"Yes thats me" Edward replied "well we were just wondering can we get some help" she said.While walking in. "what can i do for you-"
"My name is jessica and this is justin,Im half- vampire my father is Laurent."
Just then we all froze.Did she come avenge us or the pack?Did she want to take kill my daughter and justin will take out Jacob?
"Dont worry i just came to see if that carlisle would except us into his coven."
"of course we will except both of you." "Thank you so much oh bella may i see nessie and nessa?"
"how do you know our names" i asked "Well thats part of my talent it cames from my mother victoria and i know that edward killed my mom to save bella cause she was evil and so was my dad but whatever,all i have to do is look and focus on one event it will give all the history just like a dictionary kinda". I went to go get renesemee,jacob,seth,and vanesa.Nessa and Nessie came in hand-in-hand.
"hi nessa and nessie im jessica this is justin"justin waved "im like bothe of you im a half vampire to i-"
"Nahuel what are you doing here, tring to kill someones parents?"
"My name is jessica and this is justin,Im half- vampire my father is Laurent."
Just then we all froze.Did she come avenge us or the pack?Did she want to take kill my daughter and justin will take out Jacob?
"Dont worry i just came to see if that carlisle would except us into his coven."
"of course we will except both of you." "Thank you so much oh bella may i see nessie and nessa?"
"how do you know our names" i asked "Well thats part of my talent it cames from my mother victoria and i know that edward killed my mom to save bella cause she was evil and so was my dad but whatever,all i have to do is look and focus on one event it will give all the history just like a dictionary kinda". I went to go get renesemee,jacob,seth,and vanesa.Nessa and Nessie came in hand-in-hand.
"hi nessa and nessie im jessica this is justin"justin waved "im like bothe of you im a half vampire to i-"
"Nahuel what are you doing here, tring to kill someones parents?"
Hi everyone, I'm back. I just thought I would leave a little note for everyone about my story.... so ok this wasn't my best work. though I'm glad that you read it, I gives me a feeling of appreciation thank you.
Any how as I was saying I felt that I was restricted with what would be acceptable for younger readers to read, due to the fact that there are alot of parents who wouldn't appreciate the content of the story, and the availability of it online so I had to tone it down somewhat. I do apologize to the more mature readers but.... I have written a adult version at this site link for those who really want the juicy stuff, The title of this story is: Breaking Dawn the Honeymoon (adult version).I'm trying to redeem myself so I hope you will enjoy it and please, please leave a comment, I would really like to hear your views. Thanks again. Hope you enjoy this,see ya.
Any how as I was saying I felt that I was restricted with what would be acceptable for younger readers to read, due to the fact that there are alot of parents who wouldn't appreciate the content of the story, and the availability of it online so I had to tone it down somewhat. I do apologize to the more mature readers but.... I have written a adult version at this site link for those who really want the juicy stuff, The title of this story is: Breaking Dawn the Honeymoon (adult version).I'm trying to redeem myself so I hope you will enjoy it and please, please leave a comment, I would really like to hear your views. Thanks again. Hope you enjoy this,see ya.
Hi!
I just wanted to say I'm SOOOOO sorry for not updating!
I didn't think anyone was really interested in my story.
Anyways...
If you were/are interested I have news.
If you are looking for a new story to read,
I have news.
I am rewriting my story a bit and posting it on fanfiction.
It's now called Rebel.
Go to this link to read chapter one:
link
Please read chapter one,
Even if you HAVE already read it.
It is different!
The whole thing is going to be much different with a few of the same basic story lines that I had in the beginning.
Thanks for reading! :)
I just wanted to say I'm SOOOOO sorry for not updating!
I didn't think anyone was really interested in my story.
Anyways...
If you were/are interested I have news.
If you are looking for a new story to read,
I have news.
I am rewriting my story a bit and posting it on fanfiction.
It's now called Rebel.
Go to this link to read chapter one:
link
Please read chapter one,
Even if you HAVE already read it.
It is different!
The whole thing is going to be much different with a few of the same basic story lines that I had in the beginning.
Thanks for reading! :)