hey people. heres the long awaited part 6. i finally got it done! i really hope it makes sense because i had to add quite abit of extra detail to make this part make sense and to keep the interest. thank you all for reading it. i hope you like it :)
part 5
We made it to forks hospital quickly, for human eyes maybe but the car wouldn’t go fast enough for me.
I walked to the reception and asked to see Charlie, but they wanted to know the relationship between us. It took another half an hour till I could persuade the nurse to let me see him. I took a seep breath before I walked into the room. Right Bella you can do this. I told my self. I took another deep breath but hesitated, Edward squeezed my hand and gestured for me to go first and then I walked in.
Part 6
I saw him sitting by the window gazing out at the trees that were surrounding the garden. When i walked in he stared at me and Edward in wonder. I hesitated and took a step towards him.
“Who are you?” Charlie asked staring at me.
“Im your daughter, Bella. You adopted me 16 years ago.” I said trying to sound calm.
He didn’t speak for a while but then Charlie asked “how old are you?”
“Seventeen.”
“When’s your birthday?”
“The 13th of September.”
Charlie spent the rest of the day asking
questions until late in the afternoon when he fell asleep snoring slightly.
I left him a note saying.
Dad:
I miss you. I hope you remember everything i told you. Please try as much as you can because I feel like I’m going crazy. You’re the only thing that makes me feel better. I love you lots and I’ll come and visit you as much as i can.
Lots of love Bells.
When Edward and I walked out the hospital, it was beginning to get dark. We made our way home and stopped outside the white house. Sam and a few others in the pack were sitting on the porch. We discussed what happened with Charlie and then we went into the house for a long discussion that lasted for hours. Most of it was discussing what we should do about Reneesmee. We also discussed Victoria, Laurent and James relatives and whether the Volturi should know about them.
We eventually agreed that the wolves were going to the Amazon, Carlisle, Esme, Rose and Emmett will be going to Italy to see if they knew anything. Alice, jasper, Edward and I were going to stay at the house, in case Reneesmee called or came home.
Over the next few days everything was awkward. Alice started to remember something from her past. Something to do with a daughter of someone she once knew. Jasper rang Carlisle because Alice was almost giving up hunting; she became really weak and snappy. Trouble was she was concentrating too much on finding out who exactly this girl was that belonged to her forgotten and dejected past, but nothing came up again, it was just flickers of her past that made no common sense.
I visited Charlie, of course, a few times. He seemed just as forgetful before, but he was getting better, his coming back to his house in four weeks time, Sue will be appointed his carer, as she is his wife.
I was on my way home, it was early evening and of course because it is forks after all, it was raining. Edward was driving fast as i wanted to get home to see if Alice had found out anything more about the visions she’s seeing. As we were getting out the car Edward muttered.
“I was wondering...” Edward thought, hesitantly as he turned into the drive.
“What?” I replied reaching to hold on to his long fingers and looking into his melting golden brown gorgeous eyes. But Edwards’s phone buzzed in my pocket with an unknown number showing so I thought about ignoring it but then i thought about it and decided to answer, looking at Edward still.
“Hello?” I asked.
“Mom? Where’s Alice? I knew I dialled the wrong number.” Reneesmee said when I froze.
“Reneesmee, oh god where are you?” I asked as Edward looked at my face with shock, my face mirroring his. “She’s inside.” I added quickly dragging Edward inside towards Alice.
“I’m fine, call her over...”
“Why?” I answered.
“Because her daughter wants to talk to her and we don’t have a lot of time.”
part 5
We made it to forks hospital quickly, for human eyes maybe but the car wouldn’t go fast enough for me.
I walked to the reception and asked to see Charlie, but they wanted to know the relationship between us. It took another half an hour till I could persuade the nurse to let me see him. I took a seep breath before I walked into the room. Right Bella you can do this. I told my self. I took another deep breath but hesitated, Edward squeezed my hand and gestured for me to go first and then I walked in.
Part 6
I saw him sitting by the window gazing out at the trees that were surrounding the garden. When i walked in he stared at me and Edward in wonder. I hesitated and took a step towards him.
“Who are you?” Charlie asked staring at me.
“Im your daughter, Bella. You adopted me 16 years ago.” I said trying to sound calm.
He didn’t speak for a while but then Charlie asked “how old are you?”
“Seventeen.”
“When’s your birthday?”
“The 13th of September.”
Charlie spent the rest of the day asking
questions until late in the afternoon when he fell asleep snoring slightly.
I left him a note saying.
Dad:
I miss you. I hope you remember everything i told you. Please try as much as you can because I feel like I’m going crazy. You’re the only thing that makes me feel better. I love you lots and I’ll come and visit you as much as i can.
Lots of love Bells.
When Edward and I walked out the hospital, it was beginning to get dark. We made our way home and stopped outside the white house. Sam and a few others in the pack were sitting on the porch. We discussed what happened with Charlie and then we went into the house for a long discussion that lasted for hours. Most of it was discussing what we should do about Reneesmee. We also discussed Victoria, Laurent and James relatives and whether the Volturi should know about them.
We eventually agreed that the wolves were going to the Amazon, Carlisle, Esme, Rose and Emmett will be going to Italy to see if they knew anything. Alice, jasper, Edward and I were going to stay at the house, in case Reneesmee called or came home.
Over the next few days everything was awkward. Alice started to remember something from her past. Something to do with a daughter of someone she once knew. Jasper rang Carlisle because Alice was almost giving up hunting; she became really weak and snappy. Trouble was she was concentrating too much on finding out who exactly this girl was that belonged to her forgotten and dejected past, but nothing came up again, it was just flickers of her past that made no common sense.
I visited Charlie, of course, a few times. He seemed just as forgetful before, but he was getting better, his coming back to his house in four weeks time, Sue will be appointed his carer, as she is his wife.
I was on my way home, it was early evening and of course because it is forks after all, it was raining. Edward was driving fast as i wanted to get home to see if Alice had found out anything more about the visions she’s seeing. As we were getting out the car Edward muttered.
“I was wondering...” Edward thought, hesitantly as he turned into the drive.
“What?” I replied reaching to hold on to his long fingers and looking into his melting golden brown gorgeous eyes. But Edwards’s phone buzzed in my pocket with an unknown number showing so I thought about ignoring it but then i thought about it and decided to answer, looking at Edward still.
“Hello?” I asked.
“Mom? Where’s Alice? I knew I dialled the wrong number.” Reneesmee said when I froze.
“Reneesmee, oh god where are you?” I asked as Edward looked at my face with shock, my face mirroring his. “She’s inside.” I added quickly dragging Edward inside towards Alice.
“I’m fine, call her over...”
“Why?” I answered.
“Because her daughter wants to talk to her and we don’t have a lot of time.”
10. Sing “Discovery Channel” by the Bloodhound Gang in your head whenever he is near.
9. Hotwire his Volvo and take it on a joyride.
8. Tell him the relationship he is having with Bella is practically paedophilia and he could be sent to jail for it.
7. Ask how Tanya is.
6. End every argument with “Bite me, Edward.”
5. Call him Romeo both behind his back and to his face.
4. Whenever he complains or argues, reply with “What are you gonna do Edward? Go to Italy?”
3. Tell him his hair isn’t bronze, it’s ginger, and he should stop denying himself – he’s a ranga.
2. Whenever he leaves a room or says goodbye, get down on your knees and beg him not to go, not again.
And the Number One way to annoy Edward Cullen?
1. Take his silver cell phone and change the ringtone to “Like a Virgin” by Madonna.
Source: link
9. Hotwire his Volvo and take it on a joyride.
8. Tell him the relationship he is having with Bella is practically paedophilia and he could be sent to jail for it.
7. Ask how Tanya is.
6. End every argument with “Bite me, Edward.”
5. Call him Romeo both behind his back and to his face.
4. Whenever he complains or argues, reply with “What are you gonna do Edward? Go to Italy?”
3. Tell him his hair isn’t bronze, it’s ginger, and he should stop denying himself – he’s a ranga.
2. Whenever he leaves a room or says goodbye, get down on your knees and beg him not to go, not again.
And the Number One way to annoy Edward Cullen?
1. Take his silver cell phone and change the ringtone to “Like a Virgin” by Madonna.
Source: link
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im going to put an introduction to this one up today. it has to do with twilight and a band called Paramore(my two fav things-paramore and twilight)most of my friends like my writing but when i do post i would like some criticizing comments for me to improve with.
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