(heehee Ho NO)
I walked down the street well in the middle. I was going up into the woods to find a nice hole to die in. all i did to day was save this small pretty girl from gitting hit my a truck and all her husben did was yell at me saying it was stupied and i could have killed myslef. He cared about me more than his wife. shure she was walking rather fast, but still a nice thank you would have been nice. i finley came across the woods. without thinking i walking right into the woods.
After i was far into the woods where noone could find or see me, i reached into my pocket and pulled out a botle of pills. i opened them and put every single one in my mouth and swalled. I countuned to walk for a while. i was gitting weaker, but i keep going. Then i came across a HUGE house. all the lights were on and there was a big glass wall, and lots of people. Then i saw the boy and the girl from today. I snorted 'What a jerk' i thought, then one of their head swung to where i was and as soon as he did so did every one else.
i turned to run but i fell, everything was going so fast, but my hart, my hart was slow, but the people, they were running faster then light, they bent over my, the small girl turned me over.
"Her hart beat is faint, she'll have to be one of us to live." Said a HOT boy with bronzed hair
"NO! Shes to young let her die in peace!" yelled a beautiful blond girl 'No, I shouldn't have done this, I wanna live' the hot boy spoke again
"She wants to live." he said a new hot boy spoke
"She can't either way shes dead, leaving dead or dead dead." 'Leaving dead leaving dead pleas pleas,'
A flicker went thru his eyes.
"So be it." said a hanson man probley in his 30s, but then he bent over me and bet ibto my neck. i managed to scream but it didn't stop him. then he got up and wiped my blood from his mouth. I was shacking all over, my neck burned and it was now going up and down my neck, the bottem of my chen burned as did the beging of my chest. Then I blacked out.
I light came back to my eyes something was off, for 1. I was alive and 2. I felt like I was eating, an 3. I was on someones couch. I sat up rather slow. I felt my head, it didn't hert at all, and one would think it would "Hurry Nessie got out of hear." I heard someone say, it sounded like that blond from the other night, she walked up to me rather fast.
"You just HAD to think it! U JUST HAD TO BE UNDEAD.....NOW WE HAVE TO WAIT LONGER FOR NESSIE TO BE IN THE HOUSE!!!BELLA WAS FINE, BUT YOUR CRAZY!!"I looked at her, she was pretty, but she was a bitch
"Uh......Ouch....." I said as she walked up closer to me
"YOU JUST HAD TO BE A VAMPIRE?!?!" that shocked me
"I'm a WHAT?!?!" i yelled jumping up "NO?!?! I"M 14, I HAVE A MOM A DAD.....COPS WILL WANT TO FIND MY BODY....."I walked up close to her to wisper "I'm still a vergain." All she did is smile.
"Good, someone just like me!" she put her hand in front of me "I'm Roseailna" i took her hand hard but it didn't seam to bug her
"Kenzie." other vampiers walked into the room but that girl with the red hair didn't
"Thats Emmtt, Jasper, Alice, Mom, Dad, Edward, and Bella." i hardley raised my hand to say hi they all 'Said' something to me, i onley nodded to re-plai.
"Well, i'm gonna Take Eddies Car out for some fun." said Jasper.
"What kind of car dose he have?" i asked
"Valo." my eyes windened that was my dream car, i should so hot wire it and take it for a joy ride!!
"You will not your onley 14 and you can't hot wair my car!!" Edward grawled
"How the hell did youknow i was going to do that?"
I Asked, while Bella calmed down Edward, then she awncered my question
"He Can read minds, and you can't take it for a joy ride." she said. i sighed
"Fine...." I looked up to see a huge tree and the coolest thing crossed my mind
"This ones gonna be easy on not hurting Nessie, but Hard on blowing our sceart." said Edward as i ran to the tree and somehow flew up up.
I was almost at the top. i looked out at every thing i could see. then, I jumped off the tree so hard it was like i was flying! and i was really fast everything was a blur, i spreaded my arms out and yell and sang "I Belive I can Fly------y I Belive I Can Touch The Sky" but then something tackled me onto the ground. I looked up to see a smoking HOT guy ontop of me.
"Hello!" i said
"I'm Takin and get off our land!!" i jumped up and jumped back to that house
"YOU DUMBE ASS THAT WAS LA PUSH!!!!" yelled Edward.
"Sorry asshole. But I-" I stoped, i had just seen my refelction, I was Beautiful, my eyes looked awesome, my hair was a new kind of gloden brown my skin was so clear, i looked down at my body, i still had the jump suit on that i was going to kill myslef in, but other than that i was....wow.
"Come on," Said Alice "Lets go shooping!" she grabed my arm and took me shooping.
I walked down the street well in the middle. I was going up into the woods to find a nice hole to die in. all i did to day was save this small pretty girl from gitting hit my a truck and all her husben did was yell at me saying it was stupied and i could have killed myslef. He cared about me more than his wife. shure she was walking rather fast, but still a nice thank you would have been nice. i finley came across the woods. without thinking i walking right into the woods.
After i was far into the woods where noone could find or see me, i reached into my pocket and pulled out a botle of pills. i opened them and put every single one in my mouth and swalled. I countuned to walk for a while. i was gitting weaker, but i keep going. Then i came across a HUGE house. all the lights were on and there was a big glass wall, and lots of people. Then i saw the boy and the girl from today. I snorted 'What a jerk' i thought, then one of their head swung to where i was and as soon as he did so did every one else.
i turned to run but i fell, everything was going so fast, but my hart, my hart was slow, but the people, they were running faster then light, they bent over my, the small girl turned me over.
"Her hart beat is faint, she'll have to be one of us to live." Said a HOT boy with bronzed hair
"NO! Shes to young let her die in peace!" yelled a beautiful blond girl 'No, I shouldn't have done this, I wanna live' the hot boy spoke again
"She wants to live." he said a new hot boy spoke
"She can't either way shes dead, leaving dead or dead dead." 'Leaving dead leaving dead pleas pleas,'
A flicker went thru his eyes.
"So be it." said a hanson man probley in his 30s, but then he bent over me and bet ibto my neck. i managed to scream but it didn't stop him. then he got up and wiped my blood from his mouth. I was shacking all over, my neck burned and it was now going up and down my neck, the bottem of my chen burned as did the beging of my chest. Then I blacked out.
I light came back to my eyes something was off, for 1. I was alive and 2. I felt like I was eating, an 3. I was on someones couch. I sat up rather slow. I felt my head, it didn't hert at all, and one would think it would "Hurry Nessie got out of hear." I heard someone say, it sounded like that blond from the other night, she walked up to me rather fast.
"You just HAD to think it! U JUST HAD TO BE UNDEAD.....NOW WE HAVE TO WAIT LONGER FOR NESSIE TO BE IN THE HOUSE!!!BELLA WAS FINE, BUT YOUR CRAZY!!"I looked at her, she was pretty, but she was a bitch
"Uh......Ouch....." I said as she walked up closer to me
"YOU JUST HAD TO BE A VAMPIRE?!?!" that shocked me
"I'm a WHAT?!?!" i yelled jumping up "NO?!?! I"M 14, I HAVE A MOM A DAD.....COPS WILL WANT TO FIND MY BODY....."I walked up close to her to wisper "I'm still a vergain." All she did is smile.
"Good, someone just like me!" she put her hand in front of me "I'm Roseailna" i took her hand hard but it didn't seam to bug her
"Kenzie." other vampiers walked into the room but that girl with the red hair didn't
"Thats Emmtt, Jasper, Alice, Mom, Dad, Edward, and Bella." i hardley raised my hand to say hi they all 'Said' something to me, i onley nodded to re-plai.
"Well, i'm gonna Take Eddies Car out for some fun." said Jasper.
"What kind of car dose he have?" i asked
"Valo." my eyes windened that was my dream car, i should so hot wire it and take it for a joy ride!!
"You will not your onley 14 and you can't hot wair my car!!" Edward grawled
"How the hell did youknow i was going to do that?"
I Asked, while Bella calmed down Edward, then she awncered my question
"He Can read minds, and you can't take it for a joy ride." she said. i sighed
"Fine...." I looked up to see a huge tree and the coolest thing crossed my mind
"This ones gonna be easy on not hurting Nessie, but Hard on blowing our sceart." said Edward as i ran to the tree and somehow flew up up.
I was almost at the top. i looked out at every thing i could see. then, I jumped off the tree so hard it was like i was flying! and i was really fast everything was a blur, i spreaded my arms out and yell and sang "I Belive I can Fly------y I Belive I Can Touch The Sky" but then something tackled me onto the ground. I looked up to see a smoking HOT guy ontop of me.
"Hello!" i said
"I'm Takin and get off our land!!" i jumped up and jumped back to that house
"YOU DUMBE ASS THAT WAS LA PUSH!!!!" yelled Edward.
"Sorry asshole. But I-" I stoped, i had just seen my refelction, I was Beautiful, my eyes looked awesome, my hair was a new kind of gloden brown my skin was so clear, i looked down at my body, i still had the jump suit on that i was going to kill myslef in, but other than that i was....wow.
"Come on," Said Alice "Lets go shooping!" she grabed my arm and took me shooping.
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-Renesmee-
I terminate the call, and scream at the top of my lungs. It takes Carlisle and Rosalie thirty two seconds to reach me. The other Cullens are out hunting.
I find I can only speak in short bursts, so I focus only on Carlisle's voice, asking me what happened. I try to answer, but then, oh joy, more pain.
* * *
I've been in labour for the past eight hours now. Imagine, just for a moment, that Rosalie is capable of PMS. And that simultaneously, someone's hidden her hair products, her iPod, her BMW, and her laptop. I was currently in a mood that would make that look like a kitten having a tantrum.
I broke Jacob's wrist by accident.
I terminate the call, and scream at the top of my lungs. It takes Carlisle and Rosalie thirty two seconds to reach me. The other Cullens are out hunting.
I find I can only speak in short bursts, so I focus only on Carlisle's voice, asking me what happened. I try to answer, but then, oh joy, more pain.
* * *
I've been in labour for the past eight hours now. Imagine, just for a moment, that Rosalie is capable of PMS. And that simultaneously, someone's hidden her hair products, her iPod, her BMW, and her laptop. I was currently in a mood that would make that look like a kitten having a tantrum.
I broke Jacob's wrist by accident.
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Jasper's Pov
"What's wrong Alice?"
Alice looked as if she were faint or something.
"Nothing is of the matter, I mean...nothing is...well
nothing is wrong okay?"
I really can't trust her sometimes, so I went to Edward.
"Edward, what is Alice thinking?"
"Why would I want to help you?! You tortured me once already!"
"Please! Just tell me what she is thinking!"
"I don't think I should tell them or should I? If someone is controllong Esme, where is this person-"
"Someone is controlling ESME!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?" Edward shouted.
Then, everyone looked at Alice, Edward, and Esme's purple marking.
Jasper's Pov
"What's wrong Alice?"
Alice looked as if she were faint or something.
"Nothing is of the matter, I mean...nothing is...well
nothing is wrong okay?"
I really can't trust her sometimes, so I went to Edward.
"Edward, what is Alice thinking?"
"Why would I want to help you?! You tortured me once already!"
"Please! Just tell me what she is thinking!"
"I don't think I should tell them or should I? If someone is controllong Esme, where is this person-"
"Someone is controlling ESME!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?" Edward shouted.
Then, everyone looked at Alice, Edward, and Esme's purple marking.
Bella's Pov.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme said wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing you all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking you out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper said calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will show you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme said wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing you all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking you out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper said calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will show you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.
This was short for a reason. CLIFFHANGER!!! hehehehehe......
Bella's Pov
I never thought I would lose my family like that. I never would
have thought I put them in so much danger. Especially
my poor Renesmee!!! (sobs)
"WHY!!!!!!!!?????????" I shouted as loud as I could.
Then I started to think, what if I never see them again?
Do I have to marry Jasper to get my family out?
ARE THEY OKAY?!
Then I snapped myself out of that subject.
There are three possible ways of getting my family back to safety.
1: Marry Jasper
2: Get the spell out of Jasper
3: Find a way to find my family then snap my family out of the spell,
then get Jasper out of it and then, fight him if we have to.
I now know what to do.
Then, I went back to the dark black castle to fight Jasper and whoever
the man is...
Bella's Pov
I never thought I would lose my family like that. I never would
have thought I put them in so much danger. Especially
my poor Renesmee!!! (sobs)
"WHY!!!!!!!!?????????" I shouted as loud as I could.
Then I started to think, what if I never see them again?
Do I have to marry Jasper to get my family out?
ARE THEY OKAY?!
Then I snapped myself out of that subject.
There are three possible ways of getting my family back to safety.
1: Marry Jasper
2: Get the spell out of Jasper
3: Find a way to find my family then snap my family out of the spell,
then get Jasper out of it and then, fight him if we have to.
I now know what to do.
Then, I went back to the dark black castle to fight Jasper and whoever
the man is...
Its short sorry. its supposed to be a cliff hanger. the next one is a lot longer.
I promise.
Bella's Pov.
We all looked at each other. That scream was SO familiar. Where's Alice?
Alice?
"Alice? Alice where are you?!" I shouted.
Then there was another yell coming from the middle door.
Then we realized. Alice went ahead of us and went towards the middle
section. We all ran as fast as we could. Edward smashed the door
and there they were. Alice, The mysterious man, and Jasper, with
mysterious purple eyes.
"Surprised to see me?" the man and Jasper said at once.
I promise.
Bella's Pov.
We all looked at each other. That scream was SO familiar. Where's Alice?
Alice?
"Alice? Alice where are you?!" I shouted.
Then there was another yell coming from the middle door.
Then we realized. Alice went ahead of us and went towards the middle
section. We all ran as fast as we could. Edward smashed the door
and there they were. Alice, The mysterious man, and Jasper, with
mysterious purple eyes.
"Surprised to see me?" the man and Jasper said at once.