sorry i havent writen again but i have been busy im going to dallas tomorrow!!!
I woke up screaming with sweat on my face. it was 11:45 am and my parents left a note:
Renesmee,
your mom and i went to hunt with everyoner one. we will go to your grandparent's house after. Have fun with Seth!
Love,
mom and dad
Well it was good they didnt hear me screaming. i dialed seth's phone number and waited After the 4th beep he answered.
"hello?"
" hey seth! Sorr yi called late i fell asleep."
"Nah its alright I just woke up. Ill pick you up in 15 minutes."
"ok bye"
I hung up the phone and put on my usual jeans and t shirt. i went to take a shower and i started humming again. But that was wierd because that only happens when im really happy like when jake asked me to be his grilfriend.
Seth got here with his sister." Omg hi leah!.I missed you so much. I ran to her and hugged her. " Nice to see you to nessie." seth said he
sounded moody but i know he was kidding around.
After that we started to go the me movies and we went bowling and i won. then we dropped off seth and leah and i went shopping.And i had a blast and i never thought about jacob.
when i went home i found another letter on the bed from my parents:
Renesmee,
your father alice, jasper, jacob, and i are going to alaska.be safe and dont get nto trouble.
love,
mom
Nice! the whole house to myself. then someone knocked on the door twice. So i unlocked to and seth came in and he kissed me on the lips. I felt butterflies again like i used to feel with jake.
Seth put one of his hands on my neck and one was inching down my back. i knotted my fingers in his hair. then our breathing started to hitch and sound excited. his hands started grasping at my waist.
then we finally stopped when Leah cleared her thoat in the doorway. " Sorry sis. Bye Renesmee." "Ill see you tomorrow ness" Leah said after seth. Leah gave me a high 5 and seth kissed me good night.
I woke up screaming with sweat on my face. it was 11:45 am and my parents left a note:
Renesmee,
your mom and i went to hunt with everyoner one. we will go to your grandparent's house after. Have fun with Seth!
Love,
mom and dad
Well it was good they didnt hear me screaming. i dialed seth's phone number and waited After the 4th beep he answered.
"hello?"
" hey seth! Sorr yi called late i fell asleep."
"Nah its alright I just woke up. Ill pick you up in 15 minutes."
"ok bye"
I hung up the phone and put on my usual jeans and t shirt. i went to take a shower and i started humming again. But that was wierd because that only happens when im really happy like when jake asked me to be his grilfriend.
Seth got here with his sister." Omg hi leah!.I missed you so much. I ran to her and hugged her. " Nice to see you to nessie." seth said he
sounded moody but i know he was kidding around.
After that we started to go the me movies and we went bowling and i won. then we dropped off seth and leah and i went shopping.And i had a blast and i never thought about jacob.
when i went home i found another letter on the bed from my parents:
Renesmee,
your father alice, jasper, jacob, and i are going to alaska.be safe and dont get nto trouble.
love,
mom
Nice! the whole house to myself. then someone knocked on the door twice. So i unlocked to and seth came in and he kissed me on the lips. I felt butterflies again like i used to feel with jake.
Seth put one of his hands on my neck and one was inching down my back. i knotted my fingers in his hair. then our breathing started to hitch and sound excited. his hands started grasping at my waist.
then we finally stopped when Leah cleared her thoat in the doorway. " Sorry sis. Bye Renesmee." "Ill see you tomorrow ness" Leah said after seth. Leah gave me a high 5 and seth kissed me good night.
Hi everyone, I'm back. I just thought I would leave a little note for everyone about my story.... so ok this wasn't my best work. though I'm glad that you read it, I gives me a feeling of appreciation thank you.
Any how as I was saying I felt that I was restricted with what would be acceptable for younger readers to read, due to the fact that there are alot of parents who wouldn't appreciate the content of the story, and the availability of it online so I had to tone it down somewhat. I do apologize to the more mature readers but.... I have written a adult version at this site link for those who really want the juicy stuff, The title of this story is: Breaking Dawn the Honeymoon (adult version).I'm trying to redeem myself so I hope you will enjoy it and please, please leave a comment, I would really like to hear your views. Thanks again. Hope you enjoy this,see ya.
Any how as I was saying I felt that I was restricted with what would be acceptable for younger readers to read, due to the fact that there are alot of parents who wouldn't appreciate the content of the story, and the availability of it online so I had to tone it down somewhat. I do apologize to the more mature readers but.... I have written a adult version at this site link for those who really want the juicy stuff, The title of this story is: Breaking Dawn the Honeymoon (adult version).I'm trying to redeem myself so I hope you will enjoy it and please, please leave a comment, I would really like to hear your views. Thanks again. Hope you enjoy this,see ya.
Hi!
I just wanted to say I'm SOOOOO sorry for not updating!
I didn't think anyone was really interested in my story.
Anyways...
If you were/are interested I have news.
If you are looking for a new story to read,
I have news.
I am rewriting my story a bit and posting it on fanfiction.
It's now called Rebel.
Go to this link to read chapter one:
link
Please read chapter one,
Even if you HAVE already read it.
It is different!
The whole thing is going to be much different with a few of the same basic story lines that I had in the beginning.
Thanks for reading! :)
I just wanted to say I'm SOOOOO sorry for not updating!
I didn't think anyone was really interested in my story.
Anyways...
If you were/are interested I have news.
If you are looking for a new story to read,
I have news.
I am rewriting my story a bit and posting it on fanfiction.
It's now called Rebel.
Go to this link to read chapter one:
link
Please read chapter one,
Even if you HAVE already read it.
It is different!
The whole thing is going to be much different with a few of the same basic story lines that I had in the beginning.
Thanks for reading! :)