace called interrupting Emmett’s explanation.
“What do you mean?” The other asked.
“I hear his voice”
“Ohh. so what are we going to do? god it stinks what is that?”
“Well I want to kill that bitch that ran off with him. He will be mine now so she can push off. and i think theres a gigantic mutated dogs surrounding us, does that explain the smell?”
“But Grace you don’t even know if it’s him. It might just be another look-a-like, and thanks now i feel all lovely inside”
Huh? Another Emmett look alike. Hopefully Grace’s friend is wrong. Wait what is she on about?
"gigantic mutated dogs?" jacob whispered in self amusement. "can't they think of something more original?"
"she's the big fat bitch.” Rosalie whispered interrupting jacob “All I did is save him but it turns out his not told me everything.” She added and stalked out the front door with out not warning, too fast for any of us to stop her.
"stay in here Emmett it's dangerous. The rest come with me. Cally Kris what you do is up to you.” Edward seemed to be in a rush.
“Edward what the hell is happening asked as we ran out."
“Both planning to fight one another?” Esme guessed rushing even more.
“Yes” Edward said as we made our way out the porch.
We came face to face with two vampires both snarling, growling and circling one other and another shorter vampire who I assumed wanted to keep well out the way, that stood at the side of rosalie (think shes called tara?), and the vampire i asumed was Grace.
Jacob and his pack phased quickly as did Sams both heading towards the group for any hope in sopping the up coming fight.
“Who do you think you are running off with my husband-to-be?” one said losing her anger. Grace?
“well I’ve got news for you we’re already married” Rosalie hissed but then smiled brightly and added “so this conversations pretty damn useless.”
“Shame you’re not human though isn’t it?”
Rose just glared at her then stopped as Emmett came outside.
“Long time no see, Emmett” grace added waggling her perfect eyebrows.
“Back off Rose, cut that out Grace”
“No” they both said together then they resumed their circling. I knew and so did everyone else that it was only a matter off time. One would attack the other.
Rosalie and Grace came together at nearly the same time, both fighting for their lives...
This story take place after Nessie is born. Zoey has been in the family since The begining of twilight. Although I don't cover anything from the books. Whatever happen to Bella it happen to Zoey accept getting pregant with a half vampire half human baby. Zoey is in love with Jacob Black but Jake is in love with Nessie. Alice and Jasper are practically her parents. She fill like the outsider because she is not a vampire, warewolf or like Nessie. The Volturi have dicided that she can be a human, until a day after she turns 17. She has her GED so she doesn't have to go to school.
Ok don't get me wrong I love the Cullens but take a look at what I would do if I was a Cullen
I would hot wire Edwards car and take it for a joy ride
I would go into my life story when ever I'm board
I would never sleep so I would jump all over
I use the saying "oh bite me" alot and I don't normaily get into fights but this is the Cullens we'r talking about
Sometimes I say my thoughts out-loud
I would think about Jakes body
I would be mad that I'm young and no guy would want to date a girl like me
I'd copy Edward
I'd piss off Edward
^^If I did I'd say Bella did it^^
I might crack up when he trys to hold his anger
I would jump off a big tree a yell "I belive I can fly"
And most of all I'm Crazy
So tell me if I should be a Cullen
I would hot wire Edwards car and take it for a joy ride
I would go into my life story when ever I'm board
I would never sleep so I would jump all over
I use the saying "oh bite me" alot and I don't normaily get into fights but this is the Cullens we'r talking about
Sometimes I say my thoughts out-loud
I would think about Jakes body
I would be mad that I'm young and no guy would want to date a girl like me
I'd copy Edward
I'd piss off Edward
^^If I did I'd say Bella did it^^
I might crack up when he trys to hold his anger
I would jump off a big tree a yell "I belive I can fly"
And most of all I'm Crazy
So tell me if I should be a Cullen
Hi my name is Amanda and I have helped a few people out on fanpop. I'm in a college English course and wanted to put up and ad for myself! Anyone looking for an editor for there fan fiction I'm the one. I do not changes stories I just add more descriptive elements like how stephanie Myers is so descriptive. You can email your story at CoolMandyz43@Aol.com and then I will send them back to you and you can post it or change somethings I did. I would love to write my own fan fiction but I'm not a great idea person but I can really edit stories to the point of perfection! So anyone who wants a helping POV get at me!
This is for people who have been reading Esme's Story:
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please comment and tell me which ones you like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If you can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a more interesting name so it draws more attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a list of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please comment and tell me which ones you like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If you can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a more interesting name so it draws more attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a list of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
Bella's Pov.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme said wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing you all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking you out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper said calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will show you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme said wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing you all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking you out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper said calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will show you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.
This was short for a reason. CLIFFHANGER!!! hehehehehe......
Bella's Pov
I never thought I would lose my family like that. I never would
have thought I put them in so much danger. Especially
my poor Renesmee!!! (sobs)
"WHY!!!!!!!!?????????" I shouted as loud as I could.
Then I started to think, what if I never see them again?
Do I have to marry Jasper to get my family out?
ARE THEY OKAY?!
Then I snapped myself out of that subject.
There are three possible ways of getting my family back to safety.
1: Marry Jasper
2: Get the spell out of Jasper
3: Find a way to find my family then snap my family out of the spell,
then get Jasper out of it and then, fight him if we have to.
I now know what to do.
Then, I went back to the dark black castle to fight Jasper and whoever
the man is...
Bella's Pov
I never thought I would lose my family like that. I never would
have thought I put them in so much danger. Especially
my poor Renesmee!!! (sobs)
"WHY!!!!!!!!?????????" I shouted as loud as I could.
Then I started to think, what if I never see them again?
Do I have to marry Jasper to get my family out?
ARE THEY OKAY?!
Then I snapped myself out of that subject.
There are three possible ways of getting my family back to safety.
1: Marry Jasper
2: Get the spell out of Jasper
3: Find a way to find my family then snap my family out of the spell,
then get Jasper out of it and then, fight him if we have to.
I now know what to do.
Then, I went back to the dark black castle to fight Jasper and whoever
the man is...
Renesmee Pov.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back next to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he said gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
__________________________________________________
I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back next to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he said gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
__________________________________________________
I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.