ok so i have it up quicker, i hope that makes everyone happy. this is dedicated to littlemiss_ME for commenting first. same again for this one. plz plz plz plz plz review.....it makes me very, happy. i dont know if i've been putting disclaimers on here but i always froget, i dont own Twilight, i only own Keith. and this one is quite long. thanks for reading!!
Chapter 9 Finding Treasure (Edward’s P.O.V.)
I ran up the trail as fast as I could, leaving Emmett and Jasper in my dust. It spread out about 25 miles up and then just all went separate ways as if she was torn into a bunch of pieces and carried off different ways. That was horrible it cant happen, god no please no.
Emmett and Jasper came a few minutes later.
“That’s really weird, its like he couldn’t decide where to take her, and kept coming back to this spot and choosing a different trail.” Jasper said.
I breathed out a sigh of relief, good, I didn’t think of that, please let it be that.
“Call Carlisle, tell then to come and help, I can sort of feel her presence somehow.” I said and ran off towards the greatest scented trail, and where her presence was coming from.
After about 2 minutes, it was like he was standing right next to me, I just knew she was close.
I looked in all directions, trying to find something, anything. I found a very, very camouflaged house. That could only be done by a vampire, Keith.
I growled and ran as fast as I could again to the little house and slammed the door open, so hard it made a tremendous slam into the wall behind it. Good thing the door was steal, or else it would have broken.
The first thing I saw was a large couch with Bella sitting on it, with Keith leaning over her for the kill.
I ran and pulled him off, but I was too late, he bit her. He also had a steal grip on her legs and when I pulled him off, she was thrown into a concrete wall. The wall broke into a million tiny pieces. It, I knew, broke a ton of her bones too.
I started to rip Keith apart when she finally screamed a pain filled scream that hurt my vampire ears.
I dropped everything I was doing and ran over to her, touching her skin with my cold fingers, not knowing what to do.
I heard the door open, hoping it was Carlisle, but when I looked there was nobody here, not even Keith. While I was with Bella, Keith was putting himself back together, and he got away.
I didn’t really care, Bella was my first priority, I would find him later after Bella is better.
Carlisle came in a few minutes later, with everyone else. Carlisle came over here and started to treat Bella.
Bella was still screaming, but I could make out words as she was yelling, “Venom, Ankle!”
I gasped as I realized he still bit her.
“Edward, again it’s up to you, just like James.” Carlisle said.
I growled at James’ name, “I’m not letting it happen.” I said as I took hold of her ankle.
“Emmett, Jasper, hold her down.” I said.
“Carlisle where can we?” Jasper asked.
Carlisle pointed at two spots, they both grabbed them and held her down tightly, not enough to break those though.
I took a deep breath and swallowed all the venom in my mouth and started sucking it out. I completely forgot how potent her blood was, and I couldn’t stop. I felt Emmett trying to pull me off. I pulled off and ran out the door, ashamed of myself.
Esme came outside to try to comfort me. She was rubbing my back and saying, “It’s not your fault, all of us would have done that.”
I sighed and said, “I guess.”
Carlisle called out to me, “Edward, come out and carry her home.”
I sighed again and slowly walked back inside, I hung my head to show my embarrassment.
I picked her up, gently, at the same places Emmett and Jasper did to hold her down.
I ran home and took her up to Carlisle x-ray machine, knowing he will do that.
It took about 6 hours to have all the x-rays and casting done. I sat next to her on the bad and just sat thinking about when she will wake up. I couldn’t wait very long.
Chapter 9 Finding Treasure (Edward’s P.O.V.)
I ran up the trail as fast as I could, leaving Emmett and Jasper in my dust. It spread out about 25 miles up and then just all went separate ways as if she was torn into a bunch of pieces and carried off different ways. That was horrible it cant happen, god no please no.
Emmett and Jasper came a few minutes later.
“That’s really weird, its like he couldn’t decide where to take her, and kept coming back to this spot and choosing a different trail.” Jasper said.
I breathed out a sigh of relief, good, I didn’t think of that, please let it be that.
“Call Carlisle, tell then to come and help, I can sort of feel her presence somehow.” I said and ran off towards the greatest scented trail, and where her presence was coming from.
After about 2 minutes, it was like he was standing right next to me, I just knew she was close.
I looked in all directions, trying to find something, anything. I found a very, very camouflaged house. That could only be done by a vampire, Keith.
I growled and ran as fast as I could again to the little house and slammed the door open, so hard it made a tremendous slam into the wall behind it. Good thing the door was steal, or else it would have broken.
The first thing I saw was a large couch with Bella sitting on it, with Keith leaning over her for the kill.
I ran and pulled him off, but I was too late, he bit her. He also had a steal grip on her legs and when I pulled him off, she was thrown into a concrete wall. The wall broke into a million tiny pieces. It, I knew, broke a ton of her bones too.
I started to rip Keith apart when she finally screamed a pain filled scream that hurt my vampire ears.
I dropped everything I was doing and ran over to her, touching her skin with my cold fingers, not knowing what to do.
I heard the door open, hoping it was Carlisle, but when I looked there was nobody here, not even Keith. While I was with Bella, Keith was putting himself back together, and he got away.
I didn’t really care, Bella was my first priority, I would find him later after Bella is better.
Carlisle came in a few minutes later, with everyone else. Carlisle came over here and started to treat Bella.
Bella was still screaming, but I could make out words as she was yelling, “Venom, Ankle!”
I gasped as I realized he still bit her.
“Edward, again it’s up to you, just like James.” Carlisle said.
I growled at James’ name, “I’m not letting it happen.” I said as I took hold of her ankle.
“Emmett, Jasper, hold her down.” I said.
“Carlisle where can we?” Jasper asked.
Carlisle pointed at two spots, they both grabbed them and held her down tightly, not enough to break those though.
I took a deep breath and swallowed all the venom in my mouth and started sucking it out. I completely forgot how potent her blood was, and I couldn’t stop. I felt Emmett trying to pull me off. I pulled off and ran out the door, ashamed of myself.
Esme came outside to try to comfort me. She was rubbing my back and saying, “It’s not your fault, all of us would have done that.”
I sighed and said, “I guess.”
Carlisle called out to me, “Edward, come out and carry her home.”
I sighed again and slowly walked back inside, I hung my head to show my embarrassment.
I picked her up, gently, at the same places Emmett and Jasper did to hold her down.
I ran home and took her up to Carlisle x-ray machine, knowing he will do that.
It took about 6 hours to have all the x-rays and casting done. I sat next to her on the bad and just sat thinking about when she will wake up. I couldn’t wait very long.
This is for people who have been reading Esme's Story:
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please comment and tell me which ones you like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If you can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a more interesting name so it draws more attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a list of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please comment and tell me which ones you like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If you can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a more interesting name so it draws more attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a list of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
Edward's Pov.
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? Or later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? Or later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Renesmee Pov.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back next to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he said gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
__________________________________________________
I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back next to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he said gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
__________________________________________________
I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
ALICE AND JASPER:
FOR THE FIRST TIME IN ALMOST A DECADE I FELT HOPE
JASPERS HEART FROZEN IN TIME BY A SINGLE BITE.
FLYING LIKE A HUMMING BIRDS WINGS (THIS LINE WAS SAID TO BELLA BY EDWARD -ECLIPSE-)
HOPE, HAPPINESS, KINDNESS, UNDERSTANDING, AND...LOVE
ALL AT ONCE COMING FROM SUCH A SMALL PERSON.
EMOTIONS HE BEARLY RECONIZED.
EMOTIONS HE WOULD NEVER LEAVE.
EMOTIONS THAT WOULD SOON BE HIS WHOLE LIFE.
EMOTINS THAT BELONGED TO ALICE HIS ONE AND ONLY REASON TO LIVE.
LOVE SO STRONG, THEY WOULD KILL. KILL ONCE, TWICE... UNTIL THEY GOT TO THERE OTHER HALF
ALICE ISNT JUST JASPERS LOVE
SHE IS HIS KEY, HIS KEY TO HAPPINESS
THERE SOULS ATACHED FOREVER
THERE SOULS INTERWINED TOGHETHER
THERE SOULS BELONG TO EACH OTHER
SOULMATES FOR THE REST OF INTERNITY
BROUGHT TO HAPPINESS TOGHETHER AND WHEN IT COMES TIME THEY WILL BE TAKEN OUT TOGHETHER
THANX FOR READING
WRITTEN BY RACHEL KETTLEWELL
TWILIGHT GIRL
FOR THE FIRST TIME IN ALMOST A DECADE I FELT HOPE
JASPERS HEART FROZEN IN TIME BY A SINGLE BITE.
FLYING LIKE A HUMMING BIRDS WINGS (THIS LINE WAS SAID TO BELLA BY EDWARD -ECLIPSE-)
HOPE, HAPPINESS, KINDNESS, UNDERSTANDING, AND...LOVE
ALL AT ONCE COMING FROM SUCH A SMALL PERSON.
EMOTIONS HE BEARLY RECONIZED.
EMOTIONS HE WOULD NEVER LEAVE.
EMOTIONS THAT WOULD SOON BE HIS WHOLE LIFE.
EMOTINS THAT BELONGED TO ALICE HIS ONE AND ONLY REASON TO LIVE.
LOVE SO STRONG, THEY WOULD KILL. KILL ONCE, TWICE... UNTIL THEY GOT TO THERE OTHER HALF
ALICE ISNT JUST JASPERS LOVE
SHE IS HIS KEY, HIS KEY TO HAPPINESS
THERE SOULS ATACHED FOREVER
THERE SOULS INTERWINED TOGHETHER
THERE SOULS BELONG TO EACH OTHER
SOULMATES FOR THE REST OF INTERNITY
BROUGHT TO HAPPINESS TOGHETHER AND WHEN IT COMES TIME THEY WILL BE TAKEN OUT TOGHETHER
THANX FOR READING
WRITTEN BY RACHEL KETTLEWELL
TWILIGHT GIRL