Tell me if you like it in Nathens POV or Addis POV better.
Nathen's POV
I was glad Addi was finally healing. I knew when she could surf she was fully healed. When she was surfing you knew that nothing was bothering her or she was just careless about everything. I don't mean it in a bad way or anything but she is so natural in the water, its like thats what she is ment to be around. I know Addi loved all of us but when she was surfing she fogot all about her troubles. She was amazing and I couldn't believe that I was getting married to her. A beautiful, loveable, sweet caring girl and she was all mine. It was 3 weeks till our wedding I couldn't wait. The way she looks at me just at any time just makes my heart melt and give into anything she wants me to do.
Addi's POV
I couldn't wait till I got married to Nathen. Soon I was going to be Mrs.Nathen Fanning, and I can't wait at all. I know I'm going to get so nervous once the day comes, and it was coming really really fast.
The Day of the wedding!
I help set up the reception area. The table had brown table clothes with white plates that had a blue ring in them that match the color of the flowers which were tulips that were in beautiful vases that had a blue ribbon( the kind of blue that makes brown and blue look great together) tide to it to make a bow. The bridemaid dresses were brown and had a blue ribbon around the waste and they also had tulips for the boquet. My dress however was white and had a blue ribbon around it brown ribbon around it. Rosalie and Alice and my little flower girl Renesme looked beautiful in there dresses, they made everything look so beautiful and they were beautiful themselves.Rosalie and Alice did my make-up and also kept me from seeing Nathen the whole entire day. Carlisle was going to walk me down the isle sinse I didn't have a father here with me and Emmet was doing the ceramony. Rosalie and him walked down the isle together and then parted their own ways and then Edward and Bella and then Alice and Jasper. Once they got down the isle Renesme went first dropping flowers on the ground she was so cute. It was then time for me to walk down the very long isle. There were people I had never met and then their were people I knew like; Max,Jacob, Seth and all of the others too.
I was so nervous walking into the room and then I became very calm and I knew Jasper was helping me with my emotions and I looked over at him a gave him a smile, then I refocused my attention to my precious Nathen. We said our vows and then we were married! Emmet introduced us as Mr. and Mrs.Nathen Fanning, which was amazing and then Nathen gave me kiss it was a special kiss. He had never kissed me before like that but I loved it so I kissed him back. We were on our way to the reception now. Everything was beautiful and everyone looked beautiful.
I love you. Nathen said to me as we were walking in the room to cut the cake.
Love you too. I said and gave him a kiss.
Alice came over and said come on we have to get pictures of you and Nathen cuting the cake.
Okay. I said.
We had a beautiful cake, I can't even descrbe it I wouldn't know how to anyways. We cut the cake and got pictures and then we stood at the door and greated evryone. Nathen knew most of them and intoruced me to a lot of them. Soon it was time for our first dance.
Will you have this dance with me Mrs.Fanning? Nathen ask me.
Why of course. I said to him.
Edward was playing a special song he wrote for us. We slow danced and I rested my head on his chest which was very warm. It was suprisingly cool out so Nathen un-button his jacket so I could wrap my arms around his waste. It was the most perfect moment ever, and everything was going great.
Nathen's POV
I was glad Addi was finally healing. I knew when she could surf she was fully healed. When she was surfing you knew that nothing was bothering her or she was just careless about everything. I don't mean it in a bad way or anything but she is so natural in the water, its like thats what she is ment to be around. I know Addi loved all of us but when she was surfing she fogot all about her troubles. She was amazing and I couldn't believe that I was getting married to her. A beautiful, loveable, sweet caring girl and she was all mine. It was 3 weeks till our wedding I couldn't wait. The way she looks at me just at any time just makes my heart melt and give into anything she wants me to do.
Addi's POV
I couldn't wait till I got married to Nathen. Soon I was going to be Mrs.Nathen Fanning, and I can't wait at all. I know I'm going to get so nervous once the day comes, and it was coming really really fast.
The Day of the wedding!
I help set up the reception area. The table had brown table clothes with white plates that had a blue ring in them that match the color of the flowers which were tulips that were in beautiful vases that had a blue ribbon( the kind of blue that makes brown and blue look great together) tide to it to make a bow. The bridemaid dresses were brown and had a blue ribbon around the waste and they also had tulips for the boquet. My dress however was white and had a blue ribbon around it brown ribbon around it. Rosalie and Alice and my little flower girl Renesme looked beautiful in there dresses, they made everything look so beautiful and they were beautiful themselves.Rosalie and Alice did my make-up and also kept me from seeing Nathen the whole entire day. Carlisle was going to walk me down the isle sinse I didn't have a father here with me and Emmet was doing the ceramony. Rosalie and him walked down the isle together and then parted their own ways and then Edward and Bella and then Alice and Jasper. Once they got down the isle Renesme went first dropping flowers on the ground she was so cute. It was then time for me to walk down the very long isle. There were people I had never met and then their were people I knew like; Max,Jacob, Seth and all of the others too.
I was so nervous walking into the room and then I became very calm and I knew Jasper was helping me with my emotions and I looked over at him a gave him a smile, then I refocused my attention to my precious Nathen. We said our vows and then we were married! Emmet introduced us as Mr. and Mrs.Nathen Fanning, which was amazing and then Nathen gave me kiss it was a special kiss. He had never kissed me before like that but I loved it so I kissed him back. We were on our way to the reception now. Everything was beautiful and everyone looked beautiful.
I love you. Nathen said to me as we were walking in the room to cut the cake.
Love you too. I said and gave him a kiss.
Alice came over and said come on we have to get pictures of you and Nathen cuting the cake.
Okay. I said.
We had a beautiful cake, I can't even descrbe it I wouldn't know how to anyways. We cut the cake and got pictures and then we stood at the door and greated evryone. Nathen knew most of them and intoruced me to a lot of them. Soon it was time for our first dance.
Will you have this dance with me Mrs.Fanning? Nathen ask me.
Why of course. I said to him.
Edward was playing a special song he wrote for us. We slow danced and I rested my head on his chest which was very warm. It was suprisingly cool out so Nathen un-button his jacket so I could wrap my arms around his waste. It was the most perfect moment ever, and everything was going great.
This is for people who have been reading Esme's Story:
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please comment and tell me which ones you like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If you can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a more interesting name so it draws more attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a list of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please comment and tell me which ones you like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If you can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a more interesting name so it draws more attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a list of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
Edward's Pov.
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? Or later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? Or later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Renesmee Pov.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back next to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he said gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
__________________________________________________
I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back next to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he said gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
__________________________________________________
I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
ALICE AND JASPER:
FOR THE FIRST TIME IN ALMOST A DECADE I FELT HOPE
JASPERS HEART FROZEN IN TIME BY A SINGLE BITE.
FLYING LIKE A HUMMING BIRDS WINGS (THIS LINE WAS SAID TO BELLA BY EDWARD -ECLIPSE-)
HOPE, HAPPINESS, KINDNESS, UNDERSTANDING, AND...LOVE
ALL AT ONCE COMING FROM SUCH A SMALL PERSON.
EMOTIONS HE BEARLY RECONIZED.
EMOTIONS HE WOULD NEVER LEAVE.
EMOTIONS THAT WOULD SOON BE HIS WHOLE LIFE.
EMOTINS THAT BELONGED TO ALICE HIS ONE AND ONLY REASON TO LIVE.
LOVE SO STRONG, THEY WOULD KILL. KILL ONCE, TWICE... UNTIL THEY GOT TO THERE OTHER HALF
ALICE ISNT JUST JASPERS LOVE
SHE IS HIS KEY, HIS KEY TO HAPPINESS
THERE SOULS ATACHED FOREVER
THERE SOULS INTERWINED TOGHETHER
THERE SOULS BELONG TO EACH OTHER
SOULMATES FOR THE REST OF INTERNITY
BROUGHT TO HAPPINESS TOGHETHER AND WHEN IT COMES TIME THEY WILL BE TAKEN OUT TOGHETHER
THANX FOR READING
WRITTEN BY RACHEL KETTLEWELL
TWILIGHT GIRL
FOR THE FIRST TIME IN ALMOST A DECADE I FELT HOPE
JASPERS HEART FROZEN IN TIME BY A SINGLE BITE.
FLYING LIKE A HUMMING BIRDS WINGS (THIS LINE WAS SAID TO BELLA BY EDWARD -ECLIPSE-)
HOPE, HAPPINESS, KINDNESS, UNDERSTANDING, AND...LOVE
ALL AT ONCE COMING FROM SUCH A SMALL PERSON.
EMOTIONS HE BEARLY RECONIZED.
EMOTIONS HE WOULD NEVER LEAVE.
EMOTIONS THAT WOULD SOON BE HIS WHOLE LIFE.
EMOTINS THAT BELONGED TO ALICE HIS ONE AND ONLY REASON TO LIVE.
LOVE SO STRONG, THEY WOULD KILL. KILL ONCE, TWICE... UNTIL THEY GOT TO THERE OTHER HALF
ALICE ISNT JUST JASPERS LOVE
SHE IS HIS KEY, HIS KEY TO HAPPINESS
THERE SOULS ATACHED FOREVER
THERE SOULS INTERWINED TOGHETHER
THERE SOULS BELONG TO EACH OTHER
SOULMATES FOR THE REST OF INTERNITY
BROUGHT TO HAPPINESS TOGHETHER AND WHEN IT COMES TIME THEY WILL BE TAKEN OUT TOGHETHER
THANX FOR READING
WRITTEN BY RACHEL KETTLEWELL
TWILIGHT GIRL
For those of you who don't know me, or have never read my fanfictions, I'm renesmeblack. I write a story from Renesmee, Jacob, Mine, and occasionally Emmett's POV. Now, I have a ton of bad ideas, and some of the things you read from me are crash tests. Thankfully, many of my readers enjoy my fanfictions. The dummy is saved!
My stories are for girls who can't stop reading the books. It's for girls who'd pester Stephenie Meyer to write a sequel, if they had a chance! I love Jacob, so that's another reason why girls read my, frankly, ameteur (hope I spelled that right!) writing. You wanna know the best part?
Okay, here goes nothing.
IT NEVER ENDS!!!
There. I feel better now. Yup, you read correctly. It'll never end until I grow out of the Twilight Stage (like that'll happen.).
For the very few fans I have, thanks for the support and I'll see you in the reading section!
-Thanks!
renesmeblack xoxo
My stories are for girls who can't stop reading the books. It's for girls who'd pester Stephenie Meyer to write a sequel, if they had a chance! I love Jacob, so that's another reason why girls read my, frankly, ameteur (hope I spelled that right!) writing. You wanna know the best part?
Okay, here goes nothing.
IT NEVER ENDS!!!
There. I feel better now. Yup, you read correctly. It'll never end until I grow out of the Twilight Stage (like that'll happen.).
For the very few fans I have, thanks for the support and I'll see you in the reading section!
-Thanks!
renesmeblack xoxo