“Jacob, what’s wrong?” A little, pixie-like girl with wispy, short hair came running up towards us and asked the second tan boy, Jacob, in a worried tone.
Jacob looked like he had just watched his best friend die in front of him. Seth continued to stare at me, and I had absolutely no idea what was going on.
“Seth imprinted.”
The pixie-like girl looked mortified. “What?”
Jacob growled, “Seth imprinted, Alice. Seth imprinted on this thing.
Rosalie walked in the room with everyone else following. “She’s not a thing!” Rose screamed, angrily. “She’s Charlotte; she’s just like the rest of us.”
“You’re all things too.”
Rosalie looked furious, and Edward started laughing. “Rose, cool it, we don’t need another Bella situation,” he said, gently elbowing Bella in the side. She growled.
Finally, Seth snapped back into reality. “I’m Seth.”
Everyone began laughing, and if it was possible, my cheeks would be flushing. Luckily for me, he was blushing enough for both of us.
“You’re a little late, Seth,” Jacob said, no longer laughing. “How could you imprint on a newborn? She can’t even stand being around you without wanting to sink her teeth into your neck. She almost killed you back there.”
“Excuse me?” I piped up. My voice cracked as I tried to be loud.
Jacob looked at me, “What, bloodsucker?”
Before I could even open my mouth, a 14-year-old girl walked out of the room. She was the most beautiful girl I had ever seen, with auburn hair like Edward and eyes like deep milk chocolate “Jake, don’t call them that. You know I don’t like it.” Jacob immediately shut up.
“Sorry, Ness, but Seth imprinted on the new girl Rosalie stupidly brought into our lives.”
The girl, who I assumed was the daughter of Bella and Edward, Renesmee, smiled at me. Everyone was on edge as she began walking towards me, and Bella even called out for her to come back over to Edward. She kept walking towards me, and smiled.
“I’m Renesmee. What’s your name?” She asked, and as I got an even better look at her, she was even more beautiful than I thought. I suddenly felt a stab of jealousy, but was overcome by the smell of her blood. I tried to hold myself back, and concentrated on her outfit to distract myself. I choked to get my words out, “I’m Charlotte.”
“That’s an interesting name,” Renesmee said, “Can I call you Charry?”
I smiled, finally being able to ignore my thirst. “You can call me whatever you want.”
She giggled. “Seth has a crush on you!”
Everyone began to laugh again. But suddenly, the overpowering sting of thirst got to me. I couldn’t hurt this girl, and I knew that.
“Rose, take me outside, please. I need to get away.”
Renesmee didn’t look frightened, although her parents and Jacob looked like they were about to die. Jacob picked her up and walked away as Rosalie and Emmett dragged me out to the woods.
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Jacob looked like he had just watched his best friend die in front of him. Seth continued to stare at me, and I had absolutely no idea what was going on.
“Seth imprinted.”
The pixie-like girl looked mortified. “What?”
Jacob growled, “Seth imprinted, Alice. Seth imprinted on this thing.
Rosalie walked in the room with everyone else following. “She’s not a thing!” Rose screamed, angrily. “She’s Charlotte; she’s just like the rest of us.”
“You’re all things too.”
Rosalie looked furious, and Edward started laughing. “Rose, cool it, we don’t need another Bella situation,” he said, gently elbowing Bella in the side. She growled.
Finally, Seth snapped back into reality. “I’m Seth.”
Everyone began laughing, and if it was possible, my cheeks would be flushing. Luckily for me, he was blushing enough for both of us.
“You’re a little late, Seth,” Jacob said, no longer laughing. “How could you imprint on a newborn? She can’t even stand being around you without wanting to sink her teeth into your neck. She almost killed you back there.”
“Excuse me?” I piped up. My voice cracked as I tried to be loud.
Jacob looked at me, “What, bloodsucker?”
Before I could even open my mouth, a 14-year-old girl walked out of the room. She was the most beautiful girl I had ever seen, with auburn hair like Edward and eyes like deep milk chocolate “Jake, don’t call them that. You know I don’t like it.” Jacob immediately shut up.
“Sorry, Ness, but Seth imprinted on the new girl Rosalie stupidly brought into our lives.”
The girl, who I assumed was the daughter of Bella and Edward, Renesmee, smiled at me. Everyone was on edge as she began walking towards me, and Bella even called out for her to come back over to Edward. She kept walking towards me, and smiled.
“I’m Renesmee. What’s your name?” She asked, and as I got an even better look at her, she was even more beautiful than I thought. I suddenly felt a stab of jealousy, but was overcome by the smell of her blood. I tried to hold myself back, and concentrated on her outfit to distract myself. I choked to get my words out, “I’m Charlotte.”
“That’s an interesting name,” Renesmee said, “Can I call you Charry?”
I smiled, finally being able to ignore my thirst. “You can call me whatever you want.”
She giggled. “Seth has a crush on you!”
Everyone began to laugh again. But suddenly, the overpowering sting of thirst got to me. I couldn’t hurt this girl, and I knew that.
“Rose, take me outside, please. I need to get away.”
Renesmee didn’t look frightened, although her parents and Jacob looked like they were about to die. Jacob picked her up and walked away as Rosalie and Emmett dragged me out to the woods.
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Ah, ah, ah ,ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
I seek you out
Flay you alive
One more word and you won’t survive
And I’m not scared of your stolen power
See right through you any hour
I won’t soothe your pain
I won’t ease your strain
You’ll be waiting in vain
I got nothing for you to gain
I’m taking it slow
Feeding my flame
Shuffling the cards of your game
And just in time
In the right place
Suddenly I will play my ace
I won’t soothe your pain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
I won’t ease your strain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
You’ll be waiting in vain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
I got nothing for you to gain
Eyes on fire
Your spine is ablaze
Felling any foe with my gaze
And just in time
In the right place
Steadily emerging with grace
Aaaaahhhhh
Felling any foe with my gaze
Aaaaahhhhh
Steadily emerging with grace
Aaaaahhhhh
Felling any foe with my gaze
Aaaaahhhhh
Steadily emerging with grace
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah
I seek you out
Flay you alive
One more word and you won’t survive
And I’m not scared of your stolen power
See right through you any hour
I won’t soothe your pain
I won’t ease your strain
You’ll be waiting in vain
I got nothing for you to gain
I’m taking it slow
Feeding my flame
Shuffling the cards of your game
And just in time
In the right place
Suddenly I will play my ace
I won’t soothe your pain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
I won’t ease your strain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
You’ll be waiting in vain
(Ah, ah, ah, ah, ah)
I got nothing for you to gain
Eyes on fire
Your spine is ablaze
Felling any foe with my gaze
And just in time
In the right place
Steadily emerging with grace
Aaaaahhhhh
Felling any foe with my gaze
Aaaaahhhhh
Steadily emerging with grace
Aaaaahhhhh
Felling any foe with my gaze
Aaaaahhhhh
Steadily emerging with grace
The hour has begun
Your eyes have now opened
To a world where madness craves
To a world where hope’s enslaved
Oh I tremble for my love always
Your window’s opened wide
Your innocence takes flight
To a world where madness craves
To a world where hope’s enslaved
Oh I tremble for my love always
It’s a world where madness craves
It’s a world where hope’s enslaved
Oh I tremble for my love always
It’s a world where madness craves
It’s a world where hope’s enslaved
Yeah I tremble for you love always
Your eyes have now opened
To a world where madness craves
To a world where hope’s enslaved
Oh I tremble for my love always
Your window’s opened wide
Your innocence takes flight
To a world where madness craves
To a world where hope’s enslaved
Oh I tremble for my love always
It’s a world where madness craves
It’s a world where hope’s enslaved
Oh I tremble for my love always
It’s a world where madness craves
It’s a world where hope’s enslaved
Yeah I tremble for you love always
When the thorn bush turns white that’s when I’ll come home
I am going out to see what I can sow
And I don’t know where I’ll go
And I don’t know what I’ll see
But I’ll try not to bring it back home with me
Like the morning sun your eyes will follow me
As you watch me wander, curse the powers that be
‘Cause all I want is here and now
But it’s already been and gone
Our intentions always last that bit too long
Far, far away, no voices sounding
No one around me and you’re still there
Far, far away, no choices passing
No time confounds me and you’re still there
In the full moon’s light I listen to the stream
And in between the silence hear you calling me
But I don’t know where I am
And I don’t trust who I’ve been
But if I come home how will I ever leave
I am going out to see what I can sow
And I don’t know where I’ll go
And I don’t know what I’ll see
But I’ll try not to bring it back home with me
Like the morning sun your eyes will follow me
As you watch me wander, curse the powers that be
‘Cause all I want is here and now
But it’s already been and gone
Our intentions always last that bit too long
Far, far away, no voices sounding
No one around me and you’re still there
Far, far away, no choices passing
No time confounds me and you’re still there
In the full moon’s light I listen to the stream
And in between the silence hear you calling me
But I don’t know where I am
And I don’t trust who I’ve been
But if I come home how will I ever leave
They've nominated the flick for 8 of their Razzie awards, which are like the Oscars but for the "worsts" of the year, so they're a little more fun.
Breaking Dawn was nominated for:
•Worst Picture
•Worst Screenplay
•Worst Prequel, Remake, Rip-Off, or Sequel
•Worst Director
•Worst Screen Ensemble
•Worst Actor: Taylor Lautner
•Worst Actress: Kristen Stewart
•Worst Screen Couple
Do you think Breaking Dawn deserves the nominations?
Breaking Dawn may have been a smash hit with Twihards all over the world, but the Golden Raspberry foundation was impressed for a different reason.
They've nominated the flick for 8 of their Razzie awards, which are like the Oscars but for the "worsts" of the year, so they're a little more fun.
Breaking Dawn was nominated for:
•Worst Picture
•Worst Screenplay
•Worst Prequel, Remake, Rip-Off, or Sequel
•Worst Director
•Worst Screen Ensemble
•Worst Actor: Taylor Lautner
•Worst Actress: Kristen Stewart
•Worst Screen Couple
Do you think Breaking Dawn deserves the nominations?
They've nominated the flick for 8 of their Razzie awards, which are like the Oscars but for the "worsts" of the year, so they're a little more fun.
Breaking Dawn was nominated for:
•Worst Picture
•Worst Screenplay
•Worst Prequel, Remake, Rip-Off, or Sequel
•Worst Director
•Worst Screen Ensemble
•Worst Actor: Taylor Lautner
•Worst Actress: Kristen Stewart
•Worst Screen Couple
Do you think Breaking Dawn deserves the nominations?
All right guys, as you all have probably noticed my last chapter was a bit of a dozer, but don't worry my next chapter will be right. And just incase that you have not figured it out yet. Most was the chapter is correct except for the bit about going into the car. That bit will be coming up in the next chapter. Also don't be afraid to give me any advice on how I can make my writing Better any critasim is welcome.
On another note this whole story will only be bell as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
Love flynnismine
On another note this whole story will only be bell as ok and I will be doing other stories that will be like this one but indifferent povs
SOS
Love flynnismine
Looking Nessie in the face at the airport was harder than a challenge I went through as a wolf.
"Promise you won't forget me?" My voice was kind of shallow and.... I couldn't describe it.
"Never." The defiance in her voice was comforting.
"Even though you'll be in France." France. Bloody miles away.
"Jake, don't do this to me. Rosalie did my make up, and I like it. And anyway, I'll only be away for a few weeks. It'll go very quick." if I continue building the house, then yes. Bt that s unlikely.
"I'll miss you."
"Me too."
I roped an arm round Nessie for a last hug. Then, with her eyes misted over, she left. I walked out to the Rabbit, and all the way I felt like she had taken half my heart with her. Renesmee, come back, I silently wished as I started up the old Rabbit. I knew that, for 3 weeks, she would drip into my mind like a leaky faucet. Splash, splash, sploosh. Renesmee, Renesmee, Nessie.
"Promise you won't forget me?" My voice was kind of shallow and.... I couldn't describe it.
"Never." The defiance in her voice was comforting.
"Even though you'll be in France." France. Bloody miles away.
"Jake, don't do this to me. Rosalie did my make up, and I like it. And anyway, I'll only be away for a few weeks. It'll go very quick." if I continue building the house, then yes. Bt that s unlikely.
"I'll miss you."
"Me too."
I roped an arm round Nessie for a last hug. Then, with her eyes misted over, she left. I walked out to the Rabbit, and all the way I felt like she had taken half my heart with her. Renesmee, come back, I silently wished as I started up the old Rabbit. I knew that, for 3 weeks, she would drip into my mind like a leaky faucet. Splash, splash, sploosh. Renesmee, Renesmee, Nessie.
